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I have always been an avid Ron/Hermione shipper but I have recently been enlightened by the unending possibilities of Ginny and Draco's unexpected, mulit-fasceted, ever angsty love affair. Come on, who isn't?
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Keeping Christmas on the Death Train by Anise (Reviews - 2336)
Two and a half years after his failure to kill Albus Dumbledore, Draco has long been accepted back into the ranks of the Death Eaters. He is still obsessively searching for the rebel Ginny Weasley, but he hides that secret well. When she is found one snowy December night, he smuggles her onto the Death Eaters? train with him. And he begins to learn that nothing will ever be the same again?Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Bestiality, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Non-consensual sex, Sexual Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Date: Jun 27, 2006 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
Hmmm, it seems that Draco is having some pretty incredible revelations about himself just by experiencing everyone else's memories. Could that be, perhaps, how he will regain his soul, by having some sort of epiphany? Don't mind me, just speculating... Anyway, it's certainly obvious why Ginny agreed to go along with the plan now. She felt that she owed Harry anything she could give. What I am disturbed by here, is the whereabouts of Ron. I think that you, like Ms. Rowling herself, never overlooks a detail. My Ronnie isn't present during some pretty important stuff and I can't wait to find out what role he played in the plan, if any....
Date: Mar 23, 2006 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
OMG! How can you say that's not a cliffe!!! I was literally sitting on the edge of my seat during this chapter and praying to some literary God that Harry and Hermione would not get out. Wow, I don't know how you do it, but your writing gives me chills. I will be in absolute unease until the next chapter.
Date: Feb 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Wow, you are really trying to drive me nuts here! The suspension! The tension! I'm really starting to worry about how this story ends. I keep reading that a happy ending is very possible, but I don't want to get my hopes up. I mean afterall, I thought Titanic ended happily! Enough of my rambling... I don't think I have to say that you're doing a terrific job, I tell you every chapter and I'm running out of ways to do it justice anyway!
Date: Feb 24, 2006 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Bella! I am going to hurt that woman if she ruins this for Draco! I have a thought though, perhaps they won't need the tree... perhaps all they need is to reform that bond that they shared on the train ;)
Awesome chapter, I'm on the edge of my seat!
Date: Feb 23, 2006 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Interesting chapter... After that crazy cliffhanger, I'm glad this chapter was somewhat calmer. I must say the whole "Vin" thing weirded me out...
"...he thought he saw a slender sliver of a shape..." I caught that one! You tried to make it inconspicuous, but I saw it! So, yeah, what has Bella got up her evil little sleeve now?
Date: Feb 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
That was one of the most interesting chapters thus far. I must say, I am thoroughly impressed by your depiction of Bella. I've never seen her given so much depth, so much... complexity. I loved it. I think it's probably very much the way she would be, if she were real, of course. And isn't it curious that Draco felt Ginny's touch after he had awoken...
Date: Feb 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: 01
That was one of the most interesting chapters thus far. I must say, I am thoroughly impressed by your depiction of Bella. I've never seen her given so much depth, so much... complexity. I loved it. I think it's probably very much the way she would be, if she were real, of course. And isn't it curious that Draco felt Ginny's touch after he had awoken...
Date: Feb 08, 2006 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
There were so many instances in this chapter that I loved, that I had to take notes because I wanted to express to you how much I loved each of them. That said:
I cooed when Draco thought that she was the most beautiful thing he had ever seen, despite her appearance.
I felt so desperately sad for him when he felt as if he were "bursting out of himself to get to her." That is such a beautifully written passage.
I especially adored, Draco's narrative. "When he came inside you, Ginny, did you hold him so tightly that he felt as if all the breath were being squeezed out of him, but he didn't care, because your arms were around him, and he never wanted to be anywhere else again?" I mean, wow. That is such a powerful thing to say. And it's written in such a way that we can believe that Draco said it, that he feels it and remembers it, every minute of every day.
But, my absolute favorite part was when they leaned against each other, fell to the floor and Ginny sobbed into his shoulder. That was one of the most touching things we've gotten to read in a while. So even if this particular cliff is quite steep, it's okay because you've left us with something so intense, so touching and so magnificently written, that it doesn't matter. I'm content...
Date: Feb 07, 2006 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Wow. That was a big surprise! I am fairly certain that Draco is not hallucinating, what would be the point of that?! LoL. Could it be that this bit of soul (that I'm sure Ginny has) is linking them?? Anyway, Snurk, wants the night off, huh? I can only imagine why... Eeww. I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings.
Date: Feb 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
LoL. I figured that the skits had nothing to do with the story. Just comic relief. I think people wanted a reason to be optimistic. If I haven't said this already, I don't really see how this fic can end happily. Of course, the final decision is up to your brilliance and I trust you fully. In any case, I'm anxiously anticipating the next chapter. This fic has become a bit of an addiction for me and I'm so glad I get my fix so often!
Date: Feb 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
I haven't read in a while, so I got to read three chapters tonight. It made the cliffhangers easier to bear. Anyway, I have some compliments on back up for you! I adored the scene where Draco was finally corporeal and he got to kiss Ginny if only for an instant. It was beautifully written and it made me so sad when he was ripped away. And then, I loved your metaphor comparing a puddle to the ocean and cruciatus to Draco's pain. That was brilliant. Also, your portrayal of Ron in this last scene was exactly as I would imagine him to be. Another excellent installment. This story is unfolding into more and more complex levels. I think that piece of Draco's soul may be within Ginny, but she doesn't know it and when they somehow meet again they'll kiss and then- bam! He'll be whole again. But I think that's just my Disney fairytale mentality. Everything gets wrapped up with tears and kisses in the end.
Date: Jan 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Oh, and I also wanted to say, it doesn't escape me that he's not concentrating on repenting and getting the hell out of there!
Date: Jan 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Anise, you are killing me! I thought surely this chapter would be the one where Draco would achieve corporeal status and... I don't know, not necessarily stop Ginny, I actually think Bella is going to get him in a whole lot of trouble. The next chapter, surely, will give us some clarity! And in case it isn't clear by all my ramblings, I continue to be amazed by your skill, your imagination and your ability to update so frequently!
Date: Jan 31, 2006 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Aaawwww, poor Draco! I'm assuming he lost control and that's why he got ripped away. Bella, obviously is "involving" herself with the half-dementors (eeww). I'd like to get a better visual of these things, I'm kind of imagining regular dementors just shorter (I haven't the faintest idea where I got that image). Anyway, the fact that we didn't actually see Ginny go through with it, leaves room for denial. And I will hold fast to that denial, until you shatter it! Excellent job as always.
Date: Jan 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Another awe-inspiring chapter. I'm quite anxious to see whether or not Ginny will sleep with Harry and goodness, what will Draco make of this whole thing! I must say, Hermione is being a bit of a female dog but I see that it's necessary for your plot. I've only just thought about it, but I'm really worried about how this story will end. I don't think it's plausible or even desirable for everything to get wrapped up in a pretty pink bow of happiness but of course, a sad story is always heart-wrenching. Whatever you decide, I'm sure I'll be bowing at your feet by the end.
Date: Jan 22, 2006 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Voldemort and Bella... I've always found her unwavering allegiance to him a bit startling. I like the way you've played with that. Actually, I should say, because I haven't previously, I really like what you've done with Bella she's still devious but you've provided a disturbing sexual element as well. Anyhoo, fascinating that Draco can see Ginny but she cannot see him. I think that will prove an interesting tool for Draco. And in any case, of course Ginny loves him! She told him she always would, no matter what! Silly goat he is!
Date: Jan 19, 2006 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Oh, wow. That was just too much. In my mind's eye, I actually saw Draco sitting there, in this gigantic brass bowl staring up at every cruelty he'd ever committed. I felt the horror on his face that reflected his heart. I love that even Draco, who was always graceful, dignified, and believes himself to be superior was no different than any other DE, because afterall that is reality. Draco isn't really better than any of them. He never stopped himself, he never went to the right side. I commend and respect your choice to hand him this fate. I knew he wasn't going home but good gracious, I had no idea he would as Bella so excellently put it, "fall to earth." I can only imagine what will come next now that he's realized the truth...
Date: Jan 16, 2006 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Wow, do I always start my reviews that way? 'Wow'?? It's just that it's usually my initial reaction. I am speechless, awestruck, and thoroughly impressed. You constantly surprise me with clever plot twists and you have never for one moment lost my interest. Your writing continues to be amazing... So, what else is there to say? You are wow.
Date: Jan 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Everything has taken quite the interesting turn. Draco's behavior especially. I'm curious to what he's got up his sleeve. I'm betting it hasn't got anything to do with a happy ending.
Date: Jan 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Oh, my poor Draco! You painted such a vivid picture of him in the interrogation room that I was physically affected by it. I couldn't contain my tears as I imagined him broken and hopeless. From the beginning of the chapter when Ginny smeared her blood on his forhead I got a chill and I had a feeling of intense uneasiness throughout the entire chapter. Anything that can affect someone that way is absolutely brilliant. I'm almost scared to see how it ends.
Date: Jan 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Love potion? Interesting choice... Anyway, that whole scene wih Ron was very weird and uncharacteristic, I'm sure something big is going to come of it. Can't wait to see!
Date: Dec 31, 2005 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Oh dear, the idea that Draco's happiness is really a cliffhanger is slightly frightening... I won't think about it too much!
I'm thoroughly enjoying this story. The plot is very creative. Your Draco is also one of the more complex and intriguing I've read.
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Date: Dec 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73
"...a Niffler in shite..." That is precious! I just had to say that before I went rambling about how much I loved this. One has to be very clever to effectively weave smut into a story even when their characters are miles apart. And you, ma'am, are very, very clever! I loved it, especially Ginny's little postscript. It was utterly hot. Draco, certainly thought so and I particularly enjoyed that bit! We haven't seen this side of Ginny in a while and I was starting to feel that perhaps her love for Draco was fading. I'm glad to see I was wrong.
Date: Dec 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74
There were so many great lines in this chapter and although I won't quote them all this one cannot be passed over: "He had even experimented with one of the traditional privileges of the older pureblooded families during one drunken night with Blaise Zabini, but the incident only served to confirm in Draco?s mind that he vastly preferred girls."
That line is so well written and so... inconspicuous! It is hilarious how you just stuck that in there, so nonchalantly! I bet Draco thinks of it nonchalantly as well.
Draco telling Snape he wishes he were his father was very touching. I'm an avid Snarcissa shipper, you know... I wouldn't mind a little tinkering with history. ;D
Author's Response: Thanks! :) Yep,I just always picture Draco as having kinda... experimented... with a boy or two, but then deciding that he really didn\'t like it.
Date: Dec 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
This story is beginning to earn its rating back! This line actually made me shiver: "You might find more pleasure if I'm a bit rough, the first time we're together again. And perhaps you can be savage as well, my Ginny. You wonder what I'll unleash on you? and I wonder what you've kept pent up for me. We'll find out together. Soon." So sexy... And how could you start a bondage fantasy and not end it?! It had better be because they're going to create the ending together when they finally meet. Hmm, I'll hold onto that idea; I like it very much!