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Real name: Alyssa Saunders
Registered: Feb 27, 2005
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Reviews by Clarinet Girl Lyss

Dark Days by jessica k malfoy    (Reviews - 72)

As the war rages on, Ginny finds herself in prison underneath Draco Malfoy. The Dark Lord's prison is the stuff nightmare's are made of, but a chain of events causes the feelings to start changing. *COMPLETED* This is basically my own recreation of While You Were Sleeping by Burgosdamsco, which is an awesome story, just not finished yet. And yes, I did have her permission!
Category: Long and Completed
Rating: Extremely Naughty
Characters: Luna Lovegood, Molly Weasley, Narcissa Malfoy
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Blood, Graphic Violence, Sexual Violence
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 7 | Word count: 12959 | Read count: 20838 | Published: Mar 02, 2005 | Updated: Apr 21, 2005
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Reviewer: Clarinet Girl Lyss Signed
Date: Oct 03, 2005 Title: Chapter 7: Goodbyes

That was absolutely brilliant. I'm in agreement that it was a tad rushed and a tad foggy at points, but over all very nicely done. I'm looking forward to seeing the sequal of this, as it's quickly become one of my favorite fanfics! Bless it be, Lyss

Irritations by Mynuet    (Reviews - 99)

An essay written by your Site Mommy on the topic of things that those of us who read through and approve your fics wish you wouldn't do.
Category: Essays
Rating: Not Naughty
Characters: None
Compliant with: None
Era: None
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None
Completed: Yes
Series: None
Table of Contents

Chapters: 1 | Word count: 3554 | Read count: 8772 | Published: May 30, 2005 | Updated: May 30, 2005
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Reviewer: Clarinet Girl Lyss Signed
Date: Apr 20, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Irritations

I agree wholeheartedly with what you've said here. The only thing that truly caught my attention was the cutting/suicidal remarks. I do feel that, while someone shouldn't write a fic about a suicidal ginny just because they want it as a plot point, sometimes it's used to express what they really feel when they have no other outlet. That was my case. I was suicidal a couple of years back, and I was at the time starting writing HP fics, so I added that into Ginny's character in the beginning. I'll still bring things from that back, but it's not the major focus because events are changing things, bigger events are happening. Being suicidal doesn't mean that you're never happy. Being suicidal can mean you bounce back and forth between moods, as I did, largely because of changing events in my life. Now, granted, I don't like fics that have a suicidal Ginny who suddenly becomes little miss sunshine within five seconds of a "saviour" and the fic is all about how wonderful her "saviour" is, however I do feel that there is some validity to happiness or feelings of contentment after a period of suicidal thoughts, because I know what I went through myself. I don't disagree with you entirely, I just thought it was important that you understood the other side to what goes on inside the head of someone who is or has been depressed.

~Lyss