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i'm not sure it i had comment, before on your amazing story!!! please write some more stories, soon...
Great first story. I loved it, just the right amount of saddness. :) Good Job.
There would be time for the hospital wing and treatment, but for now he held her close as darkness fell all around.
Ah, that was perfect. I enjoyed this story-thanks for sharing it.
I loved this story! It was so sweet and short and perfectly well done. Enough angst with a touch of romance. You explained the battle and the outcome wonderfully without rushing anything or making anything akward. I love your style! This story was very well written! I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! When I read your review, I realized it has been two years since I first started writing. As Darkness Fell All Around was my first attempt at writing fiction - not just fanfiction but fiction in general - so thank you for a wonderful review. It always warms my heart when someone stumble upons this one and enjoys it. - fallenwitch
This was great. The sort of fic I could read over and over again.
Loved it. I normally don't like angst, but I absolutely loved this one. ^_^ My heart goes out to Ginny and Draco and wow.
I loved it. I don't usually like Angst fics (probably cause that's all I can write) but... I really liked it. All but one thing- your use of the regalia. Tone it down. Otherwise, really good.
I love it! I love all your fics though...and I get a huge kick out of the reviews you leave me as well. I can't believe I've never read this one before...it's brilliant, especially for a first try!
the story was good, wish it could have been longer though
the story was good, wish it could have been longer though
Good Start
I actually really liked the plotline to this story, however I felt it could've been more deeply written. Nonetheless, it was still very good, and I really enjoyed it. :)
I definitely didn't know or even suspect that it was your first fic when I read it. The scene with Pansy's death was sort of confusing and stuff, but wow. You still got the message across.
Hey, it was really good for a first fic! And you finished, too! Bravo. I liked that ending, I think. I liked that it was D/G in the end (happily, I mean) and that they temporarily put the issues aside to simply celebrate the joy of being alive. Poor Ginny, though, with the whole waiting bit. That's just cruel. And Draco's got a lot of explaining to do, but I'm glad that they're together at the end. :)
I didn't realize this had been your first fan fic. It was excellent. Off to read the rest of your fics.
I love the way you write. I'd quote the sentences I found to be the most beautiful like others have done, but I'm afraid I'd have to quote whole pages at a time ^_^
I *love* the moment he walks out of the room with Dumbledore, and then kisses her. It just kills me every time (because I realized I definitely have read this before). I also love the moment Ginny spots him on the battlefield. Sigh. I'm so glad this has a happy ending. The murder of Pansy scene was so vague it was a bit tough to understand, but once I did...wow. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Wow, what a review! Thanks. I actually wrote the whole story around the scene where he kisses her at 12 Grimmauld Place. Just couldn't get that one out of my head. Glad you enjoyed it.
wow! your language in the story's just beautiful! i really like the way you crafted your words.
I agree, this story needs a lot more reviews than it's gotten so far. I like your style, and the last line is classic. :)
huhuhu...:'c again, i have to bring out this line in particular since it really hit me: There would be time for the hospital wing and treatment, but for now he held her close as darkness fell all around. that scene where ginny looked for draco amdist the blanket of bodies in the field reminded me of a scene in 'gone with the wind'. brilliant work!
Author's Response: Wow! A comparison with Margaret Mitchell? That's a compliment. Thanks for your reviews. I really appreciate it!
Why hasn't this gotten any reviews?!?! It's a good story. In particular, this line. The fallen were taken elsewhere, to a makeshift morgue in the dungeons. Ginny did not see Percy or Charlie when they were brought in from the field. She would learn of their stories later. She would learn their stories later... That was just a wonderful line.
Author's Response: I am so HONORED that you read my fic and liked this line in particular. I know the style of the story is a little out of the mainstream. I am a HUGE fan of yours and am in love with Before The Storm. Thanks for making my day!
This is really powerful. I like how you chose just a few scenes from their relationship but were able to make it seem like you told more. Well done!
Author's Response: Wow! What a compliment. That is exactly what I trying to achieve. This stuff really works.