hello this story is great. i would love to read the other version in your live journal and can't find the address. would you mind sending it to me ( the url) at rose_violette@hotmail.com? thanks and good job !

this story really looks promising. you've got me interested now with the mystery and D/G's past. this chapter was really good though, with the subtle humour in it. well done

I as so pleased to find this story. It is just the sort to give you goosebumps. Draco was very good, very mysterious. I loved Ginny thoughts that he was an insufferable git, but not an evil insufferable git - or something of the like. Ginny's regret that he didn't try harder to bed her was adorable. I can't wait for the next chapter. Elise

I like this story so far. Though I have some doubts right now... Did Draco force Ginny to marry him? And how long have they been dating before that quick wedding?

I LOVE IT!!!! You have to update real soon. PLEASE!!!!!!

loved the last line but why are they getting married? Oh, I'm so impatient! lol, anyway I only have two things to point out- His only sister and the youngest Weasley was engaged to be married (when I first read it I was like- whoa, Ginny's getting married to a girl and the girl's brother is really ticked... and then I read that Ron was actually the one reading it...anyway, perhaps you should change it to something like: His sister, the youngest Weasley, was engaged to be married.) --and-- Ron Weasley didn't know which was worse - the fact that he was reading about it in the paper instead of hearing it from Ginny or that she was apparently engaged to the slimy git. (it sounds like you're saying the newspaper is the slimy git Ginny's marrying. ::mentle image of Ginny kissing a newspaper:: what beautiful babies they would make ^.^ The only thing you need to do is tell who exactally the slimy git is) --- Those two things were the only things that really jumped out at me. You can go ahead and read my fic and analyze my grammar if you wish (you'll find plenty mistakes, lol) ^.^ --- Anyway, loved it- can't wait for the next chapter!!!

OMGosh, that just changed the whole thought process of how I THOUGHT that this story was going to go. "BTW, Malfoy's don't believe in divorce" nicely done. Please update again soon!! Christine

nice one. You could have left out "Unfortunately, he ruined the peace between them with his next statement", though. or simplified it a bit. ...you ARE writing the next bit, aren'tyou?

Oh - Well THAT will ruin anyone's day, hearing they can't get out of a marriage for show. Oh, well - can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Nice start, I am curious, why did they have to get married (It's probably there, but I missed it)....btw, I like their rules (no family insults, etc...funny) anyway, hope you update soon.