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Registered: Jan 18, 2006
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Not Ready to Make Nice by anna    (Reviews - 148)

(DH spoilers!) Some speculated that Fred and George were training her to take over someday, that she was their protégé and the heiress of Weasleys’ Wizard Wheezes. The only one Fred and George would see as worthy to take over, people said. ( 7th year, Rated Naughty just in case.)
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 15 | Word count: 30726 | Read count: 32707 | Published: Mar 14, 2006 | Updated: Apr 15, 2008
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Date: Apr 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

hahaha. I love how she asked him about fruitcake, he got defensive and then the next day the house is full of smoke. Hilarious!! I also like how he seems to be opening up a little, not very quickly, but enough for now.

Draco in Mugglemagicland by KateinVA    (Reviews - 25)

Draco, Ginny and Colin share a flat and live like Muggles for a year.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 7576 | Read count: 9960 | Published: Mar 24, 2006 | Updated: Oct 17, 2007
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Date: Jul 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I remember Donald in Mathmagic land. It was hilarious. I like the story so far and it will be interesting to se how well Draco adjusts to not having magic.

Author's Response: Ha! You\'re the only person to understand the reference. Donald in Mathmagicland was great. It makes for a silly fanfic title, but I thought it was fun.

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Jul 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Mmm... football, my favorite sport, right up there with rugby. Alas, the World Cup is over and there won't be masses of it on the telly any time soon... Good chapter, though I'm not sure what I think about the whole "All those other girls meant nothing to me, you mean so much more: part. I always thought it was a bit ridiculous that Draco never seems to have been serious about anyone (or even feel something for them) before Ginny. Eh... what ever. Keep writing!

Author's Response: It is a cliche, I admit. For some reason my author\'s notes didn\'t come through on this story, but they warned of Mary-Sueishness, OOC behavior, and general fluff. This story is really meant just to be a bit of fun. I hope you enjoy it.

Silver Linings by Nectaris    (Reviews - 31)

Starting in HBP from Ginny's point of view.

Draco Malfoy was certainly of no interest to a Weasley unless it was for hexing practice. Ginny, however, finds that even if he's unwilling to accept it, he's definitely earned some sympathy.

Other pairings are Lupin/Tonks, Neville/Luna, and Harry/Hermione. Rating might have to change later.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Graphic Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 5 | Word count: 14198 | Read count: 920 | Published: Mar 31, 2006 | Updated: Apr 25, 2006
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Date: Apr 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

At the moment, I am utterly confused. Perhaps it might be that I am reading the fic at 730 in the morning (which is a horrid hour to be up, but it is none the less the hour I woke up this morning, unfortunately...). But it's really good so far and I'm sure all will make itself clear in the coming chpters. Keep up that fabulous work :)

My Bane by Extreme Dancer    (Reviews - 173)

Ginny Weasley and Draco Malfoy have always been enemies. What will happen when they end up in a place where no one knows of their family rivalry?
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 24 | Word count: 26961 | Read count: 106467 | Published: Apr 06, 2006 | Updated: Mar 12, 2007
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Date: Jul 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The Slytherin Prince

The constantly shifting POV was a bit annoying, and it would have been a much better chapter if it had just been written normally. However, it was still reasonably good. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Ha ha, I did.

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Jul 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Thank You

Meh. It was a bit short and not much happened. And you are still switching between POVs... argh!

Author's Response: Ha ha ha. Sorry, I have a tendency to laugh at these reviews of chapter from a long time ago.

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Jul 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Step One: Introductions

Erm, that's a rather odd plan. I can't imagine Draco ever voluntarily deciding to marry Ginny, there are other purebloods out there. But it is a D/G fic, so it works, vaguely.

Author's Response: There\'s not much I can say, as you already know what happens by now.

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Date: Jul 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Step Two: Friendly Contact

Teehee! that was highly amusing.

Author's Response: Ha, thanks.

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Date: Jul 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: The Eye of the Storm

Weeeel, it was interesting...

Author's Response: Not really, right? Ha ha, I know.

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Date: Jul 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 6: Timeless

There is one HUGE problem with this chapter... Narcissa & Co could not have possibly been at school with Bill Weasley. Narcissa was born in 1955, a full 15 years BEFORE Bill who was born in 1970. Please check your facts or have your betas do it for you before you post chapters. That is an easily correctible mistake and they should have picked up on it. Nor could the Marauders and Narcissa be at Hogwarts at the same time... the Marauders were born in 1959 or 1960. In fact neither Bill, Narcissa or Remus could have attended Hogwarts together. CHECK YOUR FACTS!!!!

Author's Response: Heh heh heh, this is going to be fun. CHECK THE AUTHOR\'S NOTE!!!! I clearly stated that the time-lines were going to be screwy.

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Jul 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: A Wrinkle in Time

there aren't any glaring errors as there wer in the last chapter. Quite good! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Well gee, I\'m glad this chapter meets with your approval.

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Jul 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 8: Changes

Draco is such a guy... it's amusing.

Author's Response: Draco? A guy?!? No way! ;)

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Jan 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Recoveries of Many Kinds

Lol, I was looking at some of the responses that you wrote to reviews I made AGES ago, and they were hilarious. I can't believe some of the things I wrote, in retrospect I sound completely horrid and, much to my horror they were riddled with little typos, which kinda ruins the whole I'm-trying-to-help-you-make-corrections-but-apparently-can't-spell-on-my-own. But they're entertaining to look back on. It's great that you kept writing the story, I may have to go back and reread it.

Spices and Fresh Cut Grass by Hearts Cadence    (Reviews - 45)

There are just some smells a girl can't resist.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 8034 | Read count: 7757 | Published: Apr 16, 2006 | Updated: Apr 16, 2006
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Date: Jul 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fantastic as usual. It made a really lovely one shot. Do write more stories if you have the time. Even more one shots would be apreciated.

Save the Date by Adelagia    (Reviews - 37)

Draco's loafing gets him demoted into Ginny's department, whereupon he takes it upon himself to revive her flagging romantic life. As one might expect, his efforts produce the most unexpected results.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3772 | Read count: 3990 | Published: Apr 23, 2006 | Updated: Apr 23, 2006
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Date: May 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: 5F, Muggle Relations

heh... "practice date"

Crossing into Chaos by Emeral_eyes    (Reviews - 512)

*Completely AU* In a world where Voldemort was never defeated, only a few things matter: pureblood, money and power. All that Ginny Weasley wanted was to survive her 7 years at Hogwarts, a school where the children of the richest and most powerful wizards dominate over others. Denying her natural instincts, she managed to make it into her 6th year without offending any of the cruel and powerful Slytherins - especially that horrible Draco Malfoy. Until one day, she crosses a line, and her peaceful existence is shattered forever. A story filled with adolescent drama, clash of the classes, angst, jealousy, ridiculous pride and love triangles (and squares).
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Blood
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 20 | Word count: 208337 | Read count: 314631 | Published: Apr 28, 2006 | Updated: Nov 18, 2012
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Apr 30, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Nearing the edge

Do keep writing, I really like what you have already. I haven't read anything like it so far. It's nice to read something with a different plot every once in a while. I really want to know what happens next :)

Author's Response: Thanks!! hehe, if you\'re really dying to know what happens next, all you have to do is check out the series the fic is based after - you\'ll get a few hints there! : )

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Jul 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: Breaking the Impasse

Fantastic as usual. I can't wait for the next chapter. I assume that the party will be during the next chapter? it will be a perfect time for a bit more D/G interaction (in a backhanded, sideways fashion of course...). Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Jan 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: The Importance of Being in Control

How utterly horrid. It really makes me want to kill Pansy, but I expect that was the emotion you were going for. Though I can't think why she would have cut out the guy's face from the picture. And I thought that Ginny still had on her shirt and knickers... so how could there have been a picture with her not wearing them? Ah well, I suppose I'll just have to wait for the next update to have all my questions answered. Do write quickly please!

Author's Response: The guy\'s face wasn\'t CUT from the picture, it just didn\'t show his face, I guess I should go back and explain that better. But as for Pansy... IS she the one behind it?

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Apr 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: The Unexpected Knight

It was lovely and really, really long! Which only made it that much better. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

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Date: May 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: What a Girl Wants...

Fantastic! I had to go back a few chapters to remember what was going on, but once I got it figured out... it was a really good chapter. And it was definitely worth waiting for! So this masquerade... that sounds interesting. I hope the next few chapters are posted a bit quicker, but even if they aren't... I'll still be waiting for them. Good luck with the writing!

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Sep 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Little Red Vixen

Wow that was super creepy of Narcissa. I'm really curious about the next chapter though... I'm glad you updated! It's been far too long.

Unstoppable by CharmedLife19    (Reviews - 224)

There are three things that truly matter to Lucius Malfoy: his family, his wealth and his blood. So of course, it was of utmost importance that his son marry a pureblood. Thus Lucius begins to arrange the perfect bride for his son. She must have both beauty and brains. She must be skillful with a wand, but with the elegance to know when to use it. When it comes down to it there is really only one woman that matches the criterion, but she comes with one problem: She’s a Weasley.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 11 | Word count: 25492 | Read count: 71866 | Published: May 23, 2006 | Updated: May 13, 2008
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Date: May 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Epilogue: The Standard Happily Ever After

I really liked how you tied everything up and ended it. Very nice :)

Author's Response: Thank you. Usually, I like to leave a few things to the imagination but with this one I knew I wasn\'t going to be doing a sequel so I figured it\'d be best if I just tied it all up.

Ginny's Revenge by CCC    (Reviews - 376)

Ginny catches Harry with another woman. What will she do for revenge?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 26 | Word count: 73871 | Read count: 86115 | Published: Jun 15, 2006 | Updated: Sep 14, 2009
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Mar 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh that was fantastic! If only I could have been there to see Varuca's face. It would have been utterly splendid!

Author's Response: I agree. I love a Ginny that kicks butt.

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: May 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Amazing! I can't wait for the next chapter.

The Date Doctor by Maelyn    (Reviews - 123)

Narcissa Malfoy wants Draco married off-- and quickly! So, she chooses to send him to a date coach of sorts. What Narcissa wants, Narcissa gets! *Fun, fluff!*
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 12938 | Read count: 28809 | Published: Jun 30, 2006 | Updated: Nov 11, 2006
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Jul 09, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: 03. Surprises

Mmm... fatastic. Absolutely brill! I especially liked the part where Draco breaks his glass, it was funny.

Author's Response: Yeah, I bet he was surprised at his reaction, huh? Thanks for the review.