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Real name: Yuval
Registered: Nov 27, 2009
Membership status: Member

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A Midwinter's Nightmare by Lirie Halliwell    (Reviews - 11)


{Ginevra:}
Have you forgotten?
The burning rooms and wordless conversations,
The magic and the physical starvation
That gathered at our beds each morn with pleas
To feel and be felt by our weakening resolutions?
Category: Poetry, Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1350 | Read count: 3057 | Published: Apr 20, 2007 | Updated: Apr 21, 2007
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Reviewer: Yuval Signed
Date: Jan 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Meaningless

Wow. Thank you. I thought that I'd found everything worth reading on this website, but I guess I was wrong. It's rare for me to find poetry that I enjoy, so thank you. I hope that you've written more.

No Rhyme or Reason by Persephone33, Mynuet    (Reviews - 58)

This is a series of (eventually) one hundred scenes from the lives of Draco and Ginny. There is no overarching theme; each of these "chapters" is a stand alone ficlet. Some of them might go together, but we make no promises.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU, Hogwarts-era, Next Generation, Past AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 28 | Word count: 37331 | Read count: 36771 | Published: Dec 02, 2009 | Updated: Feb 27, 2010
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Reviewer: Yuval Signed
Date: Jan 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Truth

Oh, so you two are back. I noticed that neither of you has published anything in quite some time, but I hope that atleast one starts again. You're both very good.

Hit and Run by bere    (Reviews - 17)

Both hands toyed with the envelope, flipping it over and over again. After a few moments, she ripped open the top of the envelope, finally tired of her own hesitance. A black and white picture slipped onto the floor, yellow around the edges from years of hiding in some wayward shoebox.

Draco Malfoy. Draco Malfoy was her next hit.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Blood, Graphic Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4736 | Read count: 1815 | Published: Dec 18, 2009 | Updated: Dec 18, 2009
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Reviewer: Yuval Signed
Date: Dec 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like this, and I'm a big fan of angst. Your narrating parts were completely fine, but you need to work a bit on the dialogue to make it less of a run-on.
Thank you for providing a fic with a nice story that is well written; it was exactly what I was looking for.

Daddy's Boots by Katzegeliebter    (Reviews - 15)

...her lips were cold and dry against the tiny hand that had fallen loose of the blankets, his green stuffed dragon hanging limply from his fingertips. If she placed her hand gently against his chest, she could feel his heart thrumming quietly within him, and the panic that had been slowly building in her chest dissipated...
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Future AU, Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 2845 | Read count: 4320 | Published: Jan 12, 2010 | Updated: Jan 12, 2010
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Reviewer: Yuval Signed
Date: Jan 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Daddy's Boots

So when will you be writing more stories?

Author's Response: I'm in the process of writing a companion piece to this fic. The plot is fleshed out, and the rough is almost complete- then there will be a lot of editing. I am hoping to have it done by the end of this week, but we will see.