Name: Mollie reviewed Chapter 10 on Dec 16, 2007 10:42 pm
I love this story. This chapter is so sad, but I love how you see that Ginny and Draco are coming closer together. I wish that you had more interaction between the two of them. Please update soon!!!
Name: Pipperstorms reviewed Chapter 10 on Dec 16, 2007 05:16 am
This was a sweet chapter, not action filled, but deffentally full of emotions. Very nicely done.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Chapter 10 on Dec 15, 2007 07:35 am
great job i love the story! update soon!
Name: CCC reviewed Chapter 10 on Dec 14, 2007 02:00 pm
Oh, I'm sad for Ginny. Her family needs to suck it up and make amends. Go type.
Name: shaded reviewed Chapter 10 on Dec 14, 2007 09:06 am
I must say that I found every part of this chapter enjoyable to read. At the start, with Ginny apprehensive about how she looks and trying to convince herself that it wasn't for Draco's benefit, then the heart-warming moment when Ginny calls Narcissa 'mother', the way that Draco is opening up, becoming more expressive with Doron and Ginny in his life; all of these are wonderful happenances in the story. The undercurrent of Ginny slowly letting go of her old family ties and embracing that of her new family is a transition that is very believable and understandable and the almost dull ache Ginny experienced is almost palpable.

I can't wait to read more of this story. When I saw that there was a new chapter up, I got very excited, and rightly so - it met and exceeded all of my expectations. I hope that there will be more development between Draco and Ginny, especially now that they're on summer break with no schoolwork to distract them. Although, whatever you decide to have in the next chapter, I'm sure I'll enjoy reading it.
Name: Amanda Mancini reviewed Chapter 10 on Dec 14, 2007 07:32 am
Oh, I do hope she can maintain a friendship with Hermione. Surely, Hermione, with a muggle backgriund, can understand historically how young mothers were abandonned and can see it as the barbaric practice it is.
Name: INDYCICURN reviewed Chapter 10 on Dec 13, 2007 06:07 pm
Wahhh...I want more. Now I am as impatient as little Doron...I want more! Soon, please.
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