That was brilliant. The writing was really good, which isn't always the case with stuff like this. also you cut it off at a great point, leaving just enough up to the imagination. I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Stop, I\'m blushing, haha. I was thisclose to cutting it off right after he asks about her knickers, but I couldn\'t help it, I wanted them to kiss once more in the story :P I\'m glad you like it, thanks so much for your review! :)