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Hesperides' Apple by ogygiasylph    (Reviews - 868)

When Ginny Weasley becomes Draco Malfoy's wife, he suspects neither her true identity nor her dangerous motives. But when all Hell breaks lose and their relationship takes unexpected turns, there is more at stake than preserving their marriage--namely, preserving their lives.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Graphic Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 33 | Word count: 166850 | Read count: 229991 | Published: Jun 29, 2006 | Updated: Sep 17, 2009
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: May 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 27: 26. The Ministry's Trojan horse

(sigh) Lordie, lordie. I don't know what to think. I really don't. I wish I could tell you that I did. I have got to be honest. The most truthful, the most realistic, the most honest, the most... HEALTHY... ending would involve Ginny and Draco walking away from each other in some way. I really do not see how they can come together after this, after what he did, after what she knows. It's not exactly a matter of forgiveness, either. As George Orwell wrote after Winston Smith and Julia betrayed each other, "Something had been burnt out in him... cauterized out. There were things, his own acts, from which he could not recover." If Ginny had been at the Burrow then, Draco would have killed her too. How could he not? He could no more avoid it than he could avoid killing her brothers, her father, her mother. How can she live with that knowledge? In my own fics, this would be the part where I kill Draco off, frankly. But SOMETHING tells me that you're going to have a happier ending than that. ;) So... well, let's just say that I look forward to seeing how you're going to do it!!!

Not Quite Fate by Hearts Cadence    (Reviews - 934)

*COMPLETE* Destiny knew better than to bring these two together. One man, determined to draw back an errant Malfoy, is not so wise, and Ginny soon finds herself caught up in events that are not quite Fate.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley, Severus Snape
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 37 | Word count: 222518 | Read count: 338668 | Published: Jul 13, 2006 | Updated: Aug 04, 2007
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Jul 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: By Candlelight

Oh, so cool! Another great story from HC!(bounces up and down excitedly.) I look forward to lots and lots more. It's fascinating to see Ginny left behind at Hogwarts with Draco, because I think it's very realistic as far as the way she would react, and also that Harry would have left her behind. (Although I certainly do hope that Ginny and Harry didn't have sex. Dear God, please, no.)

Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Apr 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Things Change, Life Goes On

Hmm. I can't say that I think Draco was out of character here. However, that's because of the very particular and peculiar situation that he's in. I doubt he would have told Ginny so flatly that he loved her without that.

Author's Response: I\'m really glad you think so. That\'s the whole reason I\'ve been taking the progression of the romance SO slowly. I wanted to build it up to a point that would make a confession like this plausible, whereas any earlier, it definitely WOULD have been out of character. That, and like you said, his circumstances account for a lot too, which is what I was hoping people would take into consideration. I\'m happy you seem to think I did an all right job presenting that! Thanks!

Shall Rise Again by Peki    (Reviews - 292)

Sequel to Break in the sun (till the sun breaks down). For a few blissful hours, the differences between them did not matter. But as Draco and Ginny struggle with their budding relationship, they must soon discover that many things separate them still - family, friends and society as well as their own explosive tempers. The future they want for themselves comes at a price, and reconciling what they each want out of life is a challenge that might just break them apart...
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 21 | Word count: 112523 | Read count: 58995 | Published: Aug 11, 2006 | Updated: May 27, 2007
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Oct 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I really like the way this story is going, largely because there are so few fics that face these issues. Generally, Ginny is attached to her family and Harry, and then switches to being attached to Draco. She never has a chance to find out who she really is for herself. Half the time, I want to drag her off to a Co-Dependents Anonymous meeting... but this Ginny is different, and I like it. :)

Author's Response: I completely agree - Ginny isn\'t the type who would submit to a man, not to Harry and certainly not to Draco, and I like her that way. Writing them both is great fun :) Thank you for reviewing, I\'m really pleased that you like the fic!

The Intervals of Waking by Nokomis    (Reviews - 4)

A witch and a wizard meet at Worlds' End. A Sandman crossover. Sequel to Sleep Spent.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Crossover
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3035 | Read count: 1951 | Published: Oct 09, 2006 | Updated: Oct 09, 2006
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Date: Oct 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The Intervals of Waking

Well, I absolutely love this. I love all HP/Sandman crossovers, of course, and Draco and Ginny always seem like the most appropriate people in their generation to be in them. Kinda makes me wonder what comes next, though... (hopes for sequel)

A Tale of Two Matchmakers by Kerichi    (Reviews - 527)

Romance for three couples when Blaise and Luna use Shakespearean styled matchmaking to hook up Ginny and Draco. There's Much Ado about...something!

Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill award for Best Romance- Non Canon on Mugglenet

* Written before the HBP, this tale presents an alternate sixth year in which Dumbledore lives, Draco is more than a foil to Harry, and Blaise Zabini is a girl. I hope readers who ship Draco/Ginny will enjoy the story which includes dancing with faeries, Celtic and Norse mythology, school holidays in London and Spain, and loads of fantasy and romance. "Is this a kissing book?" (to quote the Princess Bride) Yes, it is.*



Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (girl), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: Tales of Two Matchmakers
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Chapters: 50 | Word count: 316158 | Read count: 126264 | Published: Oct 12, 2006 | Updated: Mar 29, 2007
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Mar 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 33: Holiday in Spain

Argh, so you write creepy Lucius too! ;)

I've been meaning to review this fic for awhile, but you know, what with one thing and another... Anyway, it's long and intricate, obviously, and I'm not sure how serious you're going to get as far as subject matter-- that's one of the really interesting aspects of your plot. But it also has a fun, fresh quality that's rare in a long D/G fic (I'm one of the worst offenders there. :P) I'm curious to see how you'll work all these plot threads out.

Author's Response: I\'m happy you reviewed now! I prefer \'menacingly sexy\' to creepy for Lucius. He definitely has a \'I could kill you...or kiss you\' air about him. :D I hope you like how the plot threads work out, and how the different couples and situations play out. Do you write angsty stories or \'menacingly sexy\' Draco fics? I think Draco would work well as the broody, \'is he falling in love with me or trying to kill me\' Gothic Romance hero!

Redeeming the Dragon by thelovinspoonful    (Reviews - 350)

"Perhaps it really didn't matter what he was, perhaps it just mattered that he was." Unexpected events lead to unexpected relationships. Can one person be so important to the destruction of Voldemort? Nothing happens by chance, but sometimes, life might be simpler if it did.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 22 | Word count: 68978 | Read count: 60670 | Published: Nov 01, 2006 | Updated: Aug 30, 2012
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Dec 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Nightmarish

You know, I really, really like this story. It's an underappreciated gem. It's quietly getting everything right-- Draco's reactions, Ginny's inner life, Harry's attitude, everything. I truly believe that this is the way things would have gone if HBP had had this ending.



Now, if you want more reviews... a word to the wise... think about upping the rating a tad. Just a suggestion. ;) You know, more D/G smut in the world is always a good thing...

Author's Response: Thank you, so much. Haha. There is plenty of time for D/G smut to come, no worries.

The List of Things Draco Malfoy is not Allowed To Do by Angelsea585    (Reviews - 88)

Currently standing at 190, the as-definitive-as-I-can-make-it list, compiled from various sources, along with a few of my own contributions.
Category: Essays
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3219 | Read count: 3072 | Published: Nov 09, 2006 | Updated: Nov 09, 2006
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Nov 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, come on. Can't he do #110 NOW??? ;) Although yes, it's true that this isn't outstandingly D/G.

Strength, Chance or Fate by Persephone33    (Reviews - 246)

Even if he only got a glimpse of her flame-coloured hair around a corner, it was enough. Enough to keep him breathing. Alive.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter and all of the characters in his world are the property of J.K. Rowling and multiple movie companies and publishing houses. They get all of the money, I only get the pleasure of *breathy sigh* using Draco.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 15 | Word count: 30818 | Read count: 33909 | Published: Nov 17, 2006 | Updated: Apr 19, 2009
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Dec 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Questions, Confessions and Smiles

I really like this Draco. It's easy to just make him into a jerk who is Redeemed by Teh One True Love of Ginny, but I think your portrayal is actually a lot closer to what canon!Draco would be if this particular set of circumstances had happened. Anyway, we all hope to see more soon! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much.

The Play's the Thing by Mynuet    (Reviews - 27)

...to catch the conscience of the Boy Who Lived.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2786 | Read count: 3707 | Published: Apr 27, 2007 | Updated: Apr 27, 2007
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: May 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Act I

GIANT SNERK!!! Oh, this was so funny. Harry is really a jerk, isn't he? Hopefully, a big comeuppance is on its way. :)

Nineteen Years Later... the Truth by Anise    (Reviews - 893)

What really happened in the DH Epilogue of Doom. Poor, poor Harry, so very clueless...

Chapter SIXTY-NINE quote of the day:

Ginny scowled at him. “You don’t know me very well.”

Draco shook his head, his eyes more sorrowful than ever. “No. I don’t. Eternity wouldn’t be long enough for that.”

“Why do I feel as if we’ve suddenly wandered into the set of a men’s cologne commercial?” complained Lucifer.

“Can’t you keep your damn mouth shut, Lucifer?” spat Draco.

“Please… really… I don’t think you should talk to him that way,” whispered Ginny.


Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Humor
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 69 | Word count: 315075 | Read count: 137485 | Published: Jul 30, 2007 | Updated: Feb 26, 2011
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: May 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So just in case anybody is reading this... NYT is the first of my long, unfinished fics that is in line for a major reboot. The revised version will be shorter, much more cleaned up, and a much better fic, I think. Then it'll be finished! :) Watch for it soon.

Demented Cherubs by CCC    (Reviews - 452)

Valentine's Day brings a surprise, but not the one Ginny was hoping for.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 15 | Word count: 34511 | Read count: 62653 | Published: Sep 12, 2007 | Updated: Jul 04, 2010
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Apr 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You know, I really love this story, and I'm very glad you're still posting chapters. I know you have many fics going on, but please do0 NOT abandon this fic... I MEAN it... voodoo curses will possibly be cast... ;) Anyway. Great chapter.

What Potter Doesn't Know by Pipperstorms    (Reviews - 38)

Potter is an idiot. He sits there, flirting, horribly, I might add, and still he gets no where. That’s because he doesn’t know the rules, wouldn’t know them even if they bit him. Fortunately, I know the rules. Not that it matters, the rules don’t apply to me. I’m not arrogant; I’m right. It isn’t being cocky if it’s true. When he wouldn’t pay her any attention, she went and found someone who would. Lucky girl, she caught the eye of the only man in this school who knew how to worship her properly.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3390 | Read count: 5486 | Published: Jul 06, 2008 | Updated: Jul 06, 2008
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Jul 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Charms Indeed

Smut, smut, a perfect storm of smut, one might say. Very interesting power dynamics between Draco and Ginny. You know what would really be interesting, though... a fic exploring how your Draco and your Ginny got together in the first place. It could be a one-shot... unlike some of us (snerk), you know how to write short wonderfully well, clearly...

Author's Response: Thank you! It means a lot to get a review from a writer I admire so much! But ahhh... compilation stories... they almost never work out for me! Much unlike you, and CCC, once I write a story, the plot bunny runs away.

Contractual Obligations by gidge_8    (Reviews - 751)

Selling herself into a marriage contract, Ginny finds herself playing a deadly game, ultimately pitting her husband against her lover and a father against his son. Many twists and turns, depth and evil characters - and a long story of sweet and true love.

New! Epilogue is up! Yes, I know, the story has been "complete" for a couple of years, but this ending has been partially written for a long time and it ties up some loose ends.

Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Non-consensual sex, Sexual Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 32 | Word count: 165632 | Read count: 98986 | Published: Sep 05, 2008 | Updated: Jan 05, 2014
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Jan 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Bella's Plan

(pops head in)
I'm going back and reading most of this so that the epilogue will make sense. Then, there will be an actual REVIEW!!

(dives back into the 347317843972103.pi things-to-do list. ;)

Author's Response: You are a darling.... LOL :) Hugs.

Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Jan 05, 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Epilogue

YAY!!!!!

It's up!
(runs around yelling)

Okay, I'll leave a real review in the next couple of days. I have a headache and I'm going to bed early. So wait for it!! Coming soon!!

Author's Response: Best of luck with the headache! hope you feel better soon! (hubby has one - due to weather moving in, so I do hope it passes quickly! Hugs, and most best wishes!!!
-G

The World Inverted by rowan_greenleaf    (Reviews - 230)

Draco doesn't remember their past together, and now she's just a Weasley to him. Ginny will do anything -jump through all the hoops, pose as an interior decorator, tap dance -ANYTHING- to break the spell that erased his memory and make him love her again.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Narcissa Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 8 | Word count: 43535 | Read count: 18219 | Published: Oct 14, 2008 | Updated: Feb 12, 2009
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Nov 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: The Sex Doll

Actually, I really began to like Ginny a lot more in this chapter. Her emotions were very believable, and it was clear that she wasn't about to let Draco walk all over her. I hope to see more of the same! :)

Author's Response: Anise! Glad to hear from you! :D Don't worry, there will be more Ginny-with-a-backbone in future chaps. ^_^ Thanks for reviewing!

Pride & Prejudice by GoldenFawkes    (Reviews - 74)

Draco is proud and prejudiced, but he might not be the only one.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 19187 | Read count: 18087 | Published: Nov 20, 2008 | Updated: Apr 06, 2009
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Apr 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi! (waves) I'm not sure why I never saw this fic before... anyway, great first chapter. Ginny has every reason not to want to have anything to do with Draco, so it'll be interesting to see how you work that one out. How funny that you had Lav and Parvati; they're in the next chapter of CK, and this is pretty much how I envisioned them, too.

Author's Response: Ack! Anise left me a review! I'm all aflutter! Lav and Parvati are fulfilling the roles of Lydia and Kitty Bennet in this fic, so I can take little credit for having envisioned them this way. What ARE they going to be like in yours, I wonder. I will have to wait and see, I suppose...

Subject 1121 by Mynuet    (Reviews - 16)

The nucleus accumbens is a collection of neurons within the forebrain. It is thought to play an important role in fear, addiction, and sex.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Drama, Horror
Warnings: Non-consensual sex
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2280 | Read count: 3280 | Published: Apr 12, 2009 | Updated: Apr 12, 2009
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Apr 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: For Parseltonguepen

Well, this certainly reminds me of why we spend a lot of time going over issues of ethics in research in the MSW program. Beautiful, really, REALLY disturbing. Something tells me that you had the Stanley Milgram experiments in mind, but I'm glad that Draco and Ginny were able to find each other at last.

Cat and Mouse by ClairdeLune    (Reviews - 12)

Would Draco's sixth year have gone differently if someone had reached out to him? Peer into Draco's mind as he goes through this pivotal point. It is a year of extreme importance, and everything should be running smoothly. Unfortunately for our hero, an insistant redhead keeps disrupting his plans and making him doubt his intentions. Is Ginny enough to save Draco from the dark path he's traversing? Maybe.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Severus Snape
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 2649 | Read count: 4174 | Published: Apr 17, 2009 | Updated: May 13, 2009
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Apr 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Glory, Pride, and Encounters of the Humiliating Variety

This really is a promising beginning to this story, but there never seems to be much rhyme or reason to why some stories receive zillions of reviews and some don't. So don't get discouraged, and keep writing and posting! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I will :)

Sentenced To Sanctuary by Persephone33, Mynuet    (Reviews - 23)

When Draco is sentenced to community service for his crimes in the war, he finds himself on the doorstep of Ginny Weasley's animal sanctuary. Stuck with each other and surrounded by beasts, Draco reluctantly does good while Ginny finds the company of Death Eaters surprisingly useful.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 17114 | Read count: 6241 | Published: Sep 06, 2009 | Updated: Sep 06, 2009
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Sep 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

What an adorable, detailed, and delightful read! I just loved seeing Draco as a surly stable lad. ;) More collaborations, ladies!

And Bear This Work of Heaven With Patience by seegrim    (Reviews - 21)

He wishes he could turn back time and make things right.
Category: Completed Short Stories, Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 3617 | Read count: 2906 | Published: Sep 06, 2009 | Updated: Jan 25, 2015
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Feb 04, 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

(sticks head in)
There WILL be real reviews. Lavish, long, real reviews!! ;) but I'm totally swamped with reviewing the ffn exchange right now. Soon-- I promise.

Broken Mirrors by Cadaverous Apples    (Reviews - 71)

Sometimes, Ginny just wanted to break mirrors so she'd be certain to live for another seven years. She wondered if seeing her face splinter like Draco's mind already had would be worth it.

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Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Luna Lovegood, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Action, Drama, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Graphic Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 25887 | Read count: 4027 | Published: Feb 26, 2010 | Updated: Jan 10, 2011
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: May 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: II: Our adversaries are insane

I'm really enjoying this fic. Your Draco is very dark (quite the Captain Obvious statement), but... it's hard to explain, but there are DarkDracos that kind of slip over into characterizations that are just too much, and yours manages to walk that tightrope without falling off so far. It isn't necessarily about the terrible things that this character has done (because he's clearly done quite a few), but there's *some* kind of line that (IMHO) Draco just can't cross and still remain readable. Yours is on the believable side of that line, and that's hard to pull off.

Author's Response: Okay, I'll have to admit that I might have squeed a bit when I got your review. (I don't think that it's a coincidence that "squee" rhymes with "pee," either.)(That doesn't mean I peed. >_>) The way you described the line that all Dark!Dracos walk was fantastic, and makes me blush to see that I seem to have gotten it right (at least for that chapter . . . ). I never want any of my characters to seem overdone or cliched, so it's always rewarding as a writer to be assured that they weren't. Thanks for the lovely review!

Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Jan 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: IV: The wise learn many things

Clearly-- a very disturbing chapter, creepy characters, and you really do get Malfoy Manor right, which I don't think almost anybody ever does!!! The creepy creepiness of it all... (shudders) But again, it works very well.

It really is so difficult to write a good dark Draco, because there are so many pitfalls into which the writer can, well, fall. But I think you've captured the key to what makes this Draco work in Narcissa's cold statement that her son is right on the edge of losing his sanity. This Draco is being torn apart by the acts he's committed and continues to commit; the carnage he wades through rips his mind to shreds, and the dark Draco's that don't work are the ones whose minds remain so carelessly whole. It's as if this Draco has a part of his character very deep within that still is horrified beyond words by what the rest of him is doing, but this part is so deeply buried that it's hard to believe right now it could ever come out. That's the part, I think, that really wants to care about Ginny, that reaches out for her even when his hands are stained with blood.

Ultimately, I really don't know if this Draco can come back from what he's seen and what he's done (or Ginny either,) but it'll be fascinating to see how it all plays out.

Lie to Me by Jack Tamara    (Reviews - 147)

Draco is in love with Astoria. Astoria is in love with Harry. Harry is in love with Ginny. So, how did Draco end up married to Ginny?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: No
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 10356 | Read count: 5512 | Published: Mar 01, 2010 | Updated: Apr 06, 2010
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Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Mar 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This should be interesting, because the way in which Draco and Ginny will work things out is far from obvious. The idea that Draco would already have been pursuing someone else is actually quite believable, and it points up the theme of just how oblivious he is to *everyone's* feelings here. (snerk) I look forward to Ginny slapping him down a bit.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really honored that you read this, since I always get excited when well-known DG authors read and review my work. :) The DG relationship will kind of change from time and time, and should fluctuate and get kinda rocky at points. Don't worry--they'll work it all out though. As for Ginny....with someone like Draco antagonizing her so much, I think you could be right about the slap. Or at least a verbal bashing. :) Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Anise Signed
Date: Apr 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Highly, highly amusing! I really think it works extremely well for Draco to be jerk-like (jerkesque? jerkoid?) at this point. It would not be in character or believable for this Draco to develop in any other way... yet. And it makes sense that the first positive things he'd notice about Ginny would be physical, such as the apples-and-vanilla scent and the nice arse. I particularly liked Ginny going for the kitchen knives, too. They've both got a long way to go, and it's far from obvious how they're really going to get there, which is much more interesting.