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Registered: Jan 18, 2006
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Reviews by Kalira

The Dangers of Mistletoe by CCC    (Reviews - 846)

Ginny is ready to kill whoever put magical mistletoe all over the castle. Draco finds the situation rather amusing.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 24 | Word count: 57029 | Read count: 263198 | Published: Oct 23, 2006 | Updated: Feb 28, 2007
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Nov 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love Luna to death, she always makes for interesting situations in stories. Your not the first person that I've read that paired her up with Blaise either. But it's a fantastic pairing. As Ginny said 'Go Luna!'

Author's Response: Luna is a lot of fun. Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Feb 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I think this is a rather good ending. You even managed to tie in the title (good job!). I wouldn't object to you continuing the story, but it's a resonably good place to stop and start a sequel.

Author's Response: Thank you. I didn't plan on tieing int he title, it just worked out that way. : )

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Feb 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh, that was fantastic! And I really great way to end the story. I thought Luna was hilarious when she asked if it was bad form to tell Ginny that she got diamonds. It amuses me that Draco can be so simply manipulated. And then the way Draco decides to come to his "I love you" realization. It was so roundabout... but funny because of it.

I hope you make significant progress on the other stories you mentioned! Happy writing!

The Apple of My Eye by ThisBurningHeart    (Reviews - 185)

I'm just going to be honest. He's good looking, alright? That thought doesn't scare me. But sharing a moment with him? Now that was scary...

Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 12 | Word count: 37699 | Read count: 10791 | Published: Nov 13, 2006 | Updated: Mar 07, 2007
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Nov 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh, if only sleddnig did come with a tall blonde attached. Perhaps I should move to Sweden, there would be more opportunity to go sledding, and all those swedish blondes... hmm. Great chapter, great story actually since I never reviewed the first three chapters. I really love how the story is from Ginny's point of view but still highly amusing, so many of the POV stories are quite horrid. Kudos to you. I shall definitely keep reading if you keep writing.

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Hey, if you go to Sweden let me know. We\'ll travel together :D. I\'m glad to hear that you like the story-- I work really hard on shaping Ginny\'s character and monologues, so it\'s awesome to hear that they\'re satisfactory. Don\'t worry-- I have 12 about 10 chapters written, and I\'m not done yet! Stay tuned for updates, and thanks again!

Strength, Chance or Fate by Persephone33    (Reviews - 245)

Even if he only got a glimpse of her flame-coloured hair around a corner, it was enough. Enough to keep him breathing. Alive.
Disclaimer: Harry Potter and all of the characters in his world are the property of J.K. Rowling and multiple movie companies and publishing houses. They get all of the money, I only get the pleasure of *breathy sigh* using Draco.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 15 | Word count: 30818 | Read count: 34652 | Published: Nov 17, 2006 | Updated: Apr 19, 2009
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Apr 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Dinner, Family and Friends

It was a bit fluffy, but it was still a good chapter. It was nice to see Ron a bit less irational than normal. And Draco didn't seem too out of character.

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Jan 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Bubble Baths, Imperfections, and Compromising Situations

argh! the angst! Though the declarations part of the next chapter does look promising. Perhaps the next time Draco finds Ginny naked he'll do something about it? Then, you see, there wouldn't be these angsty bits. But I suppose no story is completely without it's fair share of angst. And if they get a good deal of this oh-no!-harry's-back-angst dealt with now, it won't have to be brought up later.

Lovely story so far!! I'm definitely going to keep reading and I'm loking forward to this promise of bondage and declarations, it's an interesting mix ;)

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Mar 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Emptiness, Bondage and Declarations

I'm glad they got that sorted out... for now. Since I'm sure Draco will have another prat moment and then Ginny will have to explain things again. Good chapter!!

Redemption by search4inspiration    (Reviews - 43)

How would things be different if Draco had accepted Dumbledore's mercy at the end of book six? Follow the canon characters as they are forced into company with Draco and struggle to survive in a warring wizarding world. And yes, there will be romance.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Action, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 5 | Word count: 13484 | Read count: 13862 | Published: Nov 18, 2006 | Updated: Mar 10, 2007
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Dec 18, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It looks like it will be amusing in the future. If you need any help with editing or anything I could probably help you out. Not to say that it looked like it was in need of major editing. Do keep writing, I should like to know how everything works out and perhaps see a bit of D/G intereaction in the coming chapters.

Author's Response: D/G interaction will, in fact, be seen in the next chapter... which I hope to have up in a couple of days (life provided some unavoidable distractions over Christmas break)... thanks for your beta offer, I may take you up on it in the future! :)

Playing Games by CCC    (Reviews - 50)

Ginny is a spy for The Order. Can she accomplish her mission, or will Draco trap her in a prison of her own making?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1946 | Read count: 5192 | Published: Nov 25, 2006 | Updated: Nov 25, 2006
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Nov 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's a smidge different from what I've been reading lately, but it's honestly refreshing. Though I am a bit confused, is the second part a flashback or is only part of the bit in the middle a flash back and it's back to the regular timeline by the end? Perhaps I'm just being a bit dense, I'll go back and read it through a second time. Do keep writing please!

Author's Response: I\'m sure you\'re not dense. I wrote this late at night in a stream of consciousness (spelling?) kind of way. I\'ll have to go back and see if I need to rearrange it.

Falling Through Fate by Mourning Broken Angel    (Reviews - 43)

A bout of hot sex is the perfect way to add excitement to an otherwise dull Ministry gala. Sometimes, two people keep getting thrown together, regardless of their feelings and pasts.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4629 | Read count: 7191 | Published: Dec 02, 2006 | Updated: Dec 02, 2006
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: May 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I know I've read this several times already, but it was just as good this time as it was the last.

Author's Response: Aww, what a sweet thing to say. Thank you!

Girl with a Plan by Echo    (Reviews - 62)

If Pansy Parkinson says she's your friend, don't trust her. If she invites you over, don't go. You might wake up hung over, in only your underwear, and in Malfoy's or Zabini's bed.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3841 | Read count: 12158 | Published: Dec 11, 2006 | Updated: Dec 11, 2006
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Dec 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: So it would definitely seem

Mmm. Fantastic! Definitely write more short stories.

Benediction by Mourning Broken Angel    (Reviews - 56)

A post-HBP Christmas fic. Christmas is a time for new beginnings and whether the gift is great or small, sometimes it is enough to change the course of a life.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3783 | Read count: 7977 | Published: Dec 14, 2006 | Updated: Dec 14, 2006
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: May 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lovely, simply lovely.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! :D

To Make a Malfoy Festive by Hearts Cadence    (Reviews - 65)

Ginny thinks no one is immune to her Christmas spirit, but then she's never tested the theory on Draco Malfoy.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 9116 | Read count: 6153 | Published: Dec 25, 2006 | Updated: Dec 25, 2006
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Dec 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Mmm. Fantastic.I'm awaiting the next chapters of your other stories with bated breath. And of course anything else you should choose to write. Keep it up! :)

Devious Draco Hatches a Plan by CCC    (Reviews - 71)

Draco's life takes an unexpected turn. He needs a plan to save himself, and he thinks Ginny is the key.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 7452 | Read count: 8548 | Published: Dec 28, 2006 | Updated: Aug 25, 2007
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Dec 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lovely. Ron is always amusingly clueless and rather unoriginal with his reparte. Honestly, "We are on Prefect duty" right after he says the only reason people come up there is to snog. Rather obvious, but at the same time amusing. Do keep updating other things, please.

Author's Response: Thank you. I will update the others as soon as possible.

More Than One Way Home by Vesica    (Reviews - 80)

Written for the 2006 DG_Smutakkah fic exchange. It hasn’t always been an easy road for them, but sometimes it takes getting really good and lost to find the way home again.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU, Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 13761 | Read count: 27074 | Published: Jan 02, 2007 | Updated: Jan 30, 2007
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Jan 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - What do you really want?

Mmm, lovely.

Author's Response: Many thanks. ~Ves

Anything you can do, I can do better by Peki    (Reviews - 24)

"It was a war, and he was determined to see her back down first." ~ Written for the D/G smutakkah 2006.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 7118 | Read count: 10644 | Published: Jan 05, 2007 | Updated: Jan 05, 2007
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Mar 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Quite amusing. As well as really good smut. Good job!

A Chocolate Covered Malfoy by CCC    (Reviews - 365)

Ginny and Draco are assigned to be partners in a cooking class. When they spill a pan full of chocolate cake batter, interesting things ensue.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 23020 | Read count: 89360 | Published: Jan 07, 2007 | Updated: Mar 25, 2007
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Mar 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Heh. Blaise is a smidge more with it than our Draco seems to be. I wonder how long it will take them to actually do the deed. Though the constant interuptions have been quite amusing.

Author's Response: Blaise can see what Draco is doing, but he is snowed by Luna. I think me are clueless when it comes to their own love lives.

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Mar 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

ah but it's such a special hell...

Author's Response: At least I won't be alone. : )

Secrets of Slytherin Royalty by Sunfire    (Reviews - 110)

Draco and Pansy are the perfect dungeon duo, but a secret from their past will change everything for them, and for any Gryffindors that get caught in the middle of it.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Narcissa Malfoy, Pansy Parkinson
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 11 | Word count: 20010 | Read count: 61766 | Published: Feb 15, 2007 | Updated: Mar 13, 2007
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Feb 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Mmm. Quite good. I shall be awaiting the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Feb 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Lovely. I can't wait to se what Pansy does when she finds out it was Potter she bumped into.

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Mar 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Fantastic. Though I still want to know how Pansy reacted to Harry running into her. But I suppose I shall have to wait for the next chapter.

Is Narcissa going to show up and interact with anyone in the next chapter?

Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Mar 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Mmm. That was rather interesting. I'm not sure it turned out quite the way I expected it to, but you managed to do it in such a way that it works anyway. Good chapter!

Coming Home by CCC    (Reviews - 50)

Harry comes home, and Ginny finds she has to leave.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 6435 | Read count: 9136 | Published: Mar 07, 2007 | Updated: Mar 07, 2007
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Mar 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It was absolutely lovely! I'm not all that fond of Harry so it's nice to see him not be all that fabulous once in a while. Aside from that, I loved the story anyway. Though... there was a small error right after the Harry incident when "She smiled as she thought about the other unofficial..." you repeated "other unofficial." It was a relatively small mistake and the sentence was still readable, so it wasn't a big deal. I just thought I'd tell you.

Author's Response: Thank you for pointing out the error. I appreciate that. Thank you for the review as well. Harry is a bit damaged in this story, and he isn't very likeable. Hopefully he'll get some counseling and all will be well.

The Window by Hearts Cadence    (Reviews - 24)

A midnight snowfall, moonlight through a frost-tinted window, and Ginny Weasley. It would change everything for Draco...and absolutely nothing.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1715 | Read count: 4425 | Published: Mar 10, 2007 | Updated: Mar 10, 2007
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Mar 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sad, but good even so. I'm not normally one for angst, but I suppose it's good to read it once in a while, just to change things up a bit. Good work!

Finding Comfort by MrsDanielRadcliffe    (Reviews - 84)

Draco and Ginny find that there are many complications when love blossoms during war.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Luna Lovegood, Molly Weasley, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 5 | Word count: 15171 | Read count: 22773 | Published: Mar 18, 2007 | Updated: May 16, 2007
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Reviewer: Kalira Signed
Date: Mar 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hilarious! I can't wait for the next chapter.