Draco owns the Furies, a quidditch team which just happens to have a certain Ginny Weasley on the roster. After some flying in the rain, their relationship turns physical and may eventually develop a smidgen of plot.Category: Long and Completed
Wow! I have loved this story, and not just because it is smutty, though that helps..tee hee tee hee. I love the humor, the different facets to both Ginny and Draco....please tell me it is not finished....
Kristine
It's his last summer holiday before leaving Hogwarts and Draco is in agony over missing Ginny. A wonderful discovery in his father's library gives him the power to be with her...but who will pay the price for the ghastly mistake he overlooks?Category: Works in Progress
You author's you do that on purpose and I hate you for that! You write an amazing chapter and then leavign us hanging....dying for more....sigh.... you said in your response to my review that there will be thirty something chapters?? Couldn't you just lock yourself in your room, ignore all your family and commitments and just finish the story and post it?.....Better yet, write the prequel and sequel in there two and post them all...you have till sunday....lol...seriously though..can't wait till more...still love it!!!
Author's Response: Hehe - I wish I could hole myself up in my room and write. I'd love that. But alas, hubby and baby girl need to be taken care of. *grin* Glad you're loving the story! (and I agree on previewing the reviews before we submit. would be nice.)
darn typos...and I meant too as in also not two. Sigh really must email the archive Genie and get them to figure a way for us to preview our review before submitting...sorry
He can't help but watch her dance through life.Category: Completed Short Stories
My exact first thought when I read the last line of this story was... god damn she is a geat writer....which I already knew from reading coming home...but still..you have quite a talent.
Hogwarts is setting Phantom of the Opera. Secrets are revealed and love ensues as the curtains opens... "Close your eyes, for your eyes will only show the thruth and the truth is not what you want to see. In the dark it's easy to pretend. Dare you trust the music of the night?"Category: Long and Completed
Interesting story. Should be interesting to see how you play it out. Just hope that in this story the Angel of Music gets his love. Nice use of imagery!
Poor, Harry. Can't help whom you love though. I love how you incorporate lines from the show into the story. The words way you write just draws you into the story. Keep up the great work!...Kristine
**Completed** Ginny can't figure out why Draco is watching her all the time. When both of them lose parts of their families, they are forced together. But Ginny still has to deal with Tom & his obsession with her. Sorry guys, I'm awful at summaries!Category: Long and Completed
I can not believe that no one has yet to review to these two new chapters. Perhaps they are in shock that you could actually believe that two new chpaters would satisfy our craving for more of the story. Oh my, gotta love this chapter. My only concern is that while I don't mind a man who crys, in fact I admire a man that can show emotion, it just made Draco seem a tad weak. That was not meant as a criticism, just a comment. I assume you just wanted to show Draco as human and vunerable and it worked well as a segway into getting he and Gin back together. I don't know something in me just has a hard time seeing Draco as weak. Is it just me? Perhaps it is. I have loved all the books, and the movies, but when I read the books I get more of a sense of a prideful Draco. Please don't take it as criticism because I adore this story and your writing! It just must be me as I was dissapointed in the way that Draco was protrayed in the movie POA. He seemed to weak and whiney, cowardly. Not the way I picture Draco... Even though I haven't been as praising in this review as I usually am (though I still think it was great!)...will you please still update soon??
It is difficult to keep coming up with new ways to say how wonderful an author's writing is, so I will just say "Loved IT!" One reviewer said that they thought these last two chapters were a bit rushed. I didn't think so, I thought that though there was a quick pace it was important for these two chapters. It showed the intensity of the events and the importance of them. Corse, Ginny obviously has more self control then I do....lol....Lie in a bed with Draco and NOT sleep with him....sigh...I couldn't do it....guess I am just a wanton woman...lol....Not that my husband complains.... tee hee tee hee
ROFL!! Draco better keep his mouth off visible places for awhile...lol..
Wow! All I can say is wow. I never expected that it would be Ginny left behind...stupid of me when I read the title of the chapter but still....wow
It is not that I think that Ginny is a horrible, bad, slutty person for sleeping with Draco. It is just sad that this experience that should have been wonderful between two people who love each other, is tainted as she is using it to punish herself. So that when she looks back on her first time both in totality but also her first time with Draco, she will see it as not a happy event. Sad. For both of them. Sometimes we do go to our lover to take away the pain with pleasure but it sad that this is how her first time will be remembered. Fabulous story though...makes me wonder if the last refers only to making her his by branding her his with the intimacy or if he has given her more then just his love...a little strawberry blond to watch grow....maybe?....hmmm.....
**Finished** The sequel to Dark Days. The war comes to an end, but Ginny still hasn't heard from Draco. She decides to find him, and if he is alive, get him pardoned.Category: Long and Completed
That was great! If I had been in a chair I would have been sitting on the edge of my seat, as it was I was leaning forward towards my laptop...lol...that was really well written, the um.....how do I put this....anxiety...stress...seriousness....theemotion was palpable. Very well done indeed...but then you always do...
Life after Hogwarts was a mystery to Ginny Weasley, until one night she spent in the arms of Draco Malfoy changed everything. Now she has to deal with the unforseeable consequences. Will she be able to handle the hand fate had dealt her with?Category: Works in Progress
Man, this story is just fabulous! I have loved it from the first chapter! I am just compelled to say Oh my God is Draco in for a shock....serves him right...::is hyper with anticipation of the next chapter:: Yeah! Keep it up, one of my favorite stories
Oh My! That was FABULOUS!....please oh please submit the next chapter soon!! I am not above begging....this chapter was just wonderful but it leaves me dying to see Draco's reaction to finding out that Ginny HAS given birth to his children. How he will react to his father when he finds out that he was denied the opportunity to be a part of the pregnancy and birth. And what is it with "Draco Jr.?" am wondering if it really IS his sub-consious talking to him or perhaps some Occulmency on his Father's part???.....hmmmmm....more soon please?
I am constantly amazed at the calibur of writing I find on this site. Your story is Very well written. You and put to page such imagery that we are drawn so effecttively into thier world. Your story line though similar to many others in the Draco not knowing about the baby theme you have presented it in a new and tantilizing way. I was also quite pleased with your concept of the history of Narcissa and Lucius. It really explains a lot about why Draco behaves as he does. I don't think that I really have to voice my displeasure in the fact that another chapter won't be readily forthcoming the betareader in me will try to understand the fact that you are waiting for yours to return but doesn't mean I have to like it. = )
You know this is what I hate about reading non-finished stories...it kills me to wait for more...sigh... This chapter was wonderful. I understand that being Draco's mate probably made it impossible for Ginny to prevent herself from being with him but it kills me to know that as strong and powerful a woman she is, she let herself be used by him again. Course forgetting she is his mate, just being in love with Draco would probably make her do the same.. This chapter...well this whole story really has been so well written it makes you feel as if you ARE Ginny, experiencing all of her joy and grief....well done...though may I please beg that you write and post chapter 15 much much quicker then you did 14, it has been killing me to wait for 14 and now I have to wait for 15...sigh. Don't take that personnally I made a simliar whine to "Ronlover" regarding the actual books...loved HBP sucks to have to wait 2 maybe 3 or 4 years for the last book... Keep up the great work!
Draco decides to break it off with Ginny as he's engaged to Parkinson (who else?). Quidditch reveals all. Inexcusable fluff.Category: Long and Completed
RE: your author's note...makes you just want to knock thier heads together doesn't it?...lol...loving the story!
HP's 7th year at Hogwarts. With renegade Death Eaters vowing revenge after Voldemort's downfall, and an explosive case that threatens to divide the wizarding community brought before the Wizengamot, two unlikely people manage to discover new feelings for each other.Category: Works in Progress
Neat story, I am enjoying it already!
Draco found Ginny in an abandoned classroom just after the Christmas holidays in Ginny's fifth year, and he did something unforgivable. But then, later on, she found him... and they both found that their combined fates could not be fought.Category: Long and Completed
This story is very good writing. I am untrigued at how you are protraying the story line. When you wrote of the assult you obviously knew how you wanted this story end progress and and eventually end. I say this because you wrote the scene as a violation and you have stressed that even Ginny understands that yes she was violated but must decide if it was truly rape. Rape is not just about the violation of the body, it is mainly about Control. It is about fear and power more then the sexual act. When you wrote the scene those aspects were glaringly missing. You obviously know something about psychology to have been able to write the scene the way you did as well as incorpate that knowledge in to this chapter as well. I do advise caution though as this line of story is very dicey. You could cause upset to some with this story line. Especially considering that there are woman out there that have been raped and were physically or pyschologically unable to scream or struggle to prevent the rape. And, orgasm is a natural function of the body just because a woman climax during a rape doesnt mean it is not rape. Perhaps an author's note with such comment would be appropriate including the comment that you don't condone violation by any means, just to make the point. I am greatly impressed with your writing and I will be intrigued to read more. I am enjoying the story immensly and I think that you are handling the story with great care and wisdom. If this continues I know that story will be fabulous! Sincerely, Kristine
Sorry about the typos like the word intrigued and the back tracking with some of the sentences, am typing on my laptop with a baby sleeping on me and trying not to wake her...sorry. I swear we need a way to preview our review before we submit so we can read them and correct stupid things...lol..
All relationships have a begining, even the unusual ones.Category: Works in Progress
As I said to another author in a nother review this evening.... I love unique stories, and this one qualifies. I love how you protrayed Ginny as strong and capable desite being used by Tom. That she stands up as Draco's equal not his meager little inferior whom he just happen to fall for. Keep it, I look forward to reading more.
The need for space drives Draco and Ginny to share a room noone knows about.Category: Completed Short Stories
Never really liked these short stories as they just get me longing more. This one however was very sweet. Showed good progression. Showed how they met, got together and had a good ending. Well Done.
It wasn’t half as bad as she thought it would be.Category: Completed Short Stories
Cute, short but sweet. Very cute. Put a smile on my face!
The good news is that magical chocolate really does have romance-enhancing properties. The bad news is that at Hogwarts, well, everybody's been giving chocolate to everyone else at Hogwarts for years. Including the giant squid. What will happen when the consequences catch up with them all at last?Category: Completed Short Stories
That was....dare I say it?.....deliciously fantastic! I laughed my butt off... ::::thinking...wouldn't it be nice if you actually could laugh your butt off:: sorry I digress, was really funny, I shuddered at the thought of Dumbledore and the squid....ewwww....lol...great!