Name: Dracogirl reviewed Separation on Feb 16, 2010 09:38 pm
Mrs. Tamara I had to read this twice. I wasn't sure when I read "Lady" if their relationship had started prior to their farce of Death Eater husband/ Oppressed wife or if they were forced to marry and grew to love each other. In the last chapter I found out how their relationship started; and how it ended in this chapter. I was so shocked at the end of this chapter when he stunned her and abducted her off to Malfoy Manor. The D/G interaction in this chapter was intense. They both felt betrayed; Ginny because of what he did and Draco because she left when he thought she would 'understand'. They still loved each other. I liked that he loved her so much that he was willing to even help her save her family! Can't
wait until the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hehe, you can call me JT, since you're such an amazing reviewer of mine. :) nd their relationship with each other was sort of before their marriage, since they had a simple relationship in Hogwarts. I like to think that Hogwarts was more of a fling, and that the real relationship (that was serious) started after they got married. As for him abducting her, well, he has to do what he feels he has to do. It should all make sense in Chapter 3. I'm glad that you liked the D/G interraction, though, because it gets a lot worse (or better?) in the next chapter. He does love her a lot, though, or else he wouldn't really even bother to help her at all. I hope to submit Chapter 3 tonight, so watch for that one. Thanks again for reading adn reiveiwng and for your amazing words!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed First meeting on Feb 16, 2010 07:53 pm
I so enjoyed this chapter. My favorite part was really her excuses for continuing it the 3rd and 4th time - 'she couldn’t bring herself to ruin his moment' and 'she hadn’t been able to resist giving him some sort of reward'. I'm thinking the beginning of their relationship is not where their "story" really begins so I'm looking forward to chapters 3 and 4.

Author's Response: Hey Dracogirl, thank you so much! Hehe, I likdd td their excuses too. She wants to kiss him, but she doesn't want to feel like she wants to kiss him. Weird psychology going on there. You're right, this isn't where their story really begins, but I thought I'd show a bit of how their relationship first happened. The realy story--the one-shot I was originally going to post as the entire prequel--is chapter 3. But then, I decided to add chapters 1 and 2 as back ground and chapter 4 as a sort of last wrap-up. Chapter 3, I think I'm going to submit tonight, so hopefully it'll be up soon. It's the most important chapter, too. Anyways, thanAks so much fo reading and reviewing and for your kind words!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed First meeting on Feb 16, 2010 05:43 pm
now i'm already all wrapped up and tucked in bed, but first thing tomorrow i'll tell you everthing about how my carnaval went and some crazy, unbelievable thing that happened to use in the kitchen scene and i've been meaning to tell you forever.


Author's Response: Hehe, *giggles* now I have a vision where you're wrapped up like a sushi roll in those Japanese restaurants. It sounds like you have an exciting life, though. *sighs and grumps* I wish I could go to carnivals. And I can't wait for you to tell me your crazy idea, because it sounds like it's going to be a lot of fun to use. *ahem* on Draco and Ginny in the fic, of course. Message me soon!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed First meeting on Feb 16, 2010 05:34 pm


I'm sorry the revie is late, but i just got back to civilization, i was away in a farm for carnaval and just got back.
promisse to answer messages and send you reviewss tomorrow!


Author's Response: CHORAVECLAW! I really, really, really miss you. :( I never find you on facebook, and it's killing me, Manu. *wipes tears out of my eyes* Never leave civilization again, Manu, unless it's to pursue a cute guy. Then, that's okay. It was weird not seeing you read and review the same fics I did, though. I was kind of getting used to seeing your name right above or right below mine...but hopefully this means that you have tons of nice D/G fics to catch up on. And yes, please send me a message so you can tell me your kitchen smut idea over on fb or something. :)
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed First meeting on Feb 16, 2010 05:17 pm
i like it already so that not an issue. imagine having to kidnap ur spouse into marriage *falls off chair laughing*. well a malfoy gets whatever a malfoy wants right...i adore snarky, bossy, cocky, jealous draco. i love draco from vineyard summer but i think my favourite draco right now is tutoring services draco. he's positively delicious. i reread that fic frequently when im bored. i think vineyard... and tutoring... are my 2 fave fanon dracos right now. i cant wait for ur characterizations of him. just please dont make ron too hotheaded and unreasonable...hopefully u post 2nite... i need something to read [even though i have massive law textbooks i should be reading instead]

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you so much. As for kidnapping your spouse into marriage, that was a weird idea for me to wrap my head around when I first read rrabbit's I'm Yours, where Draco basically kidnaps Gin and forces her to marry him and carry his child. And yes, Draco Malfoy sees, and Draco Malfoy wants. He's a bit spoiled that way, but that's why we love him, right? I too, loved Draco from Vineyard Summer, and took your advice to reread it again while waiting for an update. As for Tutoring Services, I read that a while ago, so I don't really remember how Draco was in that, but I'll definitely have to go back and check. I do hope you'll like my Draco, though. He doesn't really come across the way I want in this fic (it's better demonstrated in "Lady"), but I'm hoping to really play with his character in depth more in The Long Fic That Has Yet to be Written. I hope I can post tonight too, but I have to finish homework first. I'm rather jealous of you, though. I want to get into law graduate school, and your textbooks sound amazing. And yes, I'm going to stop ebing such a enrd and sign off so that I can actually upload again tonight, if possible. :)
Name: readhead1755 reviewed Separation on Feb 16, 2010 04:43 pm
AHH, you mentioned chapter 3 and 4. I need to see them! I really like the development where he decides he is going to kidnap her to save her.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes I mentioned chapters 3 and 4 because they will be the final chapters. That means that I'm halfway done. Whew! And I hope to upload Chapter 3 tonight so that you can find out what happens. I don't know if you've read "Lady of the House" yet, but I strongly recommend doing so before reading Chapter 3 because it will really increase your sense of "Oh, I get it," feeling when you read Chapter 3. I'm glad that you like the development and his outrageous plan to save her, though, that was fun to write. Anyways, thanks again for reading and reviewing and for your kinds words!
Name: Frust-sheep reviewed Separation on Feb 16, 2010 05:44 am
Really interesting so far. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you like it so far, because the first two chapters were kind of tedious for me to write, since the meat of the story comes in Chapter 3 before concluding in Chapter 4. Hopefully, you've read "Lady" first though. If you haven't, I strongly recommend reading that one first because it will make you go "Oh, I get it" for Chapter 3. Anyways, thanks again for reading and reviewing and for your kinds words!
Name: swingersnowy reviewed Separation on Feb 16, 2010 04:48 am
Ooh I really am so happy that you're continuing with the Lady of the House plotline!!! Keep up the great work; you're got a great start!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It seems like a lot of people who read "Lady" wanted a sort of prequel to how the D/G relationship actually began. Since that one-shot has a soft spot in my heart, and I kind of cave to popular whim, I decided to crank this out. It's only four chapters long, and I hope to get the third chapter uploaded either tonight or tomorrow, so I hope you like that as much as the beginning. You'll be happy that you read "Lady" first, though, and that's all I'm saying for Chapter 3. Thanks again for reading and reviewing and for your kinds words!
Name: peppermint reviewed Separation on Feb 16, 2010 03:49 am
Both chapters 1 and 2 were great teasers....really looking forward to seeing what happened next...until they reach the ‘Lady of the House’ stage. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter I really hope will be submitted either tonight or tomorrow. The fic as a whole sin't very long--only four chapters total, so we're halfway there. I'm glad that you liked the beginning though. The next chapter will be about Ginny and Draco working through their issues, and the fourth chapter will be a sort of mesh between retelling "Lady" from their POVs and the events after "Lady" to wrap things up once and for all. Thanks again for reading and revieiwng and for your kind words!
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed Separation on Feb 16, 2010 02:21 am
Gorgeous!! Thank you so much for doing this story, it's already giving a great perspective on what happened in the first Lady. I love the way they met, really cute, and the way they broke up was so sad!
Thanks again for this and good luck for the next chapters, I can't wait!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you liked this little prequel. I wasn't going to do one, but people asked, and I caved eventually. Besides, I think Chapter 3 will hopefully be sort of an "Oh, I get it!" moment to people who've read "Lady". The unnamed narrator kind of comes back, sort of, but not really. I'm glad that you liked their beginning and their unfortunate breakup. I'm working on the next chapter and hope to submit it either tonight or tomorrow. There's only really 2 more chapters to the story, so I hope you stick around for the finale. Thanks again for reading and reviewing and for your kind words!
Name: stracery reviewed First meeting on Feb 16, 2010 12:41 am
Yay, the long anticipated prologue! I'm very glad to see the history of your 'Lady of the House' story and that you decided to show us their beginning. You have a knack for writing very fluid and imaginative fics - kudos to you!

Author's Response: Haha, thank you so much stracery! I really wasn't going to do a prequel, but a lot of people (I think including you?) wanted to know the D/G history, so I decided to cave. It's really not going to be long: two more chapters and it'll be finished so that I can move onto my long fic. I'm so glad that you like my fics. :) It made me feel all fuzzy inside when you said I had fluid and imaginative fics because I'm still trying to better define my writing style. Anyways, thanks again, for reading and reviewing and for all your kind words!
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed Separation on Feb 15, 2010 10:06 pm
...and then there's more :D. yay! D/G buddy present and accounted for. Draco has such twisted logic. asking the dark lord to spare her *rolls eyes* he's so sweet when he's naive. but i cant wait for the unnamed narrator to come back... yay for MAIN D/G fic :D

Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad you've got my back, dear Nutmeg44. And Draco is a little overly possessive and worried! he has some strange reasoning going on there. *sighs* After what the narrator said in "Lady", it turned out she was right after all. Draco did have to kidnap Ginny in order to get her to marry him. *rolls eyes with you* He is cute, though, and a lot of fun to write. Possessive and jealous Draco are my two favorites. (Hmm, I think especially jealous!Draco, like in Vineyard Summer, but you're not going to see that here!) Anyways, the main narrator doesn't really come back...Argh, I would love to say more, but I'll let you find out in Chapters 3 and 4, which I should be uploading tomorrow or tonight (hopefully). It's going to be pretty short, though, just wo more chapters, and then it's done, so hopefully you'll like it. :)
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed First meeting on Feb 15, 2010 09:42 pm
oh i love this. the way she shunted astoria aside was kinda funny. lovely. i cant wait for more... :)

Author's Response: Haha, thanks. To tell you the truth, I'm not super excited about this chaptered fic. It was more of a sort of thank you to people who reviewed "Lady" and wanted to know the D/G past behind it. I'm a bit more excited to write chapters 3 and 4 because the unnamed narrator gets to come back! But, I'm kind of just getting this out of the way so that I can focus on my MAIN chaptered fic project. I'm excited to start on that, and will hopefully be submitting that soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing and for being so nice about it anyway! You know I luv you, D/G buddy. :)
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