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The Sneaky Slytherin and the Redhead's Revenge by Yazethet    (Reviews - 371)

*COMPLETE* Blackmail, intrigue, lust and yes, snogging. He thought he detested her, she knows she loathes him. Can Draco win Ginny over before she tries to completely humiliate him in front of the entire school?
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: Blaise Zabini (boy), Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Other Characters, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Hogwarts-era
Genres: Humor, Romance
Warnings: Slash
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 29 | Word count: 82766 | Read count: 188724 | Published: May 10, 2004 | Updated: Apr 17, 2007
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Date: Apr 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 28: The Sneaky Slytherin

I started reading this a couple of years ago at FFN, and I had thought you had abandoned it. I was thrilled to see you start posting new chapters here, even if I haven't had a chance to read them until now. Today, I went back and reread the whole story, and it is even better than I remembered. I absolutely love the dynamic between Draco and Ginny, and the way you used details from the beginning of the story to help bolster the later parts. I am very much looking forward to finding out how this ends!

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Date: Apr 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 29: The Redhead's Revenge

This is an excellent ending. I love that Ginny is just as devious as she has been through the whole story. It's clear that she will eventually own up to her feelings in public, and that's really all we could ask for. And Draco knows it too, but is just too sneaky to say it out loud. Thank you ever so much for writing this story. I'm sure that it will be one that I read again and again!

Tangled Web by Rainpuddle    (Reviews - 109)

It all started with an insult and a stolen kiss, then it became so much more.


Draco and Ginny at Hogwarts. The prequel to And Baby Makes Three.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 26795 | Read count: 18080 | Published: May 13, 2004 | Updated: Jan 04, 2007
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Date: Jan 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Hogmanay

Aaargh! You can't leave it there! Now I have more questions than ever. Grr. Please don't take a year (or was it two?) to write the next chapter. Please?

Author's Response: It won\'t be that long, I promise!

And Baby Makes Three by Rainpuddle    (Reviews - 96)

Draco and Ginny begin their next great adventure - parenthood. This story is open ended, but technically complete since each piece is a stand alone.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 12 | Word count: 24963 | Read count: 75489 | Published: May 15, 2004 | Updated: Mar 13, 2006
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Date: Mar 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 12: Rubber Duckie, You're the One

This is absolutely hilarious! I particularly like Molly's lack of embarrassment and all the embarrassment that causes among everyone else. Thank you very much for this!

The Cabbage Capers by Rainpuddle    (Reviews - 80)

Continuation of And Baby Makes Three. Draco and Ginny are the parents of two young sons. See who wins the battle for control of the Malfoy household. A collection of cookies and stories. This story is open ended, but technically complete. Each chapter is a stand alone story.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 25174 | Read count: 36498 | Published: May 18, 2004 | Updated: Jan 22, 2006
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Date: Jan 23, 2006 Title: Chapter 9: Grin and Bare It

That was incredibly cute! Usually, I would try to point out something I particularly like about a story, but in this case, it is all so good and so well put together that I can't pick just one thing. Thanks for the story!

Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review!

Fifteen Years by Rainpuddle    (Reviews - 48)

Take a peek into lives of Draco and Ginny after fifteen years of marriage. Sequel to ABMT and The Cabbage Capers.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: HBP and below
Era: Future AU
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 7 | Word count: 31347 | Read count: 17000 | Published: May 29, 2004 | Updated: Jan 23, 2008
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Date: Jan 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Fifteen Years Cookie - Malfoy Flowers

So sweet! I like the bits you've added since I read the earlier draft, especially, “Oh, you managed just fine,” she teased. “We ended up with Gareth didn’t we?” Hee hee! Apparently Rauri isn't the only one of his children to frustrate Draco's attempts to get to Ginny!


Author's Response: Draco feels that all of his children have done nothing but try to keep him from his wife! I\'m so glad you enjoyed it!

Unbidden Desires by Sue Bridehead    (Reviews - 83)

COMPLETE! When Draco Malfoy overhears Ron Weasley saying something about a mirror that apparently showed him a glimpse of the future, he is determined to find this mirror and use it to aid Lord Voldemort. But things don’t always go as we plan, do they? Written mostly from Draco’s POV, this fic will include mysterious spells, transfer students, strange and interesting new plants, problem parents, OotP members, occlumency, Draco Malfoy with attitude, Ginny Weasley with even more attitude -- and at least one person gets kissed! Ships include D/G, R/Hr.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: OotP and below
Era: None
Genres: Mystery, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 24 | Word count: 135975 | Read count: 69705 | Published: Jun 10, 2004 | Updated: Jun 02, 2005
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Date: Mar 31, 2005 Title: Chapter 22: What I Am

This is quite an interesting chapter. Lots of new info. I particularly liked the little incident with Flitwick!

Author's Response: Good - I thought the bit with Flitwick falling down was kind of funny. I kept giggling as I was writing it, but I hoped someone else would be amused, too. I mean, Flitwick cursing, in that squeaky little voice of his? How silly is that? :p Hey, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Jun 02, 2005 Title: Chapter 24: Interhouse Cooperation Week

Thank you for your story. I have enjoyed it very much! Whether you write a sequel or something else next, I will look forward to it. You seem to have lots of good ideas!

Sisters of War by StrangerWithMyFace    (Reviews - 41)

There's a new race residing in the Forbidden Forest; when Ginny Weasley ends up in their custody, things begin to change for her, and also for the Malfoys. Meanwhile, war rages on.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Action, Drama
Warnings: Blood, Graphic Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 40103 | Read count: 1769 | Published: Jun 15, 2004 | Updated: Jan 22, 2007
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Date: Jan 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Sorry, Charlie

An update! How exciting! I love the ending of the chapter, but even more, I love the way Ginny's perception of Molly changed over the course of the chapter. She really grew up. And the details about Molly were wonderful, and the kinds of things I would never think of myself, but are totally in character now that I think about them. Thank you very much for the update. I will be eagerly awaiting the next one!

Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted to add Molly to the \"sisterhood\" of tough women characters in this fic. She\'s not like the traditional feminist amazons but she\'ll kick your ass none the less!

Dragon and Angel by dragonsangel68    (Reviews - 748)

COMPLETE!  Strolling through Diagon Alley Lucius Malfoy comes across a little boy who could have been Draco's twin.  Has his family tree been expanded, without his knowledge?  Has Draco been keeping secrets?  Or is he oblivious to the fact that he may have an heir?
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: Dragon and Angel Arc
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Chapters: 56 | Word count: 387242 | Read count: 277697 | Published: Jun 27, 2004 | Updated: Jan 11, 2006
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Date: Feb 06, 2005 Title: Chapter 46: I Did It

I really like this story, especially how well-defined the characters are. The one thing that had bothered me was that Angel seemed too perfect. It is nice to know she isn't!

Author's Response: Thanks! Angel is far from perfect but she's really good at projecting the image of perfection :D

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Date: Mar 02, 2005 Title: Chapter 47: Daddy's Naughty

Hmm...this reminds me of some of the fights I have with my husband... You sure do a good job of capturing the feel of a real relationship.

Author's Response: Thanks! Most is taken from experience so it's great to hear that I've got it right :D

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Date: Dec 05, 2005 Title: Chapter 55: Welcome to the Family

Draco getting caught with Ginny is just priceless! Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Thanks! I couldn't help but allow him to be caught out... after all Molly hasn't "welcomed" him into the family properly yet ;)

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Jan 12, 2006 Title: Chapter 56: Help

What a lovely chapter! The wedding was touching but with enough humor to keep it from getting sappy. I'm sad that the story is over--it almost seems like the end of an era. But I guess I can't complain too much if you are writing a sequel! Thank you very much for the story. I have thoroughly enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)  Sappy weddings don\'t do much for me either and no one\'s big day goes exactly according to plan so there\'s much opportunity for humor to slip in.  It was a really fun chapter to write :)

Exquisite Irony by Myanceris    (Reviews - 291)

Harry is dead; Voldemort won (or did he?); Ginny Weasley is all alone, left to the mercies of the Malfoy family.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Lucius Malfoy, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Angst, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Blood, Character Death, Sexual Violence
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 18 | Word count: 74695 | Read count: 84888 | Published: Aug 11, 2004 | Updated: Jul 23, 2008
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Date: Jul 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Compromise and Cogitation

I'm thrilled to see a new chapter from you! I was sure you had abandoned this story, but I'm happy to be proven wrong. I'm not so happy that Draco is in a snit, though. I guess it was inevitable, however, knowing Draco. :) Anyway, thanks for the update, and I will look forward to the next one whenever you have the time to write it!

The Baby's Got A Secret by KatherineGrace    (Reviews - 131)

A Draco/Ginny fic in the view of, mainly, the trio...Ginny's got a secret, and the trio's determined to find out what it is...Rated for profanity in later chapters.

Chapter 1: The trio discusses Plan A.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Sorta Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 28 | Word count: 53948 | Read count: 98925 | Published: Aug 18, 2004 | Updated: Aug 26, 2005
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Date: Feb 25, 2005 Title: Chapter 27: Merely An Option

This chapter is so poignant! I have a tendency to turn my engagement ring to my palm when I am uncertain of the situation, so that resonated with me. And I loved it when Molly suggested that Draco wake Ginny up at the end!

The Little Gryffindor by Wyvern159    (Reviews - 50)

After her first year, Ginny keeps a very tight circle of friends. A chance meeting in the Potions Hall sets off a chain of events that will burrow her into Slytherin, and ultimately, Draco Malfoy.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 6 | Word count: 20318 | Read count: 2210 | Published: Aug 31, 2004 | Updated: Aug 24, 2005
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Date: Feb 24, 2005 Title: Chapter 3: A Peaceful Interlude

I just read the first three chapters and enjoyed them very much. This last seems somewhat transitional, but it brings up some questions. I am particularly interested in where you are going with the geneaologies...

Owned by Mynuet    (Reviews - 216)

Draco owns the Furies, a quidditch team which just happens to have a certain Ginny Weasley on the roster. After some flying in the rain, their relationship turns physical and may eventually develop a smidgen of plot.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley
Compliant with: None
Era: Future AU
Genres: Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 9 | Word count: 23030 | Read count: 75650 | Published: Sep 10, 2004 | Updated: Jul 21, 2007
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Date: Dec 30, 2005 Title: Chapter 6: Payback

I'm interested to see how the dynamic changes now that Ginny will be on a new team. And the interaction between Draco and Molly is priceless! I giggled through the first half of the chapter.

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Jul 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Enquiry

Hee! I'm glad you didn't end this with the last chapter, as you thought you might. I love the way Ginny manages to con the other owner, and especially how sexy Draco finds it. Thanks for posting!

My Life As I Don't Know It by enoimreh    (Reviews - 50)

One day, Ginny wakes up to find herself married to Draco Malfoy and the mother of a 16 year old boy. If you knew who you were going to marry and how your life was going to turn out, what would you do?

Not written in first person.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Blaise Zabini (boy), D/G Offspring, Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Molly Weasley, Other Characters
Compliant with: None
Era: Post-Hogwarts
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 5 | Word count: 38156 | Read count: 6693 | Published: Sep 12, 2004 | Updated: Apr 02, 2007
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Date: Feb 09, 2005 Title: Chapter 2: Lost

This is an interesting concept, and so far it is very well-executed. I am looking forward to the next chapter!

Homecoming: In Things Unseen by Adelagia    (Reviews - 112)

Part 1 of 2 in the Homecoming series. After coming face to face with the Dark Lord, Draco has second thoughts about the Death Eaters and flees to Hogwarts. There he finds sanctuary, an unlikely friend, and an alarmingly ambiguous future. Rated R for swears, just in case.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Definitely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Character Death
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 12 | Word count: 20659 | Read count: 11660 | Published: Sep 16, 2004 | Updated: Mar 10, 2006
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Date: Jan 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Oh, what a bittersweet chapter! I love the line, "Oh lord, Ginny, we've both been monumentally stupid." It ties all sorts of stuff together. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Heh, I added that line in the specific hope of making the scene slightly less gooey. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Embellished Signed
Date: Mar 10, 2006 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

Add me to the list of people who will do you unspeakable evils if you leave this here. Though I did enjoy the story thoroughly until the end. Thanks for writing it, and please don't wait too long for part two!

Bands by Mynuet    (Reviews - 101)

Rock bands at Hogwarts! Blossoming romance! And you would not believe what can be done with an oboe. A total guilty pleasure fic that is nowhere near complete.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 4 | Word count: 5666 | Read count: 13139 | Published: Oct 11, 2004 | Updated: Aug 03, 2007
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Date: Apr 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 3: The Watcher

Hee hee! I see you chose option (b). I guess I can't argue too much! This is pretty funny. I particularly like Harry's cluelessness.

As far as songs go, there is one cheesy pop song that just popped into my head. It would probably be entirely OOC for Draco to sing, and therefore might be really funny. I think it might be from the late '80s rather than late '90's, though. Anyway, how about "More Than Words"?

Winning the Cup by madalene3666    (Reviews - 276)

Draco decides that he wants to go for the Cup and challenges Ginny to the next match.
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
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Chapters: 16 | Word count: 63382 | Read count: 38719 | Published: Oct 22, 2004 | Updated: Aug 22, 2005
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Date: Apr 11, 2005 Title: Chapter 14: The Chaser tries for the score

I love this chapter! All the wonderful tension! I can't wait to see how the Weasleys react.

Hold Me, Heal Me by sugarbear_1269    (Reviews - 172)

In a world where Death Eaters reign and good wizards hide in plain sight, preconceived notions must be redefined. AU for post-Hogwarts setting. WARNING: Allusion to H/Hr since I posted this at Portkey. Please don't bludgeon me; I almost did it myself.
Category: Works in Progress
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Romance, Angst, Drama
Warnings: None
Completed: No
Series: None
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Chapters: 11 | Word count: 29460 | Read count: 23838 | Published: Oct 25, 2004 | Updated: Sep 03, 2006
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Date: Mar 27, 2005 Title: Chapter 4: Gently Comes Their Slumber

I really like the progression of this chapter. The way Draco and Ginny's relationship builds has exactly the right pace. I'm looking forward to more.

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Date: Sep 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 11: Battlefield

Aargh! The tension! This is a very exciting, nerve-wracking chapter. I'm looking forward to the resolution, because it has to be less stressful than this. Despite the stress, thank you very much for the update. I always like to see new work from you!