Counting proved to her that she was still alive even though she had spent many hours in that cell praying for death to take her.Category: Completed Short Stories
Beautiful. Hauntingly written - I love the borderline madness she is exhibiting and I love that Draco is so
patient with her. Nicely written, nice premise. Not really cliche at all. Even though the outcome was, the style in which you wrote it is lovely, and so consistant with the 'mood' of the piece (its a nice touch that she's still a bit mad).
Great job. I really liked this.
Her heart clenches with the fierce knowledge that she made a mistake, everything was wrong and it was too late for either of them.Category: Completed Short Stories
Nicely done. That was a nice way to blend D/G with DH Compliance. Great Job. My favourite bit was the last paragraph. Beautifully written.
“There’s this mirror,” she told him. “And I need to use it.”Category: Completed Short Stories
Winner of Darkest Fic and Best Interpretation of the Prompt at the 2008 D/G Fic Exchange.
Ooooo this is NICE. Great wordplay and I loved the interpretation of the prompt. Lovely work!
A one night stand left both wanting more.Category: Completed Short Stories
I don't know what part of the UK you come from but down here in the south when we talk about someone calling the police it's either 'Calling the police' or 'Calling the cops/coppers'. Bobbies a cute word I've not heard outside 1970's documentaries.
Cute one shot but I'd have liked more detail... ;-)
Author's Response: Oh, I wish I was from the UK. I'm American. My Policing professor who does research with police departments all over the world told the class about that. For my first one I'm glad you liked it. Hopefully I get better with the details.