Name: shaded reviewed
Part 2 on Dec 26, 2007 10:05 am
Aw, some much-needed advice from their mums. I hope Draco can clear up the misunderstandings.
By the way, there's a typo about half-way through, with "Author" instead of "Arthur".
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Part 2 on Aug 15, 2006 03:39 pm
~A perfect chapter. I just love this story.~
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Part 2 on May 23, 2005 03:15 am
Just a couple of little edits...
"Author Weasley looked up"
--You call Arthur "Author" a couple of different times.
"And I know she loves me."
--You have Narcissa talking in two paragraphs that could be joined together, the quotes are incorrect, and you have Narcissa saying that Draco loves Ginny and Ginny loves Narcissa...not Draco as I'm sure it was meant to read.
Otherwise it's brilliant and very well written!
Name: Jenny reviewed
Part 2 on May 23, 2004 03:42 pm
Sounds like both mums gave good advice there ;) I like that Narcissa is good to her son when he's so confused. I just hope that Draco can make Ginny see how much he does love her before she does something silly.