wow! i love your story and this by far has got to be your best chapter. please continue! i can't wait to see what happens!

Author's Response: Thank you so much........I truly fear that each chapter is an imporvement upon the one before it. I have worried that I would drop the ball the further into the story I get. I've never written this many chapters and it's good to hear that it was an improvement. TTFN Kelly

awww.... *eagerly awaits more*

Author's Response: Thank you.......updates as quickly as RL allows. TTFN Kelly

nice plot line. i'm hoping for more dialog in later chapters. keep going looking forward to the update.

Author's Response: Dialog terrifies me since I think I suck at it......but I do have a very stubborn person pushing me out of my comforts zones with annoying frequency. I do descriptive best but I am working hard to increase the dialog and have a mixture of the two. Keep tabs on me and let me know how you think I've done......OK? TTFN Kelly