When I read the line,"Ginny pressed her hips into his, and he bit down hard on his lip. Her hands fell from his shoulders and moved towards a zipper" I knew you had to be influenced by brand new. Then I read the rest and i kept thinking, wow, I wonder if anyone else is catching the allusions here. But then at the bottom you wrote the lyrics. Great job, i love brand new and I love this one-shot. Thanks for writing.

What a lovely surprise! I was so excited to find that you updated, and even more excited to find that this chapter is just as good, if not better, than the rest! This story has taken a more interesting turn as things begin to fall into place, and your characterization of both Draco, Ginny, and Narcissa are consistent yet develop believably throughout the time line. All the mythology and the arts that influence this story only add to its elegance. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! But by the way, how many chapters are you planning on making this story? : )

Author's Response: Let me put it this way: I was planning on making this story 10 chapters. 20, tops. Now I\'m leaning towards 30, but I don\'t really like stories with endless chapters, so I\'ll definitely be wrapping this up--eventually. Then I had kind of planned on abandoning this, but two plot bunnies attacked me and so I might stick around a bit longer. Thanks for your review. I really appreciate the depth and precision of it!

Another great chapter. Though in the beginning it felt a bit rushed, I understand you wanted to get to the pensieve as fast as possible. Once inside, the images were powerful and appropriate. I liked seeing a more vulnerable Draco for once, if only for a few scenes. Back towards the beginning with the Wuthering Heights quote...well, you just made my day missy, because that is one of my favorite books ever. Ever. And thanks for picking a quote other than, "my love for Linton...," after all, the book does have more than one memorable line. As always, I find the mythology both enlightening and creative, and you are able to send your message home through other pathways beside common narrative. Just a few questions. Exactly how far along pregnant is Ginny? And have you decided a definite ending to this story, chapter wise? Thanks again, I adore your unique and intelligent voice.

Nice chapter! I can't wait for more! Your D/G scenes are very will done and subtle and complicated...fantastic!

Author's Response: Subtle and complicated, hmm, I like that! Thank you so much :)

Wow! This was soooo good and surprising! I thought for sure this was a story from Draco's perspective, not Harry's. Beautifully written, crafty and romantic. I have to tell you, I'm so glad it was Draco with Ginny in the end!

Author's Response: Well, I tried to make it seems as though it was from Draco\'s view, without actually lying to the reader, so I\'m glad it worked out. Thanks for the review!

Ah!! This chapter leaves me wanting so much more! It's getting interesting, but is antagonizing the way this story is moving so slowly towards its destination--you are evil! ;) Give Luna some luv! Can't wait for next chapter!

Author's Response: I sent ch 8 to the beta last night, so I\'m crossing fingers it will be polished up in a few days! Next chap is when the romance gets off the ground, so to speak, with Dancing with Faeries! ^_^

Need. More. Now. You are a very talented writer!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! My beta emailed and said she can\'t get to ten until next week \'cause of finals, but I figure I can be my own beta this week and hopefully update Friday. ^_^

Another nice chapter! However, sometimes I find myself confused by the paragraphs when you suddenly switch to someone else's thoughts or voice and I have to go back to reread. This subtracts slightly from the great idea you've got here. Your very creative, don't get me wrong! Also, the story gets a bit draggy when you keep going back to the same arguments.. I feel like I've read about the same dancing fiasco for the last three installments! Maybe try making your chapters a littler longer, even if it means you can't update so soon. Please keep going and continue the story, you improve with each chapter.. in fact, this is one of my favorite D/G shakespeare reworks. *hides from glares and hopes she isn't hated*

Author's Response: All concrit is welcome, and the chapters do get longer as the fic goes on. This site doesn\'t support page breaks, but when you see double paragraph spaces marked with dashes, that signals change from one pov to the next and the first line afterwards tells you who the pov person is and I stay in that pov until the next change marked with another set of double paragraph spaces. Only Draco, Ginny, Luna and Blaise have povs and they revolve in order depending on plot, which will have events from time to time that characters respond to and deal with the consequences from, like real life but more dramatic. ^_^

This is a great, intriguing story!! Update soon please! And last chapter's cabinet scene with the glass.. do I have to say it? : )

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

It's so good to see you back! I have to admit that I did not read this chapter yet, but I wanted to leave you some encouragement and warm fuzzies for having had the courage to return and fall in love with D/G again. I want to re-read this story over from the beginning before I read this chapter, but I just don't have the time at the moment. I was wondering what inspired you to come back and if you had any other new stories planned? I do recall this story have a lot of great moments. Best of luck!

Author's Response: Thank you for the advanced warm fuzzies!  I hope when you got around to it you enjoyed it!  I never actually intended to leave - life just kind of blew up in my face.  I kept up with stories I was following, I just didn't have time to sit down and write (though I did finish planning).  When I finally made enough time for myself to start writing again, my style was different and there was a ton of stuff that I wanted to fix.  So I decided to fix everything first (that took the better part of a year).  Then I started on the new chapter, which took about 3 months to get right - because I hadn't written anything new in ages and ages and ages.  While school is in session, I'm hoping to update every two months, then once a month minimum in the summer.  I don't have anything new planned in particular, though when I'm stuck I usually write a flufflet to get in the groove again.  Perhaps I'll start intregrating those into longer pieces that can also be posted.  Thank you for the encouragement and luck!

Hey this is great! I'm really loving your Luna character... she's very very entertaining! I'm also loving your D/G!!! The story is well written and suspenseful...who could ask for more?! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you. I will update asap.

Nice chapter! My favorite part? When Draco doesn't realize the names of Ginny's brothers!! I burst out laughing... I hope you update soon, this is getting really good...ps: i can't wait to find out what ginny's tattoo is of!!!

Author's Response: Thank you. I think the tattoo will be a dragon.

This was realy heartbreaking!! You have such a way with words, and present tense is hard to write, but you did fabulously!!