Name: sugarquills92 reviewed
Chapter Eleven: Whisper on May 08, 2008 09:54 am
haha
that was a really great story!
i love the character's audacity!
and the manicing Harry was perfect!!
Name: tannisha sen reviewed
Chapter Eleven: Whisper on Mar 25, 2006 04:13 pm
this is the best fic i have ever read.
this is absolutely fantastic.pleas please do write more about d/g
Author's Response: thanks for the lovely review... i don't seem to get good ones very often so it was certainly a nice change!
Name: Rachael reviewed
Chapter Eleven: Whisper on Dec 09, 2005 09:23 pm
Wow. I read this and loved it so much I brought my sister in here and had her read it to. The whole story is very well written I was on the edge of my seat during someparts of it. The only flaw(if it could be called that) would be that this all happened in such a short amount of time. But over all I REALLY enjoyed the story and so did my sister and we will be reading the sequel soon.
Author's Response: thanks for the feedback - yes it certainly needs some tweaking but i'm glad you enjoyed the story anyway!
Name: Dragon Hermione reviewed
Chapter Eleven: Whisper on Nov 27, 2005 06:24 pm
Very emotive and very nice. Towards the end there it was a heart-string puller for sure. Excellent story I love how you've related every chapter to an Evanescence song, very creative.
Author's Response: thanks! the story's a little rough around the edges but if there is one thing i'm still proud of it's the whole feeling of the story!
Name: Loony reviewed
Chapter Eleven: Whisper on Oct 14, 2005 03:17 pm
I love evanescence and own the CD "Fallen" and I think it's really brilliant how you worked the songs into this fic. Waiting for the sequel,
Loony
Name: dgfantatic reviewed
Chapter Eleven: Whisper on Sep 17, 2005 07:32 pm
As i sat at the computer, and took in the beautiful wording that has put this story together..i could not believe the lack of reviews. This story was amazing. The words and meaning and flow of it all captured my heart and put me through the same feelings that the characters were going through. Everything about this story made it special. The wording, the flow, the power of it all. It was amazing, beautiful. It was perfect. You seemed to capture the characters emotions with utter perfection..and you also seemed to capture my emotions and play with them aswell..depending on how the story was going. I loved this. You did a fantastic job..and i look forward to reading any other stories you may have on this site.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I love to hear that at least one or two people have enjoyed my story on this site. When I first posted this story on fanfiction.net I had such an amazing response that I couldn't help but post on the D&G Archive. However, I haven't had tremendous response here, nor very positive reviews so it was a wonderful change to hear that you loved it so much. And I hate to say that my second story can't be posted on this site because it does not focus enough on d/g so if you want to read it go to fanfiction.net...
Name: ......... reviewed
Chapter Eleven: Whisper on Sep 04, 2005 07:31 pm
it was a good plot, but it seemed choppy at times....a lot of the time.
Author's Response: First off, thank you so much for your review and your criticism. Secondly, reading Fallen now I realize that the story is extremely choppy - I was so set on the way the plot was supposed to occur that I did not make the transitions very smooth. However, this is one of the things that I hope I can improve on in the sequel... do read it and see what you think!
Name: Nasty4904 reviewed
Chapter Eleven: Whisper on Aug 18, 2005 07:29 am
Hey great story. I nearly - NEARLY - cried, that means it is really good, I have only ever cried at a story once and I have read ALOT of romance stories. I am looking forward to reading your new series, the story was full of suspence, romance *of course DUH* and very touching. Really liked it. xXx
Author's Response: thanks so much for the kind review! i haven't been doing a lot of writing lately because there hasn't been much response for the sequel so it was nice to see that people are still reading and enjoying this story. but i am pleased to say that the next chapter of the sequel is partially written and i will be posting it next week. so read the sequel "Somethign Real" at fanfiction.net and watch for the next chapter soon!
Name: rnm105 reviewed
Chapter Eleven: Whisper on Apr 11, 2005 03:12 pm
OMG! I cried at the ending. It was so beautiful how Draco and Ginny ended up together! lol GREAT JOB!
I really shouldn't read these so much. Reading them only makes me hate Harry even more, but I love the pairing so!
I've -GOT- to read the sequal!
Author's Response: Ahhh I love it when people say they've cried! And not to boast but I did love the way that Fallen ended - but of course I couldn't let it end so 'happily ever after'. Do tell me what you think of the sequel...
Name: Jelly reviewed
Chapter Eleven: Whisper on Dec 18, 2004 01:13 am
ok I have thought of a way to express myself better. It felt to me that Evanescence wrote those songs for your story rather than the other way around. So beautifully enmeshed in each other. Once again, excellent work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!! I've actually had a few flames on this story recently and I haven't been feeling too good about back I've been getting - but your review made me so happy. Really I'm so flattered and extremely happy that you liked Fallen. I have posted 2 chapters of the sequel called 'Something Real' on fanfiction.net and I'm jsut working out a few minor things in the next chapter now. So check it out there, and I can't wait to hear what you think!
dracosslytheringal
Name: Jelly reviewed
Chapter Eleven: Whisper on Dec 18, 2004 01:11 am
Absolutely amazing. I listened each song before reading the chapter, and I can tell you it was wonderful. I cried no less than 5 times during the reading. And hey I am crying again, thinking how beautiful this was. So, so well done. I don't think I have appropriate words to tell you how I am feeling about this story at the moment, but it was just so great. I am really looking forward to the sequeal, and I hope something nasty happens to Harry in it, he sure deserves it. Keep up the excellent work. Just a little note though, proof reading goes down a treat.
Name: lauren reviewed
Chapter Eleven: Whisper on Oct 31, 2004 12:27 pm
wow! what is lucius going to do? i can't wait fo the sequal
i really like your story
Name: Angel of Darkness reviewed
Chapter Eleven: Whisper on Sep 13, 2004 11:39 am
I love it! It's very nice. I do like how you used Amy Lee's songs in her ablum 'Fallen' for your story. It's a very nice one. I shall read the Sequel. Thank you! Bye!
Author's Response: I was so excited when I saw that I had another review - so thank so first off! And I love Evanescence, I think their music is so inspiring, as you can tell from the fact that I was able to write a whole story based on one album. And I'm very glad you liked the story, I just love hearing what people think about my writing!
This last part is a notice to anyone reading:
The sequel that I promised to post is on hiatus right now, as I just cannot devote enough time to the story as I'd like. So, if you'd like to read the prologue and chapter 1 of 'Something Real' please do so at fanfiction.net, where it is posted under the same author's name - dracosslytheringal (with two s'!) - and view it there because I am not sure when I will get a chance to post here, since it takes so long... Thanks so much and keep reviewing - I love it!!
dracosslytheringal
Name: mk reviewed
Chapter Eleven: Whisper on Sep 11, 2004 09:20 am
that was soo good, i cried. i thought draco was actually dead, but im soooo glad he's not. ur story rocks! mk.
Author's Response: Ahh thanks so much for your review! I love it when people say that they cried, I don't know why, I guess because that means it was good? And I had actually considered killing Draco, but I just couldn't do it... I'm so happy you liked the story!
Name: Alicia reviewed
Chapter Eleven: Whisper on Sep 06, 2004 07:45 am
I love this story. You really captured the theme of the songs while blending it with Harry Potter. Bravo, can't wait for the sequel.
Author's Response: I'm so glad yo enjoyed Fallen. Thank you - I can only hope that I did justice to both Evanescence and Harry Potter. Not that I could ever come close to their talent - they are in a league of their own - but I definitely strived to write my best, so I'm glad you liked it! Keep watching for the sequel, I'm honestly hoping to post it here soon. (But for anyone getting impatient I already have it posted on fanfiction.net under my name dracosslytheringal, and it is called Something Real.)
Name: Jawy reviewed
Chapter Eleven: Whisper on Sep 04, 2004 04:03 pm
YAY! You got all the chapters up. I'm glad to see that other people liked the story just as much as I did. Keep writing!
Author's Response: I know, it took forever and ALOT of wasted time but I finally got the story up! I've had hundreds of people reading the story (literally-over 100 people read the first chaper!), but I wish I had more reviews, so thanks for your review. And I will definitely keep writing, don't you worry...