Name: Anise reviewed Day Two on Jun 08, 2017 05:07 pm

Taking a break from studying to leave a review, FINALLY!! It's been pretty crazy, but this is what I get for going back to school... ;) You're doing such a great job of building tension here. The reader really feels Ginny's fear, confusion, determination, and knowledge that somehow, somewhere, something doesn't quite seem right. At the end of the chapter, we find out what that something might be... but of course, we don't know how or why this could be the case. Draco's character is perfect here, which makes it work. It's a great mystery, and looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I was really stressed about writing Draco and Ginny as in-character as possible, so I'm glad you're enjoying them. And good luck with studying!