Reviews For The Dating Charade
Name: prilly1918 reviewed Ten: A Pool Party (Part One) on Apr 07, 2016 04:42 pm
How could you do this?!!! You make us take a peek at Draco in swimwear at just the end of the chapter, it's killing me!

Author's Response: Hehehehehe. >:D Just wait until the next one. :)))))))))
Name: Abatemarca reviewed Ten: A Pool Party (Part One) on Apr 03, 2016 06:10 am
I'm so glad that you updated. This story is amazing. I read it during Winter Fic Exchange, but I think that this version is even better than the former. It's so good to read such fantastic Ginny/Draco's story. I'm so going to wait for the next chapter and second part of pool party.

Author's Response: I agree, this version is definitely better than the version I submitted for the exchange. n_n I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Name: drakebell reviewed Ten: A Pool Party (Part One) on Apr 02, 2016 10:49 pm
GAHHHH AN UPDATE FINALLY! (Okay I was excited and edgy on reading the next chapter lol) I like how the story develops, and how the "sexual tension" between them is hanging by a loose thread but the intensity is still there while we keep on waiting for the thread to break lol!!!

Anddddd pool party is a cool way to get them together in my perspective so plus plus points!!! Love it!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter!! For the pool party, I realized that people are always meeting for drinks or food, so I was trying to come up with a new/unique way for these characters to hang out that didn't involve a pub/bar, a restaurant, or a dinner table. I'm glad you like the pool party idea! Thanks for reading and reviewing! n_n
Name: DwellingInDreams reviewed Ten: A Pool Party (Part One) on Apr 02, 2016 02:59 pm
I enjoyed this chapter. I love when they tease each other. The sexual tension - GAH! And their concern for each other is so sweet. I'm glad Ginny was able to find a friend in Daphne, and not have to fend for herself completely at the party. Hoping for more soon! :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter!! I'm also hoping for more soon, so let's both keep our fingers crossed that I can churn out the next chapter faster (though it's kind of hard to type with my fingers crossed....) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Name: Lady Mischief reviewed Ten: A Pool Party (Part One) on Apr 02, 2016 09:09 am
I definitely like this chapter and I hope that Ginny will finally tell Draco about the conference with Junker. She cannot be subjected to that pervert without some protection.

Author's Response: Agreed!!! We'll see what happens though.... I'm glad you liked the chapter and thank you for reviewing! n_n
Name: SniperTeamTango reviewed Ten: A Pool Party (Part One) on Apr 01, 2016 09:14 pm
Ah this deliciousness is back. I honestly love the slow building flame between them. Dreading the junker trip though, you've done a great job with the character though as Im sure many asides from me have skin crawling from it.

Addtl: Dont worry, my kind is endlessly confused as to why women are comfortable letting us see them in bathing suits similar to their underwear, but not actually in their underwear.

Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: You're welcome, STT!! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! Some women are more comfortable revealing their bodies in bathing suits but not their underwear because society says one is okay and the other isn't. Still doesn't make sense though. Women are just as confused as to why there's a difference between the two. ¯_(ツ)_/¯
Name: mickblake reviewed Ten: A Pool Party (Part One) on Apr 01, 2016 06:15 pm
I really like this story. I'm wondering if these two will ever be able to move forward with the mutual attraction! Very good description of the Greengrass home and the pool party. It's great reading something new and different.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it!!! I don't think it would be a spoiler to say that ~eventually~ Draco and Ginny will be on the same page. How soon will that be? I can't say. ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Name: evie-chan reviewed Nine: A Pathetic Sandwich on Feb 28, 2016 02:03 am
I stumbled on your story after a long hiatus from fic-reading, read all nine chapters in two days, and now can't wait for the next one :D

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! And welcome back to fic-reading. n_n Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Name: janelove reviewed Nine: A Pathetic Sandwich on Feb 25, 2016 04:41 pm
Great story can't wait for more! Plus I really loved how you made Draco the virgin, besides the usual Ginny ;)

Author's Response: In my opinion, we need more virgin Draco stories!! I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. n_n
Name: PlutoniumBunny reviewed One: A Tiny Problem on Feb 23, 2016 06:42 am
yaaaaay another one!!!! thank youuuuu

Author's Response: You're welcome!! Thank YOU for reading and reviewing!
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed Nine: A Pathetic Sandwich on Feb 22, 2016 01:27 pm
Gods I miss this story. Looking forward to your next update, whenever that is, don't kill yourself over it :) xx

Author's Response: I won't! I'll certainly take my time; I just feel guilty about it, is all. ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Name: CindyLu reviewed Nine: A Pathetic Sandwich on Feb 22, 2016 12:14 am
I feel like a starving man, yet I'm only getting breadcrumbs. Ginny never even got to talk to Draco about what she really wanted him to know (I'm assuming the Junker business). Also, I love that he's a virgin ;)

Author's Response: No, she certainly didn't... I wonder how her omission of the subject of Junker will come into play in future chapters...? ;) I'm a fan of Draco as the Slytherin Sex God, don't get me wrong, but let's be real here. I think he's more likely to be a virgin than a player. This may be the first time his virginity is brought up in this story, but it won't be the last! Thank you for reading/reviewing!!
Name: SniperTeamTango reviewed Nine: A Pathetic Sandwich on Feb 21, 2016 08:43 pm
Just keep the well written content coming IDOD, personally, I don't care how long it takes as long as its this good. As a guy, I 100% get his mental state, this was honestly some of the realest stuff.

Author's Response: Thank you, STT!! A good bit of Draco's feelings/thoughts about himself in this chapter definitely stem from my own feelings about my life/myself, so I'm glad he's still relatable as a man to other men. Feminism is an inspiration for this story, and one of the things I wanted to tackle was this issue of toxic masculinity as well. I'm glad you liked the chapter! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review. :)
Name: balencestochexi reviewed Eight: A Determined Ghost on Jan 09, 2016 06:59 am
Can't wait for next month!

Author's Response: :) :) :)
Name: xMiniCee reviewed One: A Tiny Problem on Dec 28, 2015 10:16 pm
Today I decided to dabble back into some D/G fic again and yours was the first story that I stumbled upon! I read all 8 chapters in one sitting and I can't wait for more. I love the humorous bits and also the smutty bits. ;) I'm sad that there wont be an update until February, but I'm sure it'll be worth it!

Author's Response: I'm really excited about the things to come, so I hope it will be worth the wait! I'm flattered that mine was the first story you read upon your return, and I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for reading! n_n
Name: prilly1918 reviewed Eight: A Determined Ghost on Dec 10, 2015 12:23 am
This update has taken me out of my fic-reading slump! Well damn, how will Ginny get out of that trip with Junker? I'm starting to hate him as much as I hate Umbridge.

Author's Response: Yay! I've been in a fic-reading slump for years (LOL), so I'm glad you've snapped out of yours! It's not fun. :( Ooooh, Junker has reached Umbridge-level of evil and hatred?? That's an amazing compliment. We'll just have to see what happens as far as the conference goes. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Name: mickblake reviewed Eight: A Determined Ghost on Dec 07, 2015 09:33 pm
Thank you for the update. While I missed interaction with Ginny and Draco it was nice getting to know Collin better and getting a sense of how he's coping in the afterlife. I think you've done a great job of illustrating how dangerous Junker is and how GInny may be in over her head. I can't wait until that guy gets what he has coming to him! I will look forward to your next update and really appreciate that you're busy and yet still find time for your fans!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you! I don't even know how to respond to such a nice review. ;o; But, seriously, thank you for reading and for supporting the story! I'd still be writing TDC even if no one was reading it, but knowing that there are people who like it and are waiting for updates certainly motivates and inspires me. I can't wait to share the rest of story (when I write it, lol)!
Name: CrimsonQuill reviewed Eight: A Determined Ghost on Dec 06, 2015 05:41 am
What an evil, evil way for you to leave the story!! I can't believe the next update will be on February; I am dying to see how Junker will get on Draco's nerve this time. Watch out!! Jealous/protective Draco will be arriving soon. *evil laugh* If this doesn't make Draco admit his feelings for Ginny, even just to himself, I'd punch him. Lol.

Happy Holidays and have a Happy New Year!! Looking forward to your future fics and next update. May you enjoy the holiday break and have plenty of time to rest and write and just be merry! Yay! See you again soon. x

Author's Response: I know, I know. Originally Ginny's part was going to go into chapter 9 somewhere, but I was feeling particularly evil, so I figured I'd introduce the conference sooner. >:D Thank you so much for the holiday wishes!! I hope you have a happy holiday as well!!
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Eight: A Determined Ghost on Dec 04, 2015 02:42 pm
I had read TDC when it was originally posted for the fest/exchange but I didn't realize more things were added. I just had to catch up today only to find out that you won't be updating until February. Gah!!!

Anyways, I'm loving this story so much right now. Draco and Ginny are ace. Pansy and Theo are stars, especially Pansy. I love how adorable Colin is as a ghost. The sexytimes are magnificent and I can't wait to see how you make D&G come to terms with their love. Awesome story. Love the additions and I can't wait for the update. Have a happy holiday and a safe trip.

Author's Response: Ahhh, I'm so glad you're reading the story again! There was so much I wanted to include in TDC when I originally wrote it for the exchange, but I just couldn't get it all in. So I'm excited to be expanding the story now! (Especially because I ALWAYS say I'm going to heavily edit/expand my exchange fics, and I usually never do.) Thank you so much for rereading and reviewing! I hope you have a happy holiday as well! n_n
Name: Cassiopeia reviewed Eight: A Determined Ghost on Dec 03, 2015 04:40 pm
I'm really enjoying this story. I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad! Thanks so much for reading! n_n
Name: Lady Mischief reviewed Eight: A Determined Ghost on Dec 03, 2015 06:01 am
I really am enjoying this story. The suspense of Draco and Ginny getting together increases each chapter. Jason Junker is a character readers can hate with ease. I hope Ginny finds a way to have Draco accompany her on the conference. It would serve Junker right for tricking her.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it! We'll just have to see what happens at the conference~
Name: drakebell reviewed Eight: A Determined Ghost on Dec 02, 2015 05:53 pm
Finally!!! I've been waiting for the next chapter for ages (okay this is exaggerated but I really love this story) so thank you for posting!

Argh I hate Junker for being so manipulative but I hope there will be "surprises" that await us for the next chapters! Im missing the Draco and Ginny interaction though :(

Enjoy your trip and we'll definitely wait for the next chapter to come in Feb!

Author's Response: You're welcome! And don't worry! The Draco/Ginny interaction everyone's been waiting for will be in the next chapter. Your patience will be rewarded. n_n Thanks for the well wishes! I'm a bit nervous about my trip, but I'm super excited to visit the land of Harry Potter's birth!!
Name: Cara reviewed Eight: A Determined Ghost on Dec 02, 2015 02:46 pm
Cannot wait for February! And for our favourite pair to interact again. Let's hope Ginny finds a way to bring Draco with her to the conference!
As always a very well-written chapter! -Cara

Author's Response: We'll just have to see what happens~ >:D Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
Name: Rashonda reviewed Seven: A Delicate Conversation on Nov 25, 2015 09:24 pm
I like your Pansy, she's cautious of Ginny and protective over Draco.

Author's Response: I'm so glad everyone seems to like her! In this story, her bark is definitely worse than her bite. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Name: SignyMalfoy reviewed One: A Tiny Problem on Nov 14, 2015 12:22 pm
I love this story so far! Can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thanks so much for reading! n_n
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