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A Not So Simple Kind of Life by dragonsangel68    (Reviews - 332)

SEQUEL TO DRAGON AND ANGEL. Draco and Ginny return from their honeymoon ready to live happily ever after, but their vast differences in background and family values make for an interesting start to their married life. Add Draco's inexperience with pregnant women and the stage is set for hilarity, confusion and embarrassment.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: Dragon and Angel Arc
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Chapters: 18 | Word count: 311733 | Read count: 47039 | Published: Apr 23, 2006 | Updated: Oct 18, 2009
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Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Nov 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Close to Catastrophe

Aww, that was so sweet. And the last sentence was pretty funny. It was just strange how you generally keep within the British world, I guess, but then used the American pants. But I really hope that neither Ron nor Harry accidentally spill about Draco originally forgetting Ginny's birthday, especially if Ron was upset over not going to dinner. Overall, it was a pretty wonderful chapter and I actually read it in one sitting! :)

Author's Response: Thank you :) I couldn\'t help myself with that last sentence *g* Being Australian, I have been raised with the British language (our school curriculum was very much based on UK English), but just about everything we read or come across is American, so it gives us a good balance. The \'pants\' thing is used in Australia (probably because \'trousers\' is deemed to be too posh) and I believe it\'s also used in the UK, but it\'s a modern English thing :) And I\'m not saying anything about the upcoming chapter or I\'ll give stuff away ;P

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Jan 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Nightmarish Qualities

That was lovely. I can't wait to see Ginny and Draco's revenge. I expect Ron'll be taking Parkinson's house now? I'm surprised that none of the boys pointed out to Arthur Ron's refusal to help Draco out because he isn't blood.

Author's Response: Thanks! Draco and Ginny will get their own back ;) Ron has made his mind up once and for all about their living arrangements. The boys are more inclined to take care of matters themselves, than to tattle to dad ;)

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Jun 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Murderous Monday

Ooh, revenge is oh so sweet. I had thought Draco would call a meeting with all the men, but I think this may be better. I just cannot believe Drake. He is quickly heading down a rather dangerous path.

Author's Response: Draco knows how to get the twins back without dirtying his own hands ;) Drake is just seeing how far he can push the boundaries - he hit a wall this time ;) Thanks!

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Oct 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Unforeseen Consequences

You know, I had expected Molly to be a little more scathing, but I'm really glad that the twins finally understood the gravity of the situation. *sigh* I suppose it's too much to ask that they hold off for a little while? I'm really looking forward to Ginny getting her say.

Author's Response: Molly was scathing and she won't be letting her twins forget it any time soon ;)

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Nov 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Unforeseen Consequences

I wasn't saying Molly wasn't scathing. It just seemed that the boys were harder on the twins than her. That was just my opinion.

Author's Response: The boys were harder on the twins, but they have young ones to be concerned about themselves and their little sister was injured. Just the thought of what might have happened if the twins had sent such a parcel to their houses spurred them into action ;)

The Different Days of Draco Malfoy by Hearts Cadence    (Reviews - 51)

Ginny knows Draco's patterns better than anyone, but she finds that some days, people just surprise you.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4663 | Read count: 7901 | Published: Aug 01, 2006 | Updated: Aug 01, 2006
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Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Jun 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, I love this! It was very cute, and I liked how it described his 'different days'. I thought that was kind of insightful of her. Anyway, it was very adorable. :)

A Spot of Trouble by Rainpuddle    (Reviews - 58)

Bill discovers his little sister is in a spot more trouble than he ever imagined.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Action, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 3 | Word count: 7084 | Read count: 5615 | Published: Sep 02, 2006 | Updated: Sep 24, 2006
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Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Dec 15, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: A Spot of Trouble - Chapter 2

Wow... absolutely touching and amazing. :)

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Dec 15, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: A Spot of Trouble - Chapter 3

Bill knows his sister's married? Wow, that Thornbury seems's like a real dunce. Bit annoying actually. And of course, so is Narcissa. Great chapter!

Conundrum by blazefury    (Reviews - 45)

Draco is a conundrum to Ginny, as he has all the virtues she dislikes, and none of the vices she admires and yet, she can’t help herself but love him.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 4673 | Read count: 5676 | Published: Sep 21, 2006 | Updated: Sep 22, 2006
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Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Dec 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Conundrum

Cute ending!

One Day by Black Alnair    (Reviews - 9)

“He would wake up screaming and call to her because he forgot she was dead.” But one day, one day...he would be okay.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Mystery, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 337 | Read count: 2252 | Published: Oct 09, 2006 | Updated: Oct 09, 2006
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Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Oct 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: One Day

I found it bittersweet. I definitely liked the last paragraph.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and letting me know!

The Wrong Mix by Serenitey    (Reviews - 35)

Draco makes a mistake that he will regret for the rest of his life.
Category: Completed Short Stories
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 1 | Word count: 310 | Read count: 2739 | Published: Oct 11, 2006 | Updated: Oct 12, 2006
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Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Oct 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lol What does the end have to do with the middle? Oh well, it was funny.

Author's Response: the middle is Ginny\'s reaction to Draco buying the wrong ice-cream and the end are the consequences for Draco.

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Oct 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh wait, I think I misread it. lol It was confusing at first.

Author's Response: sorry. a couple of people have said it was confusing but i\'m glad you got it sorted. thank you for your reviews :D

The Dangers of Mistletoe by CCC    (Reviews - 846)

Ginny is ready to kill whoever put magical mistletoe all over the castle. Draco finds the situation rather amusing.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 24 | Word count: 57029 | Read count: 263163 | Published: Oct 23, 2006 | Updated: Feb 28, 2007
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Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Oct 24, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lol I loved the list of targets she had. It's quite funny. I wonder, is there going to be any more?

Author's Response: There will be more as soon as I get a chance to write. Real life can really get in the way sometimes. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Nov 17, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

lol I loved Seamus's part in the whole matter. Twas very funny and even cute. :)

Author's Response: Thanks. Seamus is always a good side character.

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Nov 27, 2006 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh, is he going to turn back into a snake? I find him kinda cute this way.

Author's Response: Hopefully, he will evolve.

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Nov 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ahh, I liked seeing Luna act not so loony. "I think you should join me in the land of respectability and ask her to the dance.” was really quite a funny quote. Oh Draco, he just doesn't understand about the shirts does he? :)

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked the line. It made me smile when I wrote it. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Dec 02, 2006 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Hmm, Luna's very.......observant. I suppose it's partly because she's been friends with Ginny a while, but it's still surprising. Nice. ;)

Author's Response: I like a less goofy Luna myself. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Dec 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

lol The detention line was funny. At first I thought the blonde was his mother. Then I realized that just didn't fit. Either way, I loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you. I figure things can\'t run too smoothly at first.

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Dec 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Too cute for words. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you : )

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Jan 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OH MY GOSH!!!! There are just so many things....

First: The twins. It was such a roar that the mistletoe was their fault! And that Dumbledore would even allow them! Most hilarous.
Second: The cat. It reminded me of Draco before Ginny said anything. It's kinda cute.
Third: Whoa, those stupid women. I had figured out what was going on after the first comment in Lucius's company. I also loved what Ginny's mother did in response. That will be some surprise. :) Eww, but so disgusting. I wonder how it's transported? Narcissa definitely should have asked for the whole story.
Fourth: It was so cute that Draco obviously has better morals than the other men. I love how he feels his mother (and in the end, Ginny) deserve better. It gives me warm fuzzies. :)

Author's Response: I like to think that Draco can see his parents faults and decides he wants better. I love the twins. I wonder if there is a website devoted just to them?

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Jan 03, 2007 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh, HOW could I forget the owl and the sugar bowl? Sooo funny! Where did you get it? And in response to what braidedsilver said, perhaps some more fights?

Author's Response: The next chapter has been written for a while. There will be more fights. I just also like a few nice moments with Draco. IF he was an arse all of the time, he wouldn\'t be likable.

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Jan 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

This was one of those warm, touching chapters. It made me smile; I liked it. :)

Author's Response: Thank you. I\'m trying to show that Draco is evolving into a better person.

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Jan 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Good fight. I just wish she'd still held her ground when he kissed her. But he is still a prat sometimes.

Author's Response: I think the magic of the D/G stories is that they can\'t resist each other. I think we all wish we had that in real life.

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Jan 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Uh-oh, Luna's devious! lol Aww, Pans and Neville are cute together. Ha ha, tis funny that she pushed (with 'invisible' hands) Blaise into asking Luna out (or at least tried). This is just a cute chapter. Oh, and Demon....... very territorial isn't he?

Author's Response: I think Demon and DRaco have a lot in common. :)

Reviewer: WolfStar Signed
Date: Jan 25, 2007 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

lol Ahh, another cute chappie! I like how Pansy's very helpful and that Draco think's she's smug, very funny. "Any excuse to throw things at Draco's head is always entertaining." Tee hee, funny. I don't know about genius, but there's definitely more to Luna than meets the eye.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I\'m glad I made you laugh.