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The Bracelet Game by kaerra    (Reviews - 16)

The girls of Hogwarts have donned jelly bracelets, and the game is afoot! Which of the four houses will emerge victorious in this battle of guile, locking charms, bonus points, bracelets and lots and lots of (unexplicit - sorry, smut fans) sex?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3950 | Read count: 632 | Published: Jun 18, 2004 | Updated: Jun 18, 2004
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Reviewer: MargretKelley Signed
Date: Sep 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Stacking the Odds

Oh man, I have to say that this brought back memories of when the "bracelet game" was popular back when I was in middle/high school.  Of course, we used the little rubber discs from bottle caps rather than actual jelly bracelets and we called them "sex bracelets".  I liked the idea of the charm Hermione added to them.

Demented Cherubs by CCC    (Reviews - 452)

Valentine's Day brings a surprise, but not the one Ginny was hoping for.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 15 | Word count: 34511 | Read count: 62511 | Published: Sep 12, 2007 | Updated: Jul 04, 2010
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Reviewer: MargretKelley Signed
Date: Jan 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ouch! I don't agree with Ginny's idea to block someone from the floo when she wasn't really in her own house, but I do think that Draco's reaction was a bit extreme as well. I hope they manage to patch things up!

Broken Chalice of Patience by serinah    (Reviews - 44)

COMPLETE! Yey! A woman of society, Astoria Malfoy nee Greengrass, has been brutally murdered - is it the money, revenge, or mindless rage? Any of those motives would automatically result in suspecting her husband.
Chief Investigator of Manslaughter Squad, Auror Potter is personally in charge of the investigation, but it is Ginevra Weasley, a rookie Auror of Morality Guard, who brings in the man Potter is looking for – Draco Malfoy.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Mystery
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 31264 | Read count: 14806 | Published: Oct 28, 2009 | Updated: Apr 16, 2011
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Reviewer: MargretKelley Signed
Date: Jan 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Geez, Harry's really being a jerk.  He's lucky Ginny only thumped him on the arm, I probably would've slapped his face then pushed him out the door.

Keep up the good work!  I love this story!

Look At Me by DeLaLune    (Reviews - 336)

Ginny finally has everything she's ever wanted. The boy of her dreams, top grades, and a way to finally break into the Golden Trio. When perfection turns out to be less than perfect she finds herself seeking solace in another journal. When this journal writes back, she is understandably worried—until she discovers the person writing back is a fellow student. A fellow student who refuses to divulge his identity. Does she want to know who this mystery person is? Or has she already revealed too much of herself?
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 13 | Word count: 35569 | Read count: 19227 | Published: Nov 11, 2009 | Updated: Mar 18, 2010
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Reviewer: MargretKelley Signed
Date: Jan 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - A Woman Scorned

Awww, I feel so sorry for them! :( Though to be honest, I do feel that Draco deserved everything Ginny told him, but I guess he doesn't really think he has any other choice since he's been brought up with money rather than love.

Past is Prologue by Butterfly_Kate    (Reviews - 15)

When a dark artifact is stolen from Gringotts, Auror Ginny Weasley finds herself with a brand new partner to help her investigate. What was once myth and legend becomes all too real as Ginny and Draco discover the truth about the case - and one another.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Neville Longbottom, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 2 | Word count: 7883 | Read count: 4335 | Published: Apr 12, 2010 | Updated: Apr 16, 2010
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Reviewer: MargretKelley Signed
Date: Apr 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it so far!  I do have to ask though, is that thick orange liquid Savage was drinking polyjuice potion?  If it is, just who sent Ginny on this case?!

Author's Response: Interesting questions :) I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Lifeless by ReverseBeauty    (Reviews - 68)

He is stalking and murdering young redheaded women.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Graphic Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 12 | Word count: 13987 | Read count: 32385 | Published: Apr 28, 2010 | Updated: Jun 13, 2010
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Reviewer: MargretKelley Signed
Date: Jun 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: The End Of Days

Woah, a tiny voice in my head has been saying all along "Draco's the killer!" but a much larger voice has been telling it to shut up because it couldn't possibly be true.  Another part of me was suspecting Harry since he hadn't really been mentioned so I thought that there might've been some really messy breakup that had gone on and he was killing everyone that reminded him of Ginny.

 

The end confuses me: did Ginny somehow manage to survive and is sneaking around to see Draco?  Or, has he just really gone round the bend and he just sees a hallucination of her?  I'd say that she might be a ghost, but the indications that her hair is red, she's dripping blood that's staining Draco's clothes, and the fact that she can touch him leads me to believe that that is not the case.

 

All in all, it's been a great read!  Congratulations on a job well done! :D



Author's Response: He's seeing her the way he left her, so yeah, he's hallucinating. You're probably the only one who really got it, haha. I was going to make him have a split personality type of deal but then I thought this was better. Thank you for the review :)

Paper Hearts by jessica k malfoy    (Reviews - 53)

Living in captivity can only last so long. ***COMPLETE***

Written for the LJ DG Fic Exchange 2010 and winner of the Best Angst award. The rating is for the warnings.

Category: Completed Fiction, Works in Progress
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 5 | Word count: 19128 | Read count: 16829 | Published: Jun 27, 2010 | Updated: Aug 24, 2010
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Reviewer: MargretKelley Signed
Date: Jun 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have to say, I read this when it first came out on LJ for the D/G fic exchange and the end made me cry.  It's a beautifully written piece that tugs at your heartstrings the whole time: when they had gotten the wand and were trying to bring down the wards to get out, when Draco slipped the venohex leaf to Ginny when she was trapped, and finally at the end when Ginny died in her sleep and was looking down at her dead body and waiting for Draco.

 

Keep up the great work!  You did a tremendous job!

The Consequences of Deception by CCC    (Reviews - 19)

Ginny follows Draco hoping to find information that will ingratiate her with the Golden Trio. What she finds changes her life, but not in the way she expected.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: GoF and below
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Action, Angst, Horror
Warnings: Blood
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 1956 | Read count: 2657 | Published: Jul 11, 2010 | Updated: Jul 11, 2010
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Reviewer: MargretKelley Signed
Date: Jul 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooh, nice.  Quite a damned if you do, damned if you don't situation she got herself into there.

 

I see that it's marked as a completed short story, but this would still make an awesome story if you expanded on it: how she explains things to the golden trio and how she adapts or fights the consequences of her actions.

 

Great job!