Name: DwellingInDreams reviewed
Chapter 9 on Mar 13, 2016 08:27 pm
Delightful chapter! I've been waiting for more James in the story. :)
Author's Response: I'm pleased you like James, my little awkward teenage muffin XD Thank you for letting me know you like it, it means a lot! Hope you will keep enjoying!
Name: sweet gurl reviewed
Chapter 9 on Mar 05, 2016 02:20 am
I've read this chapter about three or four times through now I believe I just can't get enough but just now got to review. You really put attention to every tiny detail didn't you? It just all feels so real!! The struggle these two boys are going through is so much perfect teen angst and their feelings are similar yet so different at the same time reflecting their personalities! I'm glad you included teddy here because he seems to be the most important male figure in James' life and Draco knows that. I'm looking forward to a conversation between Score and James because I'm really curious about Score's life at school which seems to be a bit of a hard time for him and how both him and James are going to adjust to their relationship. Oh and also more on how Score is taking to Ginny cause it's heartbreaking and fascinating at the same time. Also more Draco and Ginny cause that just keeps getting better an better but the reason I'm obsessed with this story is because you didn't write the story to revolve around them but to include in a very realistic way the joining of their two worlds. Very well done! Keep it up!! x.
Author's Response: I do belive you've read it more times than me! (I'm a poor editor!) I'm glad you liked the level of detail, I suppose I'm like that as I feel reading should be almost like watching a movie - but better! Score and James will definitely have their moment but there is at least some insight into what Score is feeling in the upcoming chapter. There will ALWAYS be more Draco and Ginny, my friend, I'm not letting them ride off into the sunset quite yet...I will keep it up and thank you very much for taking the time to leave a long, thoughtful review, it makes it really fun to write when I hear you're liking it. xx // S.
Name: SniperTeamTango reviewed
Chapter 9 on Mar 02, 2016 08:10 pm
Absolutely phenomenal. I honestly cannot believe how real that all felt. The level of detail in the thought processes is inspiring.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you. I am bowing in my chair. I'm ecstatic you like it and that you're finding the thoughts detailed - I hope they're also easy to follow! // S.
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed
Chapter 9 on Mar 01, 2016 01:13 pm
Ohhhh, you're killing me! Such a beautiful chapter!
I'm so glad that this happened, that they were able to get along and the feelings that James was going through the whole evening. I'm so happy that the chapter ended like this. Beautiful! xx
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so happy you're enjoying. It was an important chapter and I wanted to get it right! Hope you will keep liking it as it grows!
Name: PlutoniumBunny reviewed
Chapter 9 on Mar 01, 2016 10:59 am
I´m awful at reviewing, but I have to say it, this was brilliant. I am amazed by the way you are shaping each character with their own dialogue style and inner thoughts, it's just genious. And I love, love love your Draco here.
Can't wait to read more; this is becoming a GREAT story. Congrats!!!!
Author's Response: Your review works great for me ;) I'm glad you see them as separate, they each sort of speak in my head when I write them (I'm not crazy, I promise). Draco is dreamy, I like when he talks in my head the best - him or maybe Blaise...So glad you like it!
Name: mickblake reviewed
Chapter 9 on Feb 29, 2016 01:41 pm
Thanks for this great update. I loved the man night and how despite his best effort James is unable to dislike Draco. It made my day! I love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you for sticking with me and the story, it's great to hear from you every time! I think James is a lot more fond of Draco than he likes to admit...So glad you're enjoying, I hope you'll like the next instalment // S.