Reviews For Ashen
Name: quirky_vixen reviewed Playing Dirty on Jun 04, 2021 01:03 pm
The plot thickens! I am always waiting for the next chapter. This story is fascinating and has me on my toes. That moment between them was so fucking hot! Also, poor Ginny and her Weasley fertility, lol! I feel pity yet amusement. :D

Author's Response: hahahahahahaha, it was there all the time! Ginny said herself! The heat, her lethargy, her sickness. Poor ginny, she doesn't seem to understand the concept of family planning, a fatal mistake when you're a Weasley, haha Thank you so much for your comment! Your enthusiasm is contagious, I'm very happy. See ya soon
Name: NTA123 reviewed Playing Dirty on Jun 01, 2021 06:37 am
I somehow knew she would get preggo! And I think this pregnancy will be different from her first one. Cuz the FATHER is there.
It will give them a lot of scope to bond!

Author's Response: hahaha, I tried to surprise you but you threw me a curve ball here! Damn! =P Yes, they need this little help to bond. (when Ginny decides to tell him the truth, that is). I've always imagined Draco and Ginny's relationship that way, they take two steps forward, then one step back. The pregnancy will force them to cooperate, to help each other. As always, thank you for your lovely comments. They are very dear to me. See ya very soon
Name: NTA123 reviewed Playing Dirty on Jun 01, 2021 06:34 am
Okay what was I saying?
Oh yes! Mwahahahahahahah!!!
Good news for the Malfoys XD
The funny thing is Ginny did not take any precautions! She would have never think of having to carry Malfoy's baby given EVERYTHING. And the irony is she is an ace potion master!
It is clever and funny.

Author's Response: Oh, you're absolutely correct! Poor Ginny should've known better, being that good at potions like she is. This kind of thing just needs one chance to happen and well... Now she has a problem. I'm so excited to keep writing about how she'll react. Ginny is very human and compassionate, I love her so much
Name: NTA123 reviewed Playing Dirty on Jun 01, 2021 06:29 am
Excuse me...
I have decided I will not talk about anyone of the trasho...I mean 'trio' till Ginny learns their bullshit...Sorry, I mean secret.

Author's Response: hahahahaha, it's only fair! Sometimes I don't feel like writing about them as well, pff! Let's hope Ginny doesn't get (too) mad at them when she learns their bullshit ... sorry, secret =P
Name: quirky_vixen reviewed Occlumency on May 15, 2021 11:21 am
Wow! What a thrilling chapter! The dance between Draco and Ginny is everything and I am really looking forward to their lessons together.
Also, what a clever plot twist! I never saw that coming at all! Eagerly awaiting the next chapter :D

Author's Response: hello, dear! Thank you for your words, you're so supportive! I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far! Yes! I've started to write their next lessons! It's soooo fun. Your wait will come to an end soon since I'm already editing the next chapter. Thank you so much, really
Name: NTA123 reviewed Occlumency on May 13, 2021 12:25 pm
Btw Draco likes feet? Oh...okay...
*no kink shaming here though.*

Author's Response: Who would have guessed that Draco would've a special fondness for the feet section on OnlyFans, hahaha One more time, tahnk you for your time and your disposition to share your thoughts. They are very dear to me. Hope you can be a little happier with the fact that the next chapter is already coming See ya soon, my dear
Name: NTA123 reviewed Occlumency on May 13, 2021 12:24 pm
The chemistry is shifting between our most favourite couple.
I want Draco and James to interact more. Their meetings are cute and funny in a weird way XD

* Personal wish: I want James to support Draco or like him more, or just want him as his dad when Harry will be back which he'll be obviously. (from whichever hell-hole he is in).

Author's Response: Indeed, it is! Things are warming up! They started to acknowledge their connection, even it's solely based on lust right now. (or so they think) How could I deny a wish of yours? There will be more interactions between Draco and James, I promise. Maybe it will take a little longer because I need to set up a new development (you'll see soon in the next chapter)
Name: NTA123 reviewed Occlumency on May 13, 2021 12:18 pm
I am sorry for the last review.
They just only had to tell Ginny and made the strongest vow. That's it. I mean they are not like regular humans! They would be compelled to keep it a secret.

Author's Response: No reason to be sorry, my dear. I love your comments. In my mind, the reason they didn't tell Ginny anything isn't linked to the fact that she wouldn't have kept the secret Harry was alive. I'm pretty sure she would, as Ginny is extremely reliable and loyal. I think Ron and Hermione's decision has more to do with the fact that they know - as we do - that Ginny would wait for Harry as long as it was necessary. And what chance of happiness and safety would she have, being stuck with someone who might never wake up again? Certainly, it wasn't their decision to make and they were extremely pretentious and sneaky, like good martyrs they are. But, when they weren't in the books, right? Especially Ron (and Harry himself)
Name: NTA123 reviewed Occlumency on May 13, 2021 12:16 pm
NO ONE has the right to judge Ginny. Not her family, her friends, the good side, ANYONE.
Ron is a great friend but he has failed as a brother and an uncle.
No matter how bad things are, just telling Ginny that Harry is alive, would have been okay.
No excuse here!
Even as a writer if you want to present a side for the Trio, I will not agree with you.
I am officially done with the trio.

Author's Response: I totally understand you, I swear. And that was my intention, to show the golden trio is also formed by humans and that they will make mistakes and screw things up. But don't be upset. Think that it was Ron and Hermione's actions (and later Harry's, I suppose) that will make Ginny get even closer to Draco. And you're right too! No one has the right to judge Ginny! Maybe Draco, who was her victim, but she did her best with the information she had at the time.
Name: NTA123 reviewed Occlumency on May 13, 2021 12:12 pm

Author's Response: I love your reactions, haha, I really do.

Author's Response: I love your reactions, haha, I really do.
Name: quirky_vixen reviewed Life Goes On on Apr 25, 2021 12:45 pm
Wow, some cold war indeed. I can't admire your brilliant mind and writing enough. Classic DxG sparring and the sexual tension is off the charts. Whew! So very clever this game of chess between them is.
eagerly awaiting the next chapter

Author's Response: I think the best part of DG dynamic is precisely their banter and sexual tension! I had a lot of fun writing it! I'm glad you liked as well. And a little spoiler: we'll have more of that next chapter! As usual, thank you for you comment. It means a lot to me. cheers!
Name: quirky_vixen reviewed Honeymoon on Apr 25, 2021 12:43 pm
This left me breathless. Very well written and so so them in this situation. Perfectly done. Can't wait to see their dynamic after this.
What a delicious story!

Author's Response: ohhh, you're so sweet! Thank you so much! I always intend to make them as canon as possible. The fact you think I could do it, at least a little bit, makes me sooo happy! Thank yoU!
Name: NTA123 reviewed Cold War on Apr 24, 2021 07:51 am
You used the word "spawn"!!
XD Thanks!
These two jave a long way to get even decent with each other.
Poor James. That was really horrible. Though I think it will be necessary in the future.
I actually cannot guess what will happen in the next chapters.
And it's a GREAT feeling tbh

Author's Response: Yes, I did use it haha. Maybe I should pay you copyrights. =P You're right, there's a loooong way ahead of them. But hopefully, it will be fun to accompany their journey. Hope you can continue with this great feeling! Thank you so much for your words. It's always a pleasure.
Name: NTA123 reviewed Honeymoon on Apr 04, 2021 10:31 pm
Ginny is moving in with Draco, right?

Author's Response: Ohoh, not yet. Remember, that was one of Draco's terms. It wouldn't make much sense for him to give up on it so soon! Bloody stubborn that he is! Stay with me, my dear. Soon you'll have your move.
Name: NTA123 reviewed Honeymoon on Apr 04, 2021 10:30 pm
Do not worry! It is really tasteful!
I really loved that you have included both povs and we get to know what is going on in their minds simultaneously. It is awesome.

Author's Response: Oh God, thank you! I'm really relieved to hear that. The good thing about the omniscient narrator is that it lets us know what’s going on inside the heads of all the characters. Kind of lazy of me, I don't deny it, but a lot more fun to write haha Thank you for your constant presence. It's very sweet!
Name: NTA123 reviewed The Two Shall Become One Flesh on Mar 21, 2021 07:54 pm
Shortest chapter as in with the amount of content in it.
Their marriage is unique like them. The part Draco replies back with the Official!! I actually laughed out loud.
They are gonna consummate, right? If you are writing it, it will be good. I remember your one shot. It was classy and not too graphic. I hope this one will be as well, if you plan to write it! Thank you b25;b25;b25;

Author's Response: Funny thing, you were not the first one to mention the fact that this chapter is shorter. I thought it was curious since this story has 14 chapter and 6 of then are shorter than this one hahaha. Maybe because there are only two major scenes, indeed. Our brain is amusing haha. Yes, there will be the consummation in the next chapter. You know me already, I really dont feel confortable writing that kind of scene! But I gave it my best and I tried not to be very graphic. It's harder because it was kind of wild, haha In fact, I've already written it, but the site isn't working. I couldnt update the story =(. Somehow, I dont have the permission to post the chapter. I'll keep trying! Hope I can post it ASAP. One more time, I LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUR comments. Thank you, my dear. This story is a little bit yours as well. Thank you.
Name: NTA123 reviewed The Two Shall Become One Flesh on Mar 21, 2021 07:49 pm
I feel sad for Narcissa. Though I would like the Malfoys to acknowledge their innate faults as well in the far future, you know? Also Weasleys. I know they are these light side people and all but they also have their follies as well.
This has to be your shortest chapter or I got so excited that I did not realize when I was done reading it! Or both lol.

Author's Response: Hello darling! Ah yes, this is something I plan to do: acknowledgment is everything! About the Malfoys: I don't intend to change their nature - I don't know if that is the right word to use but I think you can get the idea - but they will have to recognize that these elitist ideals are such a mess! That won't do, Draco and Narcissa! Sorry not sorry haha The world has changed, baby! Now about the Weasleys ... Well, this is a part I'm really excited to get to. They are the good guys, right? But they kicked A LOT OF THINGS into the long grass. Heavy things. And they will have to deal with it. We shall see.
Name: Silvryn reviewed The Two Shall Become One Flesh on Mar 20, 2021 08:26 pm
Ooooh getting to the good stuff! Liked her encounter with Narcissa too!

Author's Response: Hohoho, good stuff indeed! I promise you the next one will be full of GOOD things if you know what I mean! Thank you for commenting. It was very kind of you. See ya soon, baby
Name: quirky_vixen reviewed The Two Shall Become One Flesh on Mar 19, 2021 12:40 pm
I had been waiting for this update and wow! This was such an interesting chapter. I'm extremely excited for what's to come!

Author's Response: Ohhh, thank you so much! I'm really happy that you liked the chapter. I've already written the next one, but, unfortunately, the site seems to be having a problem. Somehow, I dont have the permission to post the chapter =( Well, let's hope for the best and wait everything to work again! I hope to continue seeing you here! Thanks again!
Name: NTA123 reviewed Contract on Mar 01, 2021 03:04 am
P.S. Bonnie Wright is great. But it's just...I thought a lil younger one will be best for Ashen, right? :D

Author's Response: Ginny ... Well, she's a different story altogether. I never liked Bonnie Wright. Maybe because 1 - I never liked her as an actress - I think she was the worst choice considering everyone cast. 2 - I didn't like (hated, in fact) the way they treated Ginny in the movies and this bad feeling ended up being transferred to the actress. It's not rational, I know, but what can I do? Nobody is perfect. When I'm writing Ginny, I always think of Karen Gillan's image. I think she would be my perfect Ginny, even though she’s not that young. But considering that GInny in Ashen is 23, 24 yo, I think it's a ok choice. I already told you that I LOVE your comments, right? The next chapter is coming, my dear! Thanks for the words, again. see ya soon, darling
Name: NTA123 reviewed Contract on Mar 01, 2021 03:02 am
Random QnA
I visualize Draco and Ginny as actual people sometimes (please tell me I am not the only one! Or it will be so awkward).
Tom Felton is great. No doubt. But I am thinking about it from book's pov and with that a fresh cast.
I think for Ashen Draco can be...have you watched American Horror Story Apocalypse and/or 1984? In Apocalypse the guy who played AntiChrist? I forgot his role in AHS 1984 though. If you have not seen any of these, then you can look for the actor's real name, Cody Fern. Let me know what you think? ^ ^
And for Ginny...I am still not sure. I have not seen a lot of red head actresses lol. Can you suggest, who you imagine?

Author's Response: hahahah, I cackled while reading this comment. Rest assured, you're NOT the only one. I do picture the characters when I'm writing and, especially, when I'm reading a book. It's part of the whole experience, I think. In general, I usually visualise Tom Felton as Malfoy. I think he was the perfect casting! But when I stray from his image or need someone a little older, Boyd Holbrook always comes to mind, I don't know if you know him. I think it has to do with the fact that I don’t imagine Draco - no character in this story, actually, as someone stunning (except for Blaise, maybe) This brings me to your suggestion. I didn't know Cody BUT MY GOD THAT MAN IS BEAUTIFUL. Really, I googled him and I looked at the screen for 30 seconds no stop. I'm a little bit intimidated haha I can't think of him as Draco precisely because I can't imagine Malfoy being that pretty.
Name: NTA123 reviewed Contract on Mar 01, 2021 02:45 am
It is the same with the Weasley brothers' attitude and reaction to Draco/Ginny's relationship. Especially Ron's. It is always shown like this. And tbh, it should be.
But here, for the first time, I agree to the Weasleys. Even Ron. Yes.
They are right and this will make things difficult.
P.S. James is a cutie pie here! Loves his skeptical yet optimistic attitude towards his mom's marriage.
Also Ginny...she is so transparent with him! I LOVE it!

Author's Response: The Weasleys are right! Ginny's attitudes are sure to complicate things A LOT. The problem is... COnsidering her situation, Ginny is right as well. It was not the most honorable attitude, in fact. But in Ginny's case, the end justifies the means. The fact she’s not perfect - nor does she claim to be - makes her so real to me. I know several Ginnys in my life and that just makes me relate with her even more. I think she has such inherently feminine characteristics - her strength, her perseverance, her optimism. She falls, but always rises stronger. And she has no choice but to move on. Really, I love her BUT her life will not be easy because of her own choices. Ohhhh JAMES IS PERFECT. To me, it's very difficult to write children, but with him things flow easily. NO ONE WILL HURT MY BABY
Name: NTA123 reviewed Contract on Mar 01, 2021 02:39 am
Consummation?! I really hope Ginny gets pregnant! Tbh, it won't be too hard. I mean look at James. It was one time XDD
Anyway, jokes apart, it will be very hard for Ginny to keep contact with the Resistance and her family.
She is depending on those literal loopholes but she should have kept in mind that she is marrying Draco. Not any regular Death eater. How she gonna keep the respect of the Malfoy's name and help her people will be one of the most important elements of this story now! At least I believe so!

Author's Response: Ohhhh, don't give me ideas pelase! The story is already too complicated the way it is! (but I'll consider your hope, fear not) Yes, that will be the most complicated for Ginny from now on. How to deal with her individual interests and her family interests? There is a great conflict ahead. And that will bring Ginny another problem: her relationship with Draco. As we already know, he's not a person who forgives easily. And he values his family name ardently. If Ginny steps out of line, he will have no mercy. There will be very interesting next chapters, haha
Name: NTA123 reviewed Contract on Mar 01, 2021 02:34 am
Blaise is awesome!
He is a good friend! Even if he claims otherwise, but he is! I think he is looking after Draco and Ginny. He actually cares about them and knows that they are really lonely.
Also he is SO wise! I loved all of his dialogues. It actually shows how smart and observant YOU are as an author! :***

Author's Response: Someone told me that Blaise just looked like the guy that started the fire and then sat in a corner sipping his tea, laughing at everybody. I couldn’t agree more, haha. I looove writing Blaise! He’s sooo much fun! And he cares very much about Draco AND Ginny. So much to the point of… Well, we’ll see. I suppose Blaise has his own feelings and demons to deal with, after all. Oh, I'm blushing! Thank you for your words, really!
Name: NTA123 reviewed Contract on Mar 01, 2021 02:21 am
YES! THEIR MARRIAGE IS REGISTERED! (I mean it is quite the same thing, no?)

Author's Response: QUITE! They have a deal now! What's next? Will there be a marriage? (spoiler: yes, haha, I'm suck at mysteries)
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