Reviews For The Gifted Amissio
Name: natalie star reviewed The Guests on Nov 08, 2006 04:32 pm
"Canon freaks" hmmm? (I just read your bio)

If you wanted to make it all up as you go along, you could just write Fiction, instead of Fan-Fiction.

Anyhow, I liked this chapter up until the following paragraph:

Two hours later, they were gossiping excitedly (some of the topics being tampons, masturbation, the quality of bras and dirty underwear.) Anyone who hadn’t known better would have thought that they had been best friends since they were both still fetuses.

Which was needlessly crass.

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