Name: Shenna reviewed
Chapter Seven on Aug 19, 2007 11:41 am
awwww. i loved this chapter and since the first one the storytelling is going very smoothly. shenna
Name: Shenna reviewed
Chapter One on Aug 19, 2007 11:10 am
your story seemed a tiny bit rushed, but truthfully I think it would fit Draco's character from all we have seen and heard of him in the books, after all Lucius mad a mistake. He raised Draco to rule, and lead. Unfortunately he didn't take into consideration how far he went and other people's influences. Very good overall, I will be following your series. Shenna
Name: Nessa Rose reviewed
Chapter Twelve on Aug 03, 2007 09:58 am
Wow. This story had me alternatively laughing out loud, sighing in a fit of empathy, or, at the very end, on the verge of tears. Mostly now though I just want to know what happens next! I sorely hope that this brilliance has not been abandoned. It was fascinating to watch the characters, relationships, and definitely your skill as a writer naturally develop throughout the chapters. 'Twas pure delight to read and hope, hope, hopefully part two will soon be upon us!
Name: Kalira reviewed
Chapter One on May 27, 2007 01:17 pm
it's quite good so far.
Name: darkloveangel reviewed
Chapter Twelve on Nov 27, 2006 02:17 pm
OMG HOW CAN YOU DO THIS!!!!!!?????
I AM CRYING NOW I HATE YOU!!!
OK NO I DONT it was an okay fic BUT WHY HER!!!!!!! ahhahahahahahaahha TEAR;(!!!
OK OK WRITE FAST WRITE BEFORE I TRACK YOU DOWN!!!!
luv ya Tez
Name: Rikki reviewed
Chapter One on Oct 20, 2006 07:20 pm
*loves* Got sucked into your stories from lantern walk and this one hooked me sentence one. PERFECTION. I love love love your Draco.
Name: Silver_Charade reviewed
Chapter One on Sep 16, 2006 06:07 pm
Please update soon, that story was great, i think i acually cried at the end. Cant wait for part two.
`Jamie`
Name: RainyGrind reviewed
Chapter Twelve on Sep 05, 2006 06:29 am
oh My Gawd!!!!!!!
this story was sooooo good!!!!
but OMG She's DeaD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
waiting for Part 2!!
Name: padfootedmoony reviewed
Chapter Twelve on Jul 16, 2006 09:44 am
how could you end it like that? I love this fic and I better see a part 2 soon!
Name: padfootedmoony reviewed
Chapter Nine on Jul 14, 2006 08:24 pm
good job so far!
Name: rosie reviewed
Chapter Four on May 27, 2006 06:12 pm
hey,
the characters dont seem themselves for some reason. You just abruptly showed them being friends. There was no gradual change in feelings.
Name: dragonprincess reviewed
Chapter Twelve on Apr 27, 2006 12:48 pm
I can't believe you killed her! I hope it has a good reason in Part 2...
Name: dragonprincess reviewed
Chapter Eleven on Apr 26, 2006 04:31 pm
i cried...enough said.
Name: dragonprincess reviewed
Chapter Eleven on Apr 26, 2006 04:31 pm
i cried...enough said.
Name: patricia reviewed
Chapter Twelve on Apr 21, 2006 04:41 pm
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!what a way to end this please post the second part ASAP!
Name: spider reviewed
Chapter Twelve on Mar 29, 2006 04:46 pm
Oh, even if it will be quite a while, please do continue. I couldn't believe the cliffy that this ended on. But I shall go on to your other fics. Great job with this half of your story, I'm eagerly anticipating the rest.
Name: Jewels reviewed
Chapter Twelve on Mar 26, 2006 06:41 am
OH. My. God.
WOW. i dont know whether to cheer and clap or 'hunt you down' and threaten you with a thousand terrible deaths. hmmm. i think i'll cheer and clap. *applauds*. that was AMAZING. brilliant twist at the end, making everyone think malfoy would die and then 'killing' (she's not dead really is she?????cant be can she???oh god no she cant be dead...)ginny. Beautiful. cant wait for the second part. :D
Name: Jewels reviewed
Chapter Eleven on Mar 26, 2006 06:33 am
that was beautiful. and HEY! they kissed! :D Brilliant chapter and oh god please dont let draco die! :'( I really love this story. :D
Name: Jewels reviewed
Chapter Six on Mar 23, 2006 11:28 am
Oh smoooooooth muley, smooth. Lol...god i love your draco, he's so *sob* SPECIAL!!!! thankyou for writing such brilliant fanfiction, it brings light to my bland existence. :D
Name: Jewels reviewed
Chapter Two on Mar 23, 2006 11:09 am
Oh do i love your ginny!!!!! wow! i do...by the way. :D brilliant start...i have to keep reading now...:D
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Chapter Twelve on Mar 18, 2006 09:07 am
OMG!! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU DID THAT!! I'm literally on the brink of tears, poor Draco!
Please tell me that you've finished at least the first chapter of the next part and are planning on posting it soon because if you tell me here and now that Ginny doesn't come back or something of that nature I will be thoroughly upset!
I am the second person who will "hunt you down and do unspeakable evils to (you)" if you end the story here! Please update soon! and if there's anything I can do, you have my e-mail from previous reviews!
~Kaitlyn~
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Chapter Eleven on Mar 18, 2006 09:01 am
Oh no! They've finally found each other only to be ripped from one another's arms?
What is Draco going to do? Of course I hope he'll survive, and hopefully if he does Ginny isn't Pregnant because she's only 16!
Oh dear!
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Chapter Ten on Mar 18, 2006 08:55 am
Oh no! I'm dying to know what Ginny was going to tell him! She's going to be a healer I know that much from what Dumbledore said but I dunno what could have been so crazy that she burst into his room like that.
Poor Ginny and Draco! When will they finally be together?
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Chapter Nine on Mar 18, 2006 08:48 am
I really love this story and if you haven't yet found a beta I would be more than willing to help! And if you already have a beta but would like to bounce ideas off of someone you can bounce them off of me!
kaitlynsanzo@yahoo.com
If you put Draco and Ginny in the subject I'll know it's not junk mail :-)
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Chapter Eight on Mar 18, 2006 08:42 am
Aw! This was a really cute chapter! Although I have to admit that I'm worried for them! What is Snape going to have them do?