Name: Lillx reviewed
Puss in the Corner on May 14, 2005 07:45 am
That's reeeeeally good!!!! Please, keep on writing, I wanna know what happens next!!!! You're great!
kisses
Author's Response: Right back attcha!! SMOOCH!
Name: blondie90 reviewed
Puss in the Corner on May 09, 2005 08:43 pm
omg that was so sad. i almost cried i felt so sorry for her. this chapter was by far the best you have written and im really excited about the rest of the story. it was kinda hard to read at the same time though because it made me sick just thinking about it but it was well written and im interested to see how the story goes.
Author's Response: Thank you. It means a great deal to a writer to learn that a reader has had such an emotional reaction to their work. The next chapter will get even more rough. I hope you have a box of tissues and some headache potion.
Huggs,
gotsnape
Name: .... reviewed
Puss in the Corner on May 09, 2005 07:35 pm
this is fabulous! but i can't believe a teacher and a mother writes this sort of thing...its so trippy...do your kids know about this?
Author's Response: Glad you like the story, but can't understand why my being a mother and a teacher should limit my writing. I suppose it is some type of typecasting. My sons know I write fanfiction. They know the character's names. They understand that in my stories, the students are grown up and that my stories are not for kids.
Name: bigreader reviewed
Fat in the Fire on May 09, 2005 03:20 pm
Good story. I hope Ginny will understand. UPDATE SOON!
Name: imelda reviewed
Puss in the Corner on May 09, 2005 10:35 am
And I forgot to mention--how horribly ironic that Tom called her Ginny-girl. Horrible for Ginny, but also for Draco, as well. And I'd thought it was so sweet, too.
Name: imelda reviewed
Puss in the Corner on May 09, 2005 10:16 am
My god. This is like some cruel, underworld nightmare. Ginny must be the unluckiest person in the entire world. While I understand that this whole fic is about sexual violence, it really couldn't have happened to a worse person. I mean, because she was already traumatized by Tom's rape. And on top of it, the potion that the house elves gave her, making her aware of everything...I mean, it's a sad but often useful defense mechanism, to be able to shut down and block things from your consciousness--I guess that's what you were getting at, though, and why the house elves gave her the potion. Sigh. It's just so damn sad. I never expected anything this awful. Nevertheless, I am completely tied up in the story and desperate to know what happens next (although in some sense, I feel comforted knowing she's going with Draco, despite his behavior in this chapter, because the worst has got to be over), and now you tell me it will be awhile before the next update...sigh. I can't complain because it's been months since I updated my fic, but I can say that I do hope it's not a terribly long wait. Poor Ginny.
Author's Response: Yes, the potion. Sometimes I curse myself for giving that stuff to Ginny. It made some of the things she had to go through all the worse. As we know, storing bad memories only gives them time to grow. Ginny has never, ever had much of a chance to work the events of CoS out. She has had to block a great many things and just keep on plugging on. Can you imagine trying to talk about such an event with your brother (s)? She does have a confessor of sorts as you will find out.
Name: ashleigh reviewed
Puss in the Corner on May 09, 2005 10:09 am
Oooh that was really good! I love it! This chap was very dark and the detail and happenings were just great. And addition of Tom in it was just superbly done. Well done, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks, I was unsure if Tom's thoughts would come clear since I haven't caught on to the HTML thingie on this site.
Name: Maureen reviewed
Puss in the Corner on May 09, 2005 10:02 am
Hehe I enjoyed that IMMENSELY. Poor poor Ginny. But oh I do wonder what shall occur in the next chapter...We shall all have to see now won't we? Do hurry with the next chapter, you're doing a lovely job!
Name: Amanda reviewed
Puss in the Corner on May 09, 2005 08:23 am
wow.. i think you handled that really well. Its really making me think. Can't wait till the next chapter. keep up the great work.
Name: distempered reviewed
Puss in the Corner on May 09, 2005 08:01 am
An excellent chapter. Dark and delicious...just the way I like it. I think Tom's thoughts came across very effectively. And I liked the "show" that Draco and Severus put on...it worked very well.
Author's Response: Dark and delicious, like chocolate!! I was worried that Tom's thoughts would not be clear. I have still not figured out how to make my italics and stuff stick when posting to this site. You are one of the few people who have noticed that Severus was up to something when he fondled Ginny.
Name: jessicakmalfoy reviewed
Puss in the Corner on May 09, 2005 05:32 am
lucius is HORRIBLE. when i read this "There was no sweeter victory than one that had been ripped from a woman’s unwilling flesh. That was power." i feel kinda sick. thanks for a great chapter!!!!!!!
Author's Response: He is scary, ain't he? I love my Lucius evil.
Name: lina reviewed
Puss in the Corner on May 09, 2005 03:03 am
crabbe and goyle remind me of rosencrantz and guildenstern from hamlet
Author's Response: Thank you! I had to think hard to place those two. Been a long time since English Lit.
Name: jessica k malfoy reviewed
Fat in the Fire on May 08, 2005 04:23 pm
no ... chapter ... 5
*dies*
Name: Natasha reviewed
Fat in the Fire on May 08, 2005 04:13 pm
I LOVE IT!!! Update soon.
Name: imelda reviewed
Fat in the Fire on May 08, 2005 02:52 pm
Arghh! It says recently updated! Are the chapters screwing up again??? Double dash darn it. They probably are. I've reread what's here, now, about 3 times. I do hope the next chapter appears soon, if there's anything you can do about it!!!
Author's Response: I am so sorry! I know what you are talking about. When a new chapter is uploaded, it has to be checked over by the list moms before ACTUALLY going on line. The story SAYS updated, but the new chappy is not there yet. I hate it, but what can I say. There IS a new chapter. Five is the longest so far. Lots of action and stuff. Wish you had been logged in when you submitted the review, then I could send you an email to explain. Just have to hope you check for author responses to reviews. Hope you enjoy 5 when it finally gets up.
Huggs!
Name: Natasha reviewed
The Sawtooth Edge on May 08, 2005 11:02 am
I love this story. Draco is being so nice. lol. I like his personality. Crabbie and Goyle are so mean! I hate Lucius. Please make Ginny safe. Who hurt Ginny? Keep up the great work.
Name: distempered reviewed
Fat in the Fire on Apr 28, 2005 06:39 pm
Very interesting, very interesting! I'm scared for Ginny; only hope Draco will save the day. Continue soon.
Author's Response: *snaps a saaaaaaaaaaa-LUTE* Yes, SIR mam!
Name: SpanishBelle reviewed
Fat in the Fire on Apr 26, 2005 04:47 pm
OMFG! I love this! I don't know how the hell I found this fic, but its wonderful, I bookmarked it...I usaully don't read WIP's because I'm very impatient lol but I was so rapped up already heheh. I have just recently gotten into Fire and Ice ship yay! Its one of my fav's know thanks for updating so quick, now do it agian lol, nah take your time it will be worth it.
Author's Response: Glad you like the story. It is my baby and I just love bringing it along. I know what you mean about WIPs but I am guilty as charged. I barely stay ahead of my posted chapters. I will NEVER do this again. I will have the entire story written before I post a single chapter.
Name: EB_sirius_lives_on reviewed
Fat in the Fire on Apr 23, 2005 02:06 pm
I just caught this fic and i have to say, i'm intrigued. Really. Please continue!
EB
Author's Response: I intend to. Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a review. I appreciate that.
Name: The Lady Luthien reviewed
Fat in the Fire on Apr 22, 2005 09:12 am
This is the first DG fic that hasn't taken place at Hogworts for me. Very well done. I love the descriptions of scenery. I'm not sure how to get this website to send me updates of new chapters so here's my email. Actdramagirl31@aol.com Just label it a DG fic and I'll open it. Great story keep writing!
Author's Response: Really? That's cool. I don't know if this site does update notification. I will try to remember to email you when I up date.
Name: Orella reviewed
Fat in the Fire on Apr 21, 2005 09:41 pm
My god.... that was powerfull, i've never felt so... mixed emotioned in my life... well that's not true.. lmao.... this chapter... cant wait for the next... love it to death!!
Author's Response: LOLOLOL! Thank you. *smooch*
Name: imelda reviewed
Fat in the Fire on Apr 21, 2005 04:26 pm
ARgghhh!! How can you leave us there? I really like this fic, because I like the way Draco treats Ginny. I am very scared for her, however, and I hope you update very, very soon (is this already written or are you still in the process?). I like, too, that Ginny has an inner-Molly; very appropriate.
Name: jessica k malfoy reviewed
Fat in the Fire on Apr 21, 2005 03:36 pm
EVIL!!!!!!! you canNOT leave it here! HURRY HURRY HURRY! usually i don't get so addicted to stories, but this is GOOD! so far, i nearly melted at the thought for draco in low slung swimtrunks, loved narcissa for getting rid of pansy (for the day), thought ginny's "inner molly" was hilarious, and would like to request that you have crabbe, goyle, AND lucius drown in the ocean. how can draco & ginny even BEGIN to have a relationship with them (particularly lucius) around? I NEED MORE! I ADORE THIS STORY!
Author's Response: But I've updated! I've updated!
Thanks for praising the inner Molly. What woman hasn't heard her mother nagging in her brain at least once in her life?
Name: Khelis reviewed
Fat in the Fire on Apr 21, 2005 03:02 pm
Please please update soon, can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response: I'm working on it!!!!!
Name: judimatt reviewed
The Sawtooth Edge on Apr 20, 2005 04:39 am
You have a really great story going here, however, I noticed you changed Ginny's eyecolor in this chap from Green (at the beginng) to brown at the end. Is this a mistake, or will it be significant later?
Other than that...great!
Author's Response: Ding DANG it! I thought I caught all of those thingies about the eye color. I read CoS wrong and got descriptions all twisted around trying for canon. Had to go back and make color changes. One of the little blighters slipped past me. Can you tell me specifically where it is and I will go and kill it? I would greatly appreaciate it.