Reviews For A Second Beginning
Name: sweet gurl reviewed Chapter 6 on Jan 05, 2016 11:32 pm
Hi! Just hoping this review finds you happy and healthy and just to tell you that I cannot wait for a new chapter! I really, really can't! :O

Author's Response: Hello, hello! I am well indeed, thank you for checking up on me! The new chapter was submitted tonight and I'm hoping to get back to more regular updates now that the holiday season is over. I hope you will enjoy it! // S.
Name: cherryredxx reviewed Chapter 6 on Nov 27, 2015 08:29 am
I'm very much enjoying this story. So far it seems to be very touching and lighthearted, and I really appreciate that. Hope for an update soon :)

Author's Response: I'm very glad to hear you're enjoying - and that you find it touching and lighthearted which is what I am going for! Hope you will keep liking it!
Name: DwellingInDreams reviewed Chapter 6 on Nov 24, 2015 08:00 am
Another excellent chapter! There was nothing in this chapter that I didn't like, so if I don't specifically mention something, it doesn't mean it was bad. I just don't want my review to be as long as the chapter! ;) I like the mingling together of silly and serious in this chapter. The texting was sweet and funny. I love how happy Draco and Ginny are with each other. But they aren't in a bubble - real life still happens; and they are helping each other through it. I look forward to reading more as they continue to move towards their happy ending. :)

Author's Response: Please do write me a six thousand word review whenever you wish! ;) Though I lean towards fluffy in my writing they have to have SOME drama and in my view I think real life probably poses the greatest danger to romantic love, to be honest! Unless you're Ginny and Draco who seem to be dealing with it admirably well. Thank you for your kind encouragement!
Name: mickblake reviewed Chapter 6 on Nov 23, 2015 06:50 pm
Thank you for another outstanding chapter. I'm beginning to worry about the murdered children and who's doing it and why. It makes sense why Ginny doesn't leave James one. Why isn't Draco concerned? On the other hand, Harry really shows how he cares about James, but he's not a priority.
I'm looking forward to the date and am convinced these two are meant for each other. I'm.finding it strange the mixture of muggle and magic, but it works and I like it!

Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I don't think anyone really knows what Harry does at work but I needed to convey he's not giving up on his family for nothing! Hopefully he'll work on catching the murderer behind the scenes. I do think Harry loves and really cares for James, he's just torn in two directions and the good of the many has outweighed his own happiness. The mix of muggle and magic is purely for my own enjoyment - I'm glad you think it works :) I'm really happy to hear you're still enjoying!
Name: trout reviewed Chapter 6 on Nov 23, 2015 02:17 pm
:) :)

Author's Response: XD XD
Name: sweet gurl reviewed Chapter 6 on Nov 23, 2015 01:16 am
Is this chapter longer? Cause it feels longer and that's great! I really liked this one! everything is developing naturally and your characterization is on point.
There was only one spot where I had to go back and re read a bit a couple times before it made sense to me and that was James' favourite class bit when she's asking Draco, I don't think it's too clear when she does but it isn't too bad. There was also a weird computer glitchy thing (idk what they're called :P) that probably wasn't your fault, and it was in about three places I think and it looked like this r11. Other than that this chapter was perfect :) also thank you for taking the time to answer reviews.. Not very many people take the time to do it anymore a it's greatly appreciated :)

Author's Response: It was indeed longer! No idea what the r11 may have come from...I upload in .html here which I rarely do so that may be why - I hope there aren't any little pesky additions in this one! Thank you for pointing out the confusing bit, I'll have a think if I can make it more easily readable. I am always really happy to hear from anyone who reads my stuff so to take a second to say thanks is a small price to hear someone likes it for me! //S.
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