Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 18 on Jun 05, 2021 10:18 pm
Ah! I was right!
Name: boldgray reviewed
Chapter 18 on May 17, 2020 11:10 pm
I cannot wait for the next chapter! Thanks for for the wonderful story so far
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Name: sweet gurl reviewed
Chapter 18 on May 17, 2020 03:01 am
Oh I just read your review response to the last chapter! I think you would write the “oh shit” moment when Draco finds out he got Ginny pregnant perfectly and I would LOVE to read that but I agree that now it’s not the best time for them.
But later... later is good 👀👀 lol 😂
Name: sweet gurl reviewed
Chapter 18 on May 17, 2020 02:55 am
Very good chapter! I think the characterization was spot on for your characters. I think the argument shows growth within their relationship.. in other fights they’ve both just stormed off and there had been finality in each fight, but with this one things that needed to be said and heard were addressed and even though Draco did leave it felt much more like a time out instead of a full I’m out moment.
I would like to see Ginny confront Ron. I can totally see her bursting back in the kitchen and just pushing him back and yelling at him just taking out all that aggression she has bottled up on the meddling man. I think it would be fun to have someone pull her off him. Have Ron not get away with it for once 😂
And I liked that Draco found common ground with Percy! That was an unexpected surprise I’ve never seen before in any other fic! And your Fleur and the other in-laws are hilarious.
I’m loving and super appreciative of the updates! Thank you! Can’t wait for the next one 😊
Author's Response: YESSS!!! I'm so so glad that you noticed the difference between this fight and their previous fights. It means I did an okay job of writing the chapter, because I did not want this one to have an air of finality... Oh come now, you don't want to see Ginny confronting Ron. That Clash of the Angry Weasleys is best left to imagination lol!
I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Your reviews mean the world to me, so thank you! <3
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
Chapter 18 on May 16, 2020 05:31 pm
This is definitely one of the stories that I look forward to the most. Loving every bit of it. I think everyone was true to form in this chapter, even if it made things a bit worse before it can get better. Ron really needs to practise keeping his mouth shut, or at least know time and place reading the room.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Yes well, I don't see Ron 'holding back' anything when it comes to Draco. Can't really blame him, to be honest, what with all their ugly history. But he also doesn't see that Draco has changed. Hmm, maybe I should do something about that... or not! ;)