Name: tiki reviewed
Chapter Five on Mar 11, 2005 03:57 pm
that was amazingly well written and you have the charaters down! Keep it up!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: Cal Princess 2008 reviewed
Chapter Five on Mar 11, 2005 05:28 am
Oh. My. God! I can't wait to see what happens when THE HP comes in and Ginny has to choose between being with the Slytherin Sex God (hee) or worshipping HP.
Author's Response: THE HP? Lol, I like that... HP vs SSG.
Name: stormcloud reviewed
Chapter Five on Mar 11, 2005 01:50 am
wow - i really hope that you continue to update regularly - you write very well and your characterisations are extremely well rounded. more please
Author's Response: I already have the entire story written. I just have to have the chapters beta'd, then they come up.
Name: Pam reviewed
Chapter Five on Mar 10, 2005 05:26 pm
You've turned my brain into a pile of mush. I think that, in itself, is a compliment of the highest sorts. This story is so amazing, I still can't get over how freakin well you write Draco. And the lust and tension between him and Ginny is completely swoon-worthy. I love it. Amazing job. I can't wait to see what happens now that Harry has arrived!
Author's Response: Ooohh, a pile of mush you say? That is a high compliment. Thank you very much. Things will get pretty tense for a while with Harry around.
Name: Bellasol67 reviewed
Chapter Five on Mar 10, 2005 05:12 pm
Today I re-read your entire story and I think you have a wonderful way with words.
I love that Draco is jealous of Potter and I am excited to see how the little Burrow holds up under the added tension of Harry.
BTW, have you written anything else? I would love to read more of your writing.
Author's Response: Wow, I like your dedication! I haven't written any other D/G fiction, sadly. This is my first try.
Name: Embellished reviewed
Chapter Five on Mar 10, 2005 04:54 pm
I think I like this story better every chapter. You seem to increase the layers of emotion between Draco and Ginny a little more each time. I can't wait to see what will happen when Harry gets added to the mix...
Author's Response: I believe in taking things slow. Too many people lunge from chapter to chapter like a runaway train, and they loose pieces along the way.
Name: Elle Blessingway reviewed
Chapter Five on Mar 09, 2005 08:59 pm
I was so excited to see that you updated so quickly..and the kiss at the end of th chapter...wow! Keep it coming...loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: sweetproserpina reviewed
Chapter Five on Mar 09, 2005 08:36 pm
Oh, oh! This is wonderful. I love the characterization in this story, it's so different from most, but very beleivable. Draco's character is especially well drawn, I can't wait to see how he develops and how Harry treats Ginny, and visa versa in the upcoming chapter. Please keep up the wonderful writing.
cheers, sweetp
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I worked hard on trying to keep Draco in character.
Name: blondie07 reviewed
Chapter Five on Mar 09, 2005 07:59 pm
hooray updates! man i cant help but hate harry when ginny likes him cause i am such a die-hard draco/ginny fan but it somehow seems to work for this story. i love the scenes between draco and ginny and i love the fact that draco is starting to really be affected by her. i cant wait for ginny to realize harry is retarded and hurry up and get with draco! im super excited about new chapters!
Author's Response: Glad to hear you're aboard the ship. Gotta love D & G.
Name: Cal Princess 2008 reviewed
Chapter Four on Mar 09, 2005 05:19 am
I'm always excited to read another one of your chapters, and this one definitely didn't disappoint! I like how the story is realistic (i.e., canon characters, etc.), and I can't wait to see what happens. Update soon, plz!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Name: stormcloud reviewed
Chapter Four on Mar 09, 2005 02:42 am
another great chapter. this is really is one of the better fanfics I have read in a long time.
please continue.
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Name: Elle Blessingway reviewed
Chapter Four on Mar 08, 2005 08:02 pm
I would question you calling it cliche...and if it is, then your writing is so good that it doesn't matter. That was a very intense chapter and I was upset, yet relieved that you ended it where you did. It was so emotionally wrenching...the terrible screams, the peaceful slumber, the sexually charged play for dominance...that I don't think I could have taken anymore. However, don't get me wrong, I definitely want more chapters...and soon!! Keep up the good work and take care of yourself!
*Elle* (http://www.livejournal.com/users/elle_blessing)
Author's Response: I love a good HG/SS.
Thank you again, and I'm really happy that you're enjoying the story! ^_^
Name: emvee reviewed
Chapter Four on Mar 08, 2005 06:19 pm
extra long chapters..check..in-character Draco..check..non-victim Ginny..check..in no hurry to develop plot/characters..check..and to top it all off, a darn good read. this has the makings if a d/g classic. you have go to update soon this is tooooo good to not keep going. cant wait for the next installment.
Author's Response: Wow, high praise indeed. I hope I can live up to your expectations...
Name: dido reviewed
Chapter Four on Mar 08, 2005 03:34 pm
I love your story. Your Draco is realistic for fan fiction: he can't quite let go of his family and prejudices, no matter how lovely and womblike the Weasely's house seems.
I also want to thank you for your recommendations. "An Ideal Deatheater" has long been one of my favorite stories, one that I fear won't be finished. Your story reminds me of it, if Draco had spent more time at the Weasley's. "Rising from Ashes" is new to me and I spent too much time today happily reading it.
Thank you for your story and please update as soon as possible.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the recommendations.
Name: lolita reviewed
Chapter Four on Mar 08, 2005 12:14 pm
sont worry about it i love hermione and snape pairings. this chapter is by far the best chapter so far (even though it was the shortest) i love the new wanton ginny nothing less for draco!!
Author's Response: I love HG/SS too.
Name: Embellished reviewed
Chapter Four on Mar 07, 2005 07:13 pm
'"This is all wrong..." she whispered aloud, even as she ran a hand down his slender arm.
"This is all very wrong."
She tangled her fingers with his.'
Ah...this is wonderful! The denial, and yet, fate moves forward. I really love your character development.
Author's Response: Thanks. I just took it slow.
Name: blondie07 reviewed
Chapter Four on Mar 07, 2005 06:45 pm
omg eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i really really really like this story and you write amazingly well. i read fanfiction basically everyday and i have read a freakin ton of draco/ginny stories, mainly cause its all i read, but this story is by far one of the best i have EVER read and im soooo excited for more chapters and more draco/ginny action. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: Maleficent reviewed
Chapter Four on Mar 07, 2005 05:39 pm
I've been meaning to read this story since it first popped up on the recently added list, but I didn't get around to it until tonight. Suffice it to say, I'm hooked. Dead-on characterizations. Original plot. Dialogue, narration, everything just flows. Very well written and the imagery is fantastic. All that aside, however, this is the Draco that makes me love this pairing. I love the OOC Draco just as much most of the time (considering I usually write him OOC myself), but your Draco is just -- just pure, unadulterated Malfoy. It's stories like this, in my mind, that really support a canon D/G. Amazing job. Can't wait for the next installment...and on a baser note, can't wait for the sex!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you! I really tried to keep Draco just that - pure.
Name: bellasol67 reviewed
Chapter Four on Mar 07, 2005 05:06 pm
Loved this chapter.
:)
Author's Response: Thanks! ^_^
Name: JKD reviewed
Chapter Four on Mar 07, 2005 02:54 pm
Very good! keep up the good work! DONT STOP WRITING! Its such a shame when great writers leave unfinished stories.
Author's Response: Have no fear. The story is already finished. There are twenty-three chapters in all. It's just a matter of having my beta edit them, then formatting them correctly.
Name: stormcloud reviewed
Chapter Three on Mar 06, 2005 02:23 pm
this is one of the most interesting stories i have read in a long while... please keep going
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Name: Dandy reviewed
Chapter Three on Mar 06, 2005 11:20 am
Hey, I really like this story so far! I like the how the image of Draco is protrayed. Can't wait for the nest chpater. A lot of talent, you've got!
Author's Response: Thanks.
Name: bellasol67 reviewed
Chapter Three on Mar 06, 2005 11:04 am
Okay, so many things to comment on, first Draco polyjuiced as Ron...very nice.
In Gringotts, Draco made reference to something with regard to Ginny and called himself a liar (damn my short term memory, I can't remember it exactly) but I loved the line.
Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou for not having Draco sleep w/ Ginny in her room, I just don't think it's the right time (not that I'm writing the story or have any impact at all...just my two cents!)
Oh, I almost forgot, Arthur hugging Draco at the bank...WONDERFUL and very Weasley-ish!
Also, in general, I love the way you use words and such...it makes the story flow nicely.
I believe I read in the reviews of the last chapter that you were done with this story, THAT made me very happy, I hate to get wrapped up in a story just to have the author drop off the face of the earth. I don't mind waiting if I know it's coming!
Author's Response: Thanks. Please try not to give away too much in the reviews. I don't want to spoil it for other people, lol. ^_^
I'm glad you're enjoying the story though. More is coming quickly.
Name: Pam reviewed
Chapter Three on Mar 06, 2005 09:54 am
Holy crap, this story is so freakin good! I love all of the interactions between Draco and Ginny - intense and just plain squeal-worthy lol. But I love how you've mangaged to keep Draco in character through everything - his interactions with Ginny, his giving money to Arthur - you pull off his personality so well. Uh oh, he's finally being called! Ah, I can't wait to see what happens next. Amazing.
Author's Response: Squeal worthy, I love that! I've actually read fics that did just that - make me squeal - when it got good. Thanks for the compliment.
Name: Embellished reviewed
Chapter Three on Mar 06, 2005 05:53 am
This is a lovely story. So much intricate detail. And you capture the characters' emotions really well. I am looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Gee, thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it.