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Getting Lucky by CCC    (Reviews - 285)

When Ginny wins a bottle of Felix Felicis strange things happen. (This is set in Hogwarts era, but it's AU. We'll assume Slughorn still works there.)
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 12 | Word count: 20261 | Read count: 67540 | Published: Mar 18, 2009 | Updated: Mar 13, 2010
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Date: Jul 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Egad! This is kinda hot, but also creepy considering that they are still school age. Regardless, I'm super happy for an update on a story that I love! :D

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Date: Sep 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I still don't quite know where this is going, but BOY do I get giddy whenever you update this story. :D

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Date: Dec 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Aww, NOOO! :(

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Date: Feb 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oooh, could there be some residual feelings left? I can't wait to see.... *hinthint*

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Date: Mar 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Yes! What a great end to this chapter, and I can't wait for more. :D

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Date: Dec 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Not to pester you, but it would be THE BEST CHRISTMAS GIFT EVER if you updated this remarkable story. :D

My Evil Angel by starlit skyes    (Reviews - 22)

Ginny drew things that made her happy. Draco Malfoy was arrogant, beautiful – and evil. Ginny knew that. But drawing him still made her happy – because though he was cruel, she recognized, and fell in love with the angel...in his heart.

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My breathing was harsh, each breath ripping up my throat unwillingly.

"I tried my best. You asked me to hate you, and I tried my very best to," I said tremulously, my voice nearly incoherent.

What I had not said seemed to hang in the air, just as if I had said it: That if he asked me to love him, I would.

His eyes suddenly seemed to come alive, like melting pewter. They were burning with the emotion I had been fighting not to recall.

"But you know I never wanted you to," he whispered.

"I know."

Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 5722 | Read count: 5040 | Published: Mar 26, 2009 | Updated: Apr 15, 2009
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Date: Mar 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well first of all, poor Ginny. And then you start in with the mixed signals, and I can't wait to see what Ginny does with this next. Update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yeah, I felt sorry for Ginny, too. AND Draco. :( I'll try update soon! I'm glad you enjoyed this. ^_^

Reviewer: penfold Signed
Date: Apr 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh, this was an absolutely sweet and wonderful ending. I love how you left out the politics of what everybody else probably thought/thinks of their relationship and just kept it between the two of them. Well done! :)

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this! I like the ending, too, lol. Yes, I thought that for once they shouldn't care about what people think, and just think about how they love each other. Thanks again for the review! ^_^

To Follow a Flagnort by Girl With a Pearl Earring    (Reviews - 16)

It’s a well known fact that Luna Lovegood believes in many ridiculous theories, such as the existence of strange creatures that nobody else seems to be able to see. But when one of those creatures comes to life before her very eyes, a new quest is formed, and she sets to work trying to discover what to do along with two very unenthusiastic people: Ginny Weasley and Draco Malfoy.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3965 | Read count: 2939 | Published: Apr 09, 2009 | Updated: Apr 10, 2009
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Date: Apr 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: To Follow a Flagnort

Hehe, this was adorable and SO very funny! Thanks so much for a fun ride! :)

Not Quite an Affair by Rosalie    (Reviews - 522)

“You mustn’t tell them, Rose! Harry knows but Lily and the boys… you can’t breathe a word…”

When Rose Weasley went to her favorite aunt for advice on how to handle loving someone her family disapproved of, she never dreamed the older woman would have been able to relate so well. In the comfortable safety of her kitchen, Ginevra Potter told her niece everything and swore her to secrecy. But months later, when Ginevra notices that her daughter, Lily, is spending time with Scorpius Malfoy, Ginny realizes too late that the truth can never really be locked away. Children question their parents and their own identities and everyone must confront the past.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Other Characters
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Next Generation
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 32 | Word count: 108603 | Read count: 141831 | Published: Apr 11, 2009 | Updated: Dec 23, 2011
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Date: Jul 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Close Another Door

God, more sadness?! Please tell me it's going to get better soon, for everyone!

Author's Response: Of course... we may need to loosely interpret the word soon though. ;) I promise everything is resolved by the end which is in sight, not too many chapters away, but yes unfortunately/fortunately depending on how you see it, there are a few more plot twists planned in that short amount of time, which of course means angst for everybody. If its any consilation, I decided to intergect a tad less angst in some chapters (though I'm not sure anyone could tell either because angst is sort of always there to an extent) I'll keep the next one a bit lighter if at all possible, which I really don't know at this point. Oh well. ;) Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: penfold Signed
Date: Sep 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: King's Cross

Oh, GOD! *sob*

Author's Response: Oh yay! So it was an emotional chapter! Mission accomplished ;)

Love by Pipperstorms    (Reviews - 20)

Here’s the thing about love; no one ever tells you the truth. They don’t want to ruin whatever childhood fantasies you’re going to concoct up in that ‘pretty little head of yours.’ No, no, see, they’re all much more sadistic then that. They would rather you find out later that all the dreaming you did was for nothing. Then that way, you can be just like them, and suffer.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1098 | Read count: 3441 | Published: Apr 13, 2009 | Updated: Apr 13, 2009
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Date: Apr 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Trouble

Hahahaha! I don't normally like stories that are rough on the Chosen One, but this was too funny to not enjoy! Thanks! :D

Author's Response: aww but this one was just picking on him a little :-P Happy you liked it!!

Cat and Mouse by ClairdeLune    (Reviews - 12)

Would Draco's sixth year have gone differently if someone had reached out to him? Peer into Draco's mind as he goes through this pivotal point. It is a year of extreme importance, and everything should be running smoothly. Unfortunately for our hero, an insistant redhead keeps disrupting his plans and making him doubt his intentions. Is Ginny enough to save Draco from the dark path he's traversing? Maybe.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Severus Snape
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 2649 | Read count: 4927 | Published: Apr 17, 2009 | Updated: May 13, 2009
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Date: May 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: 2. Startling News in the Slytherin Compartment

Nice work up of the canon into how it SHOULD have went. It fit very well, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: haha, don't we all wish it had gone that way? thanks for reviewing!

Millions and Millions of Malfoys (And One Very Sleep-Deprived Ginny) by Anise    (Reviews - 401)

Ginny Weasley is absolutely sure that Draco Malfoy is hatching a particularly evil plot as junior head of the Ministry Department of Culture, and that it definitely involves puppy-strangling, bribing officials, and consistently wearing trousers tailored very tight in back. Or at least it's a theory that makes sense when she's been surviving on two hours of sleep a night for far too long, and Draco keeps vetoing her sketches for the new marble statues at the Ministry fountain. But then Luna Lovegood gives her a potion with some very curious effects, and Ginny finds that she just may have to revise her opinions about those evil trousers...
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 38 | Word count: 185356 | Read count: 62318 | Published: Apr 27, 2009 | Updated: Mar 07, 2010
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Date: Apr 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Poor sleep-deprived Ginny. The many Malfoys is fine, but all the gibberish and everything is awful. Still though, can't wait to see what craziness happens next!

False Pretenses by jessica k malfoy    (Reviews - 32)

Ginny has no faith that Ron can with a campaign against Harry. However, Draco seems to.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Future AU
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 12 | Word count: 20686 | Read count: 22860 | Published: May 01, 2009 | Updated: May 01, 2009
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Reviewer: penfold Signed
Date: May 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loved this in the fic exchange, and still do. :D You always write the best dialogue. Thanks for the fluff!

Author's Response: thank you so much! i'm glad you loved it :D

The Plot by Flighty Temptress    (Reviews - 12)

Draco and Ginny fight every time they see each other. Luna and Blaise are tired of listening to them complain about the other and hatch a plan that they hope will put an end to the enmity between them.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Luna Lovegood
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4000 | Read count: 3497 | Published: May 03, 2009 | Updated: May 05, 2009
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Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The only one I have...

Very sweet bit of fluff! I'm glad you had them take a few turns to get the kiss right, and that the spell on the room didn't let them out so fast. And I always love Luna and Blaise together in a story, so thanks!

Author's Response: Why, thank you! I had loads of fun with this one. ;) And I totally agree with you... Blaise/Luna is AWESOME!!!!!!! They might just be my second favourite ship.

And She Smiled by serinah    (Reviews - 30)

To him it was a relationship, to her, a shag. Love, jealousy, sadness. (Draco's in seventh year. The Second War of Voldemort was concluded last summer, and Draco's becoming or not becoming a Death Eater is not important in this story. A happy ending.)
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4048 | Read count: 4533 | Published: May 12, 2009 | Updated: May 12, 2009
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Date: May 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: And She Smiled

This was cute!

I do realize what story you're talking about, and in particular the scene with a guy putting his hand on her waist and Ginny waiting to see if Draco will do anything but he runs away instead. I can't remember which story that is exactly, but I'm sure somebody here does. :)

Author's Response: Yes! That was the detail and that's the story I was thinking of. Funny you can't remember which one it was either. Thank you for R&R'ing :)

When No One Else Was Looking by Flighty Temptress    (Reviews - 230)

Draco Malfoy is tired. Tired of having his life dictated for him. Tired of the pressure he feels to take on the Death Eater lifestyle his father wants for him. No one notices that Draco is unhappy, though. No one, that is, except for the one person he doesn't want around.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Luna Lovegood, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Neville Longbottom, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action, Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 37 | Word count: 64775 | Read count: 134688 | Published: May 14, 2009 | Updated: Oct 17, 2009
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Date: May 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Who knew a Malfoy could be so clumsy? ;) This is a good start - I'll be back to read more!

Author's Response: Lol! I loved this part, where he's making all that noise!

Ravaging Romance, Without A Wand by hummie    (Reviews - 30)

Ginny is shocked to discover just how different Muggles are when it comes to sex.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 4224 | Read count: 2209 | Published: May 17, 2009 | Updated: Sep 05, 2022
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Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: What Do You Mean By Unnatural?

Such a great start! I look forward to where you're going with this, and to Ginny's and Draco's "education". ;)

Author's Response: Haha :) I look forward to their "education" as well! I have SUCH a great line for Draco to say. Ah, I better start writing :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

A Lingering Glimpse by Ahranne    (Reviews - 13)

As each of us die we leave behind glimpses of our lives that linger in places we have been. Those memories, those pieces of our lives, are the most powerful form of magic. We ourselves are not important. It's what's inside of us. What lives on when we are gone.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2808 | Read count: 1839 | Published: May 21, 2009 | Updated: May 22, 2009
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Date: May 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: A Lingering Glimpse

Aww, so sad! I have a lump in my throat now. Thank you.

The Consequences of Boredom by CCC    (Reviews - 15)

Nineteen year old Ginny is stuck at Grimmauld Place with Draco. Boredom leads to interesting things.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1527 | Read count: 2724 | Published: Sep 27, 2009 | Updated: Sep 27, 2009
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Date: Sep 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hee, saucy! I like!

Author's Response: Thank you. I thought it was fun.

Look At Me by DeLaLune    (Reviews - 336)

Ginny finally has everything she's ever wanted. The boy of her dreams, top grades, and a way to finally break into the Golden Trio. When perfection turns out to be less than perfect she finds herself seeking solace in another journal. When this journal writes back, she is understandably worried—until she discovers the person writing back is a fellow student. A fellow student who refuses to divulge his identity. Does she want to know who this mystery person is? Or has she already revealed too much of herself?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 13 | Word count: 35569 | Read count: 19562 | Published: Nov 11, 2009 | Updated: Mar 18, 2010
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Date: Nov 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Finding Your Feet

Still loving this.

Draco's bearing a striking resemblance to Logan Huntzberger, I think. ;)

Author's Response: Oh my, and to think I'd never seen that show until after I wrote this story >.< Great minds think alike perhaps? :)

Of Dirty Pillows and Polyjuice Potion by Loveable Punk    (Reviews - 10)

Winner of the 2009 Fic Exchange Award for "Best Smut".
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4131 | Read count: 5466 | Published: Nov 24, 2009 | Updated: Nov 26, 2009
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Date: Dec 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Of Dirty Pillows and Polyjuice Potion

You wrote this for me, and I gotta tell you again how much I love it. You delivered on all counts, you saucy wench! ;)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks again for your review. Not sure I've ever been called a wench before, pirate is usually the term, lol.

An Introduction to Hormones by like a falling star    (Reviews - 57)

To Draco’s great delight, Ginny is properly introduced to her hormones.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 9528 | Read count: 13600 | Published: Dec 07, 2009 | Updated: Apr 15, 2010
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Date: Jan 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

YES, work for it, boy!

Great, can't wait to read more!

A Christmas Wish by CCC    (Reviews - 34)

A grownup Ginny reflects on her childhood romance with Draco. Will a wish on a star make her dreams come true, or is Draco destined to remain just a passionate memory?
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Future AU, Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1796 | Read count: 7408 | Published: Dec 10, 2009 | Updated: Dec 10, 2009
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Reviewer: penfold Signed
Date: Dec 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sweet little Christmas gift to us. Thank you! :)