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D/G a secret guilty pleasure, so when I read a fic it has to be amazing. Sometimes, I can be a harsh critic, and if I write a review that isn't so nice....it shouldn't matter that much. Authors can't please everyone anyway.
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Draco's Dangerous Dilemma by Anise    (Reviews - 1418)

All Ginny wants is to get the upper hand just once with drool-worthy hunk of man candy and callous playboy Draco Malfoy before he moves on to his next careless conquest. So how did this simple plan lead to time travel, nefarious plots involving the most infamous whorehouse in the wizarding world, and the teenaged Draco’s achingly sweet, chocolate-flavored kisses? Even Draco Malfoy was innocent once, as Ginny learns all too well…

Chapter ONE HUNDRED EIGHTEEN Quote of the Day:

THE LAST CHAPTER

The minutes ticked by, long enough for Ginny to know that against all reason, all common sense, she still wanted impossible things from him. But she would leave. Even after today, even when her body ached from him and for him, when she could feel that he had begun to shape her to him, she would turn around and leave him. I will, I will, she thought.

“You don’t understand,” said Draco.

“Oh?” Ginny said stiffly. “At least he hadn’t touched her, she thought. She would not be able to find the strength to pull herself away from him, and she knew it.


Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Luna Lovegood, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: All but epilogue
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Action, Angst, Horror, Mystery, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: Ever Since Draco and Ginny: Reflections on Their (Un)Natural History
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Chapters: 118 | Word count: 575068 | Read count: 257043 | Published: Mar 19, 2010 | Updated: Dec 03, 2011
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Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Nov 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

Ok they seriously need to get together soon!!!! It's driving me nuts, I might as well be on a roller coaster!

Author's Response: Make sure your seat bar is in a locked position for the remainder of the ride, and hold on tight!! (evil laughter) Seriously, all of Part II is leading up to... I can't really say. ;) But all the waiting will be worth it.

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Dec 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

AWESOME!!!!!!!

It cant be Draco can it?? hahaha

Author's Response: I'm not going to say anything definite one way or the other. One thing I *will* say, though, is that in the next chapter, we're going to see more than one person who we haven't seen for a little while.

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Dec 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

OK the part about Astoria looking like an Afghan hound hit by about a dozen Anorexia charms KILLED ME!!!!! with laughter that is. I hate that bitch. I wonder what she's up to and why she needs Draco so much.

Btw I know I have said this a billion times---but ur Draco is YUMMMMY. Wanna read about my fave character some mooore.

Anise post a new chapter sooonnn

Author's Response: That description just kinda came to me, so I had to run with it... ;) There are a lot of reasons why Astoria needs to keep Draco with her and get him away from Ginny so much, but a huge one has already been revealed: he COULD consummate the bond with someone else. That would be very, very bad, from Astoria's POV (especially if it was Ginny.) And there is much more Draco coming up soon! :)

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Jan 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

planning on posting 68 soon??

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Jan 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Excellent chapters.

I don't understand why he wouldn't remember sleeping with her in the morning.

Astoria is a crazy bitch who needs to be put in her place. She's driving me mad. I don't know how Ginny will get around fucking D AFTER Astoria. Ugh gives me the creeps

Author's Response: Thanks! :) Well, we'll see what Draco remembers, and what he admits to... ;) And about that sex-with-Draco-before-Astoria thing... (snickers with knowledge of tricky little plot tricks to come) Let's just say that I've been working on that one for a LONG time.

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Jun 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Just so you know, I've been keeping up with DDD and it's wonderful. I'm just waiting for more D/G action!!! Hahah anyway keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks! Well, there's definitely more with each chapter, and as you've probably guessed, it's all building up to something. I think that everyone will be astonished by the sheer evil-ness of the plot when we finally get there, but I've kind of been warning y'all about that for a long time. ;) More soon!

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Jun 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

AWWW HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!! I just read some reviews :)

Author's Response: Thanks! :) (eats more virtual cake)

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Jul 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

AHHHHHH More please!

Author's Response: More soon. Ginny does get to the PBB in the next chapter, you know. ;) And there's a lot to cover after that...

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Aug 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

DUDEE!!!!!!! WHAT A CLIFFHANGER!!!!!

I'm sooooo curious as to what's gonna happen next between Weasley and Malfoy. I have a sneaky suspicion that Harry's gonna get in but how?!?! Oh, and I just LOVE Blaise....ahhaha I laughed at his life as the male slut in London. How soon is soon?

Author's Response: Lots and lots of things are going to happen next... and you're right to be suspicious about Harry. I love Blaise too. And soon is... you know... soon.... ;)

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Aug 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Ahhhh sooo slow...... Update sooon. I can tell that what Ginny and Draco share is very special, and he really cares about her. Ugh but really, those old men are so creepy.

Author's Response: They were creepily fun to write. Which is probably disturbing and wrong in so many ways... ;) Anyway, I think that readers are getting such different things out of the D/G relationship with the same information being presented, but there is definitely material there to support all interpretations. Clearly, we can see that he does care about her, because he's warning her about the danger of leaving the safe part of the CP even though he's taking a huge risk himself by talking to her privately. He's shown her some very vulnerable parts of himself. And there's incredible attraction and sexual tension, for sure. Yet he hasn't made her any promises, he's still married to Astoria, and there's no way to know what's really going on in his head or what his plans actually are. More soon!

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Aug 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

Hahaha I love Blaise. I really wonder what happened between Luna and him, but I'm guessing it's his fault? Luna is forgiving so I don't think they're going to have much problem. Draco deserved that after coming with that bitch Astoria. I just don't know how he'll react. lol. Poor guy. But he deserved it.

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Aug 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

First, I was shocked to see another chapter posted up, so thanks so much for that :).

Well done, though I'm thinking that it's beginning to drag now. This whole D/G thing is driving me a little insane; something needs to happen soon. Just when things are getting hot, something or someone interrupts. They really have been harbouring all these feelings for too long and they need to confront their feelings. Yes, it's dangerous but it always is going to be dangerous as long as Astoria is around.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying to keep to the quick updates, but we'll see how much longer that goes on. The thing about the D/G dynamic is that it's being driven by much more than their individual emotions, or even Astoria's plans... I really don't know what everyone will think once all of Draco's true motivations have been revealed. But that's just what happens at the end of all this. More soon!

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Sep 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Oooooh can't wait for the next!

Author's Response: It's coming soon.

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Sep 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Also, I do hope that you can wrap loose ends soon. :)

Does that mean that Draco found what he was looking for in Ginny?!?

Author's Response: The next few chapters are when it all starts to go down in a major way. But no; it doesn't mean that Draco found what he was looking for in Ginny.... he found something he's been searching for since lo, those many chapters ago. This will change everything.

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Sep 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

Ok, that's just ridiculous. I can't believe that you'd stop writing just because two people don't like your style. You don't have to defend your fic and then feel beaten down because those two people have problem with your fics. Who gives a shit? You're an amazing writer. I got introduced to fanfic and the DG world because Jedi Boadicea and (uh I can't remember their name) wrote The More is My Unrest. Right after that it was ANISE. I've told you time and time again that I'm a huge fan of H/G but that doesn't mean you have to write everything as canon. That's why we read fanfics...because it's so different. If people don't like your fics they're more than welcome to dip. But you can't stop writing. You're brilliant!

And honestly, I'm a little annoyed that you'd wanna quit after two critiques! WTF

Now, please continue with your wonderful writing :)

Author's Response: I'm not going to quit writing... but I think that I have to stop posting for now. I'm going through a LOT in RL. There's still so much ongoing with the medical stuff, honestly (especially with the bills! :P) I really think DDD needs to be finished before the posting continues, and it will get finished. I was working on it today. So don't worry. :)

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Sep 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99

Wow.

This was beautiful. I think it maybe one of your best chapters so far. Everything flows perfectly, and I feel like you've wrapped up a lot of loose ends.

Thanks.

I have been faithfully checking for updates, and look what I get! I've been doing economic and math and finance problems all week, and I get to read! woooh!

Thanks again.

Pleasepleaseplease update soon!

P.S. I'm so lost as to what's happening with your MRIs? What exactly do you have? I hope you get better with whatever it is :)

Author's Response: Thanks!! :) (Does Happy DDD Dance.) I'm glad it helped the project of relaxing from the math-related-stuff... (runs far, far away from frightening math. Kudos to you!) There will be more very soon. And re the P.S.... it's a long story involving many journeys into medical facilities. :P Email me if you really want to know more! But yes, I'm getting better. :)

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Oct 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

OMGGGGG!!!!!!!

finally we saw what the dog wants i just don't understand why. she just seems like a money hungry bitch.

aww, that's so sweet. i don't really understand the part about the butterfly. explain please??

xoxoxo

Author's Response: We'll learn a lot more about what Astoria really wants in the next chapters... it kind of gets slowly revealed as the plot unfolds. She's had some evil plans in the works for awhile. What Ginny doesn't know at this point-- and what she feels compelled to find out-- is whether or not what Blaise told her is really true. He said a couple of chapters ago that butterfly wish notes contain the unexpressed thoughts and wishes of the sender, and that they're sent only in the soft spaces. They often contain things that the sender would have had a lot of trouble actually saying without the note, and they usually don't even know that the note was actually sent. They tend to be sent in times of great emotional stress. Blaise sent one to Luna, and Dean sent one to Daphne. But nobody is better at hiding the truth than Draco. So Ginny does have her doubts. Could he possibly have actually meant everything he said?

In the next chapter, we find out the whole truth about that note... ;)

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Oct 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

UGH WHY MUST YOU LEAVE US IN SUSPENSE LIKE THIS?!?!!

I'm sorry I haven't been keeping up with the reviews but i've been dutifully checking and reading.

brilliant brilliant brilliant.

omg i'm so scared that they might get intimate with astoria's body eww.

Author's Response: Why? Oh, why ask why... try Butterbeer Dry... ;) Thanks so so so much! And I can't give anything away, but PLEASE, don't worry about anything. It's all going to be okay.:)

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Nov 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 112

amazing chapter!! although i'm getting annoyed at d for not recognizing that ginny's somewhere in there. it must be so painful for her to see so much contempt. anyway, because d has to tell the truth it applies for astoria too right? so can't he ask her if she's really astoria or not and she's compelled to say the truth?

they really need to get it on in the bedroom, too much suppression can't be good for them. however, i'm going to TRUST that you're not gonna have their first time in astorĂ­a's body. i shudder every time i see ginny trying to fight in astoria's bony weak body. ugh

mooore.

Author's Response: Thanks! Nope, only Draco has to tell the truth, because Ginny-wearing-Astoria's-body was the one who issued the consummation challenge. But we're going to find out a whole lot more very soon... ;) Just trust me! It'll all be okay!

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Nov 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

duuuude, update soon!!!

i'm going to die if i have to feel the pent up frustrations of both...

Author's Response: Don't die! That would not be good. Anyway, the update is coming soon. :)

Economy of the Heart by Jaden Malfoy    (Reviews - 79)

COMPLETE! Sequel to The Enemy of Souls. Draco Malfoy has a problem: his life has become unrecognizable. He’s willingly helping a Mudblood. He lives in a Muggle apartment. And he’s constantly forced to make nice with the biggest bunch of blood traitors around. The source of his problems? Ginny Weasley, the witch he’s possibly in love with. Which makes the secret he’s keeping from her his biggest problem of all—because this secret could ruin his relationship with Ginny forever. And he’s not the only one with a secret…
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Blaise Zabini (boy), D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Pansy Parkinson
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 14 | Word count: 142908 | Read count: 17941 | Published: Feb 18, 2011 | Updated: Jan 02, 2014
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Date: Jul 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven

I absolutely LOVE this. I really like how there's more going on to this story other than smut. You've developed the characters in a very believable way and the plot is quite intricate and interesting. Draco and Ginny seem to have a lot of trust issues that need to be resolved. I also find it interesting how they're not affectionate, kinda like Narcissa and Lucius. Oh, and Lucius' declaration about keeping Draco safe was touching, and even though he's evil at least he's still looking for the best interests of his family.

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Jul 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Nine

yayyyyy i lovelovelove this. sooooo realistically like all the characters and situations that would've happened in harry potter.

can't wait for the sequel!

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Jul 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Nine

nope, apparently there's more.
i
simply
cannot
wait
!

Malfoy In a Glass, Darkly by Anise    (Reviews - 129)

Many years ago, Draco Malfoy made a choice that led him very far away from Ginny Weasley, and the life that they might have shared. But not only is it hopeless to fight fate, its paths have a strange way of turning when you least expect them to, as a very unexpected person later learns...

Malfoy In a Glass Cover
Chapter FOURTEEN Quote of the Day:

“It can’t be worse than going to Romania. James is getting worse by the day. Lily doesn’t care about anything but her broom. And Mum and Dad—“ Albus breaks off.

Ginny. Scorpius can feel his face stiffen, and he has to conjure a coughing fit to cover it. Incredible how simply hearing of her, not even hearing her name, is enough to cause that stab of feeling in him. Just when he thinks that he’s over that sort of thing entirely—

“The point is, I’m so glad I can go with you,” sighs Albus.

Maybe I ought to wish that you couldn’t, thinks Scorpius. For your own good.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger
Compliant with: Fully compliant
Era: Future AU
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 14 | Word count: 74296 | Read count: 11751 | Published: Mar 05, 2011 | Updated: Jan 22, 2013
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Date: Mar 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmm it is fairly good.

However, I don't understand why you always write Harry in such negative light....he always is some kind of an evil ass in your stories. I don't think Rowling ever meant for him to be that way. I definitely do not think he will turn evil even if he gets a lot of power. I think D/G is more passionate, but I've always known that Harry and Ginny were going to end up together. Actually I was 8 when the book came out and I knew. It makes more sense.

I'm still a HUGE D/G fan, mainly your fics, though. When is the next chapter for DDD coming?!!

Author's Response: Thanks! :) As for Harry... I can't help it!! In the Aniseverse, that's how he is. He's not always evil, though. That's actually not how he is here; he's just very badly suited to Ginny. And that's the central problem with H/G IMHO-- yes they were always going to be together, but it's because that's how JKR fixed the game. The wrongness of it in terms of the character delineation, especially for Ginny being so dissociative and Harry being utterly, 100% dismissive of everything she went through in the Chamber, treating her like his little arm candy, having no respect for her at any point, the hideous way her character was stomped in the epilogue... there's a huge difference between something making sense, and something being right. Obviously I can get all het up about this, even now. ;) But I can't help it. I work with people who are extremely dissociative because of childhood trauma. And someone like Harry... that can be a very bad, bad, bad match for them.

Anyway! More of DDD soon. :)

Reviewer: humaira Signed
Date: Mar 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

My battery has limited power but I hope this gets through!!! It's about to die.

Here goes - I simply love this :) You are obviously very talented. I still have yet to find D/G story that's as good as yours. Ya know, I'm actually a hardcore H/G shipper ... I simply love Harry, but I also think that Draco and Ginny would be a great match provided that he was captured right. Especially, now that we know he is not TRULY evil. I always wondered about him...it's like he could turn either evil or hmm not exactly good but good with shades of grey. I always imagined him being desperate and hopeless for her, and Ginny being less dependent on him. I dunno why.

Anywayyy...I am actually worried this is going to be a Scorpius/Ginny fic. I hope not, it would be like Hermione/James Jr. to me....like you said, I hope it won't be tacky though I don't think it will be if it's you who's writing it :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Praise from an H/G shipper is high praise indeed. ;) I just can't do H/G-- I actually think I could have if Harry's character had been written differently in just a few ways, and they are ways that most others wouldn't think would be all that important, but are absolutely crucial to me. And yes, I could see the D/G relationship as you describe it, with Draco actually being more hopelessly enthralled with her, weaker even though he's convinced that he's stronger. The final and... all I promise is no tackiness, and that's a guarantee! (Although I suppose everybody has their own definition... okay, no tackiness by the general standard in your area, sixty-fourth dimension not included. :)