on Dec 07, 2008 01:33 pm
this story... i dunno what it is but its great.
on Aug 15, 2008 06:16 pm
This was really good. My favorite part is when Dracp talks about being 'spectacular'.
on Apr 30, 2008 06:39 am
Very well done.
on Mar 03, 2008 11:31 am
*sighs* What a wonderful ficlet.
I like the style of this short story. Having the short sentences regarding a killer, but relating it to what's happening between Draco and Ginny is very well done.
I can't put my finger on it, but there's something about this story that causes it to cross the 'good fic' line into definitely being a great fic. Maybe it's just the fact that the characters are well-rounded, even though we only meet them in short sections.
I love that "spectacular" comment. I burst out laughing when Draco confronted Ginny about it. It was hilarious seeing her pride at her comment turn into embarrassment.
I think I've got it now; it's the fact that you've managed to get humour, characterisation and a plot that binds this all together to make the story more than the sum of its parts.
I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work. :)
on Feb 05, 2008 09:40 am
this was funny and cute. good job.
on Mar 17, 2007 12:28 pm
I love this story! Good job!
on Nov 08, 2006 05:17 am
on Aug 16, 2006 05:16 pm
~Amazing...A truely wonderful story~
on May 28, 2006 07:09 pm
why won't he marry her? Does he not think she's worthy or something? Andd what about that killer business? If he's a killer than how does he find the time for her? And why didn't he want to go to the reunion?
So many unanswered questions! You have to expand and update soon! Or I will positively die!
kim reviewed Killer
on Apr 22, 2006 03:52 pm
it asolutly spectacular!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mnb reviewed Killer
on Sep 17, 2005 12:47 pm
Oh! Why can't there be more?
on Feb 13, 2005 04:07 am
That was good. I liked it.
Magica reviewed Killer
on Oct 21, 2004 11:45 am
Very cute! You should write more stories like that, I really like the way that the characters were portrayed.
on Oct 21, 2004 08:59 am
What a wonderful little passionate ficlet! I adored your portrayal of their relationship.
sjr reviewed Killer
on Oct 21, 2004 01:32 am
it was totally xcellent....loved it....draco makes me melt....evn tho he isnt real...u painted a picture of the perfect draco...i love draco...lol
Stacy reviewed Killer
on Oct 20, 2004 05:07 pm
Oh, that was so good! I really liked how you had the "rules" in bold, guiding the story. It's probably a sign of obsession when Draco can be a contract killer and I still find him sexy, but that's okay, we'll just chalk it up to good writing :o) I really enjoyed this, it was lovely writing and you maintained the bittersweet tone throughout. Well done!
annie reviewed Killer
on Oct 20, 2004 04:43 pm
this was sooo good. i loved it so much! its so mysterious , but its awesome =D