One night in the life of Ginny Weasley, a little problem was formed. The little problem grew into a life-altering problem that changed Ginny's life forever, along with someone else’s...Category: Works in Progress
The storyboard for this story is very good. What was missing was an explaining to why Ginny went to a muggle doctor. If she just suspected that something was wrong with her, like a sickness, she could have gone to a healer and told her mum. There must be a reason for all the fuss she went through to not be recognized as Ginny Weasley. And also I noted that you have picked up on my last advice about feelings. But we need MORE. I mean she just got to know she was going to be a mother. She could be raging towards her own and the boy's stupidity. She could be sad and cry over the unfairness of it all. Resigned and desillusioned. Anything just more.
But as I said the story is good so keep it going.
Now to me. Where is the review for my last chapter, hmm? I missed it. hmph.
Author's Response: Thanks! lol. Yes I took into account your advice, and I will once more. Wheres your review? Well I am going to actually write one right now, as I just finished reading it, but decided to log in first. Been very busy this whole stupid week.
*COMPLETE* Destiny knew better than to bring these two together. One man, determined to draw back an errant Malfoy, is not so wise, and Ginny soon finds herself caught up in events that are not quite Fate.Category: Long and Completed
Wow, I'm so not disappointed! I don't leave reviews a lot but I think I oughta tell you that your story reminded me of why I started reading D/G. I think that's the best compliment I could give your story and it certainly deserves it. I hope that the publicists will realize what a great author you are!
Thanks a million
*DH SPOILERS* Consider yourself warned.Category: Completed Short Stories
This is my attempt to correct some of the wrongs...
This is so what REALLY happened. And I'm NOT delusional. Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you!