Name: kaitlyn reviewed
The Diary on Oct 13, 2005 07:23 am
This is a really good story! I am really enjoying it!
I think you're doing an excellent job, and I have no criticisms. :-)
Name: Ally Malfoy reviewed
The Diary on Aug 17, 2004 08:33 am
This story is great! Please countinue writting and I cant wait till the next chapter is posted.And when will that be?I love this story!
Author's Response: It should be finished and posted sometime in the next few days--I've already started to write it. Maybe today, maybe tomorrow... Maybe Thursday... :-P Soon though.
Name: Vanessa reviewed
The Diary on Aug 17, 2004 06:32 am
I think it's an amazing story. It's really believable :), and they're totally in character, according to me anyway. I can't wait to read what happens next!
Name: Mila reviewed
The Diary on Aug 17, 2004 06:05 am
I found this story by accident, and now I'm glad I did! Clever how you're mixing the story with canon. I'm interested in which way you go with Draco and Ginny's relationship and I'll be on the lookout for the next chapter.
Name: emvee reviewed
The Diary on Aug 17, 2004 05:26 am
i am so enjoying this story!! i love your discriptions and detail they make for a great read. keep going!
Name: Lovely Lioness reviewed
The Diary on Aug 17, 2004 02:14 am
You're breaking my heart! Oh I love this story!!! Love it love it love it love it love it. I can't figure out what you're going to do about them. I almost want you to keep them apart, well, a least for a little while, and have some big thing that brings them together later on, but another part of me just wants you to get 'em back together. Ah well, you're in charge. Please update soon!
Author's Response: :) I think I have an idea for what I want to do with them, but I don't know how it'll work out... All I know is that they'll get together someday--because otherwise there would be no point to this story.
Name: ForeverAnAngel reviewed
The Diary on Aug 16, 2004 11:44 pm
I'm glad that I found this chapter here, it wasn't appearing for me on Fanfiction for some reason.
Anyways! Good story! I think this chapter was mostly a set-up chapter for what's to come.
Name: Mynuet reviewed
The Diary on Aug 16, 2004 06:39 pm
Great job with weaving the story into canon. Can't wait for more.
Name: kiera14 reviewed
The Diary on Aug 16, 2004 05:09 pm
great chapter:) i really liked the whole story because it shows both draco and ginny in a new light these are my two favorite characters in the harry potter books and i think that they are highly ignored. but you definitely make them seem important and not just followers like in the books. keep up the great work:) please update soon:)
Name: newbie reviewed
The Diary on Aug 16, 2004 04:34 pm
it's not boring at all, it's very well written and it actually fits canon -- which seems quite rare lately...
Name: Disty reviewed
The Diary on Aug 16, 2004 02:51 pm
That was a good chapter!!! ^_^ The argument that you had between Ginny and Draco when she told him that she can't be friends with him if he keeps making fun of her family, I don't know.... I'm guessing that you want your story to canon all five books right? Well, it seems that Draco doesn't stop his mean streak towards the Weasley's. Of course all the book shows is Draco being mean towards Ron. I think you should continue it though, have Draco have doubts about his morals, while having this cool outer facade. I think it'll be interesting for you to write about the time when Ron and Harry took the polyjuice potion, I would totally love to see what Draco was thinking about when he was talking to "Crabbe" and "Goyle." Keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :) I think I want to write their story with a lot of ups and downs, so it's okay that he never really stops insulting her family. Besides, he always insults Ron, but I'm not sure how often he insults Ron in front of Ginny--maybe he stops for her... I'm not really sure yet, I've been rereading the books as I write the story to keep it as realistic as possible, so sometimes I think I'm going to write it a certain way, but then something else happens in the book that makes me have to change... I originally was considering having Draco not find out about Ginny's surname until the Sorting Ceremony, but after the scene at Flourish and Blotts, Draco would have had to be really dense to have that slip past him again.