Name: Kisou reviewed
An Innocent Beginning on May 06, 2006 08:50 pm
The conversations in this chapter are much too sophisticated for six year olds. The last conversation I held with a six year old (which was actually today) consisted of the fact that it took one short cut to reach our church and two to reach our grandmother's house. He repeated this about three times. These "six year olds" sound like twelve year olds, at least. This could almost be a conversation between to high school students. Be careful when you're working with little kids. Think about both the complexity of their thought process and their ability to express their thoughts with a limited vocabulary.
Name: Kelsie reviewed
An Innocent Beginning on Oct 14, 2005 02:59 am
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
is all i have to say
Name: Lovely Lioness reviewed
An Innocent Beginning on Jan 02, 2005 02:35 pm
I'm beginning to think you're dead. Am I reviewing for a dead person? PLEASE continue with the story. I, at least, will R&R. Please? (I'm really sorry if you are dead). - The Lovely Li-
Name: Lovely Lioness reviewed
An Innocent Beginning on Sep 25, 2004 02:53 am
Where are you????? You haven't updated in forever!!!! Wasn't this supposed to go through all there years at Hogwarts? I loved this story *sob* Please update, or at least let us know if you aren't going to!
Author's Response: I know... I'm so sorry... I can give you a load of excuses if you want... As soon as I finished the 10th chapter here, I got distracted by Portkey, so I spent two weeks updating my story there (without actually writing more), and then after that I had summer school finals that I had to study for, and once I was done with that I spent the weekend (last weekend) in Mexico with friends, and when I came back (on Sunday), one of my good friends found out she had cancer (and she's only 19!), so I've been visiting her at the hospital, but then I started school yesterday... Ay... I pulled out my laptop during my long break between classes yesterday, and I tried to finish the next section, but then I ended up just taking a nap... Really, I'm not entirely sure where it's going right now, because I really wish the story had some sort of plot, but now Draco and Ginny are together, but it's bound to get old if they keep fighting. I fully intend to finish the story, I'm just contemplating where I want it to go next, since I left it at a good spot, and I have no real motivation to continue at the current moment--but I'm sure I'll start up again once classes start, because I don't like to sleep through my classes (writing is better). Also, I have all these little gaps between classes where I can go write... Hopefully I'll get back in the swing of things, it's just things have been so busy (and then there's The Sims 2 addiction). Hehe... I'll work on my story in the upcoming week, and hopefully I'll find a way to keep it unboring. :)
Name: Anna reviewed
An Innocent Beginning on Aug 11, 2004 04:19 pm
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!! THAT WAS SO CUTE AND SWEET!!! They have such a cute relationship!!!!!!!!! I think you should do all seven years, even though the books aren't out yet. Keep updating!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm planning to do one for all the books that are currently out, and then maybe I'll make up a story for the sixth year...
Name: Sandie reviewed
An Innocent Beginning on Aug 10, 2004 11:47 pm
Oooh!!! This is sooo cute! Draco and Ginny are so cute when they're young...awwww...I keep saying that while I'm reading this..and I can't help but to smile. I love this fic..and I really need to register here. Hehe. ^.^
Author's Response: Thanks :) I had fun writing them when they were young.
Name: Pale n Tragic reviewed
An Innocent Beginning on Aug 10, 2004 12:53 pm
A review before I continue reading
Oh wow! This is such a new and unique idea! It's nice to see a new twist on the best paring! So many things have been done so many times that this is new and refreshing! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks, it was just an idea I thought of after reading too many D/G fics, and since I could not find one like it, I decided to try out my story writing skills...
Name: bunny reviewed
An Innocent Beginning on Aug 09, 2004 12:00 pm
It's wondeful! I love the idea, I love the story. Can't wait to read more of it. ^_^
Name: Lovely Lioness reviewed
An Innocent Beginning on Aug 09, 2004 10:34 am
Oh, that was so cute!!!! I can't wait to see how you play around with their meeting at F&Blotts and from there on. Please update soon! -The Lovely Lioness
Author's Response: I get to write that next... I'm excited...
Name: Disty reviewed
An Innocent Beginning on Aug 09, 2004 08:32 am
This is totally a great story! I totally like it. They are going to find out about each other right? Or are they just going to go through hogwarts without each other knowing, but i guess you can't really do that cause that's not possible. Great job!! ^_^
Author's Response: They'll find out--I'm just not sure how or when (yet).
Name: newbie reviewed
An Innocent Beginning on Aug 09, 2004 08:25 am
oh cute! loved it loved it loved it!
Name: emvee reviewed
An Innocent Beginning on Aug 09, 2004 06:34 am
i like this a lot. what a great beginning. what a great insght of the world thru a childs eye. we know what ginny's family is like. i would like to read your take on draco's family life. keep posting.