Name: mary reviewed
The Eternal Gesture on Mar 22, 2005 06:54 am
so fluffy and sweet, what a great treat!
Author's Response: hehe, you rhymed...
Name: Q reviewed
The Eternal Gesture on Mar 22, 2005 01:34 am
YES! GOOD FLUFF AT LAST.
I specially liked the "tear at the creases part". oh, but this just occurred to me - don't they roll the parchment up into scrolls? but maybe they fold it up first. Yep.
wheeeeee!
Author's Response: I was thinking she folded them up after she read them and put them somewhere. Then every Sunday, got them back out and reread them. That's how the creases were made ^.^ maybe I should've been clearer on that...
Name: hannah reviewed
The Eternal Gesture on Mar 21, 2005 06:38 pm
I usually hate fluff, but I really enjoyed this. Stylisticlly, it was really well done with the way that you chose to leave out some details.
Author's Response: Considering you don't seem like a big reader of fluff, the fact that you actually like mine is a huge compliment! Thanks so much ^.^
Name: Bellasol67 reviewed
The Eternal Gesture on Mar 21, 2005 04:57 pm
This was just lovely. Just detailed enough, I love it when things are left to the imagination.
Author's Response: That's a relief, I thought someone would review and say it wasn't detailed enough. I wanted to be able to have some spots where the reader could just fill in what they'd think would happen... haha, fanfiction on fanfiction! ^.^'
Name: Embellished reviewed
The Eternal Gesture on Mar 21, 2005 02:06 pm
It may be fluffy, but it is quite lovely. I like the choices you made about what to say and what to leave out.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! At first I had a couple other 'gestures' in mind but I decided to keep it to ten so people wouldn't get bored with the fic. Considering there was no dialoge, I understood that some people would lose interest in it if I made it too long.