Reviews For A Second Beginning
Name: mickblake reviewed Chapter 11 on Apr 12, 2016 12:25 pm
My favorite chapter so far and that's saying something as I have loved them all. Where to start.....I really liked how Score opened James eyes to the reality of his mom's happiness. He seems a little more mature than James and definitely more realistic but the time may come when Score has to share his Dad with James and we will see! The description of Blaise and a hilarious stuffed raccoon named Burrito was just too much. I loved it. Molly's reaction to Draco was priceless but I think it says a lot that she referred to him as Narcissa Blacks son and not Lucius Malfoys son. That means there is hope for Draco being accepted. Finally I liked the cliffhanger of Harry asking who and being interrupted at that moment...but maybe he will find in the Daily Prophet! Can't wait to hear about dinner at the Weasleys!

Author's Response: It's one of my favorites too :P Score is the more mature one, definitely, James has quite a bit of growing up to do! Blaise and Burrito are adorable, I like them both. Blaise may have a slight advantage in my heart. I think perhaps Narcissa was a pain as well, maybe more to another girl than she would have been to Arthur, but that's just my fan theory! And indeed, the press found out and the cat is out of the bag! Weasley galore next time, hope you're prepared! Thank you so much for your kind comments, I really appreciate it! //S.
Name: ginatoms reviewed Chapter 11 on Apr 12, 2016 08:35 am
"Bring him Saturday" made me squeal with delight.
Having a full onLrs Weasley appearance was amazing. I loved this chapter so much.
I cannot wait for the Weasley get together!

Author's Response: Weasleys are coming, next chapter they will all be there, en masse! I'm so glad you enjoyed and thank you for reviewing, it always makes my day!
Name: Desertisle reviewed Chapter 11 on Apr 11, 2016 10:02 pm
Looking forward to the family's reaction. Love the name of the baby. Thanks for writing it.

Author's Response: I'm pleased to hear you like Xander's very long name! Family is coming up, I hope you're ready! Thank you for taking the time to review!
Name: drakebell reviewed Chapter 11 on Apr 11, 2016 12:27 am
OKAAAAY I CAN'T WAIT TILL SATURDAY!!!!! Gaaaah it's time for Draco to meet the Weasleys!!!

And that green silk suit girl! Omg is she coming back?! But why?! So many cliffhangers there, I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Thank you for the fast update too

Author's Response: Green silk lady certainly made a splash with that headline! Weasleys will appear in the next chapter, promise! Thank you so much for reviewing!
Name: SniperTeamTango reviewed Chapter 11 on Apr 10, 2016 08:12 pm
Oh god...
Oh GOD...

Thats so not gonna go well.

Author's Response: Mohahahahaha
Name: idreamofdraco reviewed Chapter 11 on Apr 10, 2016 07:49 pm
//Reaching the hall on the upper floor, Draco pushed Blaise down on an armchair before seating himself opposite in an alcove where a stuffed raccoon wearing a tiara resided on a shelf above their heads. The tiara was a Zabini heirloom, three hundred years old and made from the finest goblin wrought silver and dragon egg emeralds. It had been gifted to Luna by Mrs. Zabini on her wedding day and Luna had thanked her and told her it was perfect for Burrito. Confused, Mrs. Zabini had not enquired further, but if she had, she would have found out that Burrito was the name of the raccoon.//

This seriously has to be the best paragraph I have ever read in a fan fic. The. Best. I love Luna so much. I love what you've done with her in this story. I generally really like Blaise and Luna together, but the way you've written their relationship is just so perfect. And, as always, your dialogue, especially Blaise's in this chapter, is on point and feels so real. It's funny, it's heart-breaking, it's witty. Ahhh!! I don't know how you do it!

Author's Response: Wow, that is some overwhelming praise, thank you! I'm a Luna fan as well so I try and keep her a little quirky :) Very glad you like the dialogue as my stories tend to be a bit conversation heavy! Thank you again for very sweet words, I am over the moon you like it! //S.
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