Name: Anise reviewed
Chapter 23 on Jun 19, 2021 05:24 pm
So Draco read the fic to me through this chapter... oh, okay, it's @Voice, but I really think they sampled Draco's voice and then used that. Such a cool experience. ;) Anyway, it's amazing, as you know! The way this narrative is put together in all its details just works so, so well. Draco's characterization in particular is just incredible. The reader understands why he hasn't told Ginny the details about his meetings with Dolohov, but it's clear that it will come back to bite him, and I've been predicting for a while now that it will come in the form of an attack on Ginny (and look what happened, and I'm psychic, and it's too bad this ability can't be used to win Powerball. ;) I also have to give you points because, well, you placed the date when Harry and Ginny began a physical relationship exactly where I've always thought it would be-- a few weeks or months after the end of the battle. There are some great authors and fics that place it earlier (if it has to exist at all, ugh,) but it never seemed believable that Harry and Ginny would have started to really get intimate until after the crisis was over (again, if they have to do it at all! But in this story, I agree that it was a necessary part of the setup.) If Draco was going to have that type of relationship with anyone at Hogwarts, I also totally agree that it would have been Pansy. (Anisecanon gives him a very different scenario, but every one of these separate alternate universes where each D/G fic is reality has different rules. Yes, they DO exist... ) Anyway, moving on to Chap 24! :)
Name: Nickii reviewed
Chapter 23 on Jul 05, 2020 10:24 pm
You are a mean person that writes mean cliffhangers. The only way to convince me otherwise is to update very fast!
Author's Response: Hahahaha well I have posted the next chapter. Am I a mean person or am I a mean person? Why don't you tell me after you've read it?!
Thank you so much for your support by the way! :D
Name: bigreader reviewed
Chapter 23 on Jul 04, 2020 05:32 am
The suspense! I love the way this cliffhanger ended. The chaos and confusion written beautifully. I have so many questions! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it!
Name: misslimelight reviewed
Chapter 23 on Jul 03, 2020 11:31 am
😧 I was not ready for that! Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Sorry! But it had to be done. I hope you enjoy what's coming next. Thank you for the review! :D
Author's Response: Sorry! But it had to be done. I hope you enjoy what's coming next. Thank you for the review! :D
Name: Lilyluna1103 reviewed
Chapter 23 on Jul 03, 2020 07:28 am
Ahhhhhhhh I have a love/hate relationship when I see you update! I love it but also hate that I have to wait again until the next chapter! And on this kind of cliff hanger! Please please please don't leave your fans on the edge of their seats for long. :)
Author's Response: Hahahaha thank you so much for reviewing. I'm happy you're enjoying the story so far. I hope you like what's coming up too! Can't wait to hear what you think! :D