Name: ellajane13 reviewed
Lost In Her on Sep 04, 2011 10:07 am
Despite the fact that this story is on FIA, my favorite type of story still leaves the reader guessing until the end. What I mean is, I love stories where you read the whole chapter, knowing that Ginny is deeply involved with some man, but you don't know who that man is until the end. You wrote this perfectly and had I not known this was a D/G, I still would have been immensely satisfied with the outcome of the story. (sorry if that doesn't quite make sense).
I love how you were able to keep their emotions separate and distinct, easily delving into Ginny's psyche before jumping into Draco's thoughts and worries. I very much enjoyed reading this and appreciate any author's bravery and willingness to publicly post a story for anyone to read. Fantastic read, very well done
Name: tinamarie reviewed
Lost In Her on May 09, 2010 09:10 pm
I really wasn't sure where this fic was going until the very end. I enjoyed this and how you were able to keep them together despite their trials.
Name: sjr reviewed
Lost In Her on May 04, 2010 06:46 am
beautiful.
Name: gracie reviewed
Lost In Her on Apr 30, 2010 07:26 am
im confused does that little note at the bottom mean that they had a son which died which explains why ginny was the way you wrote her?
Name: Jack Tamara reviewed
Lost In Her on Aug 24, 2009 01:21 am
Oh my goodness. It all makes sense now. I was confused at first, but it was beautifully played out in the end. Very sad, but good job fallenwitch. This was beautiful.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Lost In Her on Jul 08, 2008 01:03 am
Part-way through the second chapter I realized that they had to be mourning for a lost child and once I understood that I found myself reading with tears in my eyes. He was five years old? That's heart-breaking. I'm crying.
Name: pens82 reviewed
Lost In Her on Apr 05, 2007 06:56 am
was confussed at begining but was very good at end when all was explained .
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
Lost In Her on Mar 27, 2007 07:44 am
This is fabulous. I think it's a really good idea to have it in two parts (though that's probably because I read it when it was finished, and therefore could appreciate the wonderfulness of its disjointed side, without being very annoyed that I didn't know what was wrong). Fabulous, well done :)
Name: arabela reviewed
Lost In Her on Mar 21, 2007 04:31 am
the first words out of my mouth as i read the epitaph was,
"oh, that'll kill a girl..."
=(
post-fic Psych101 classes are fun =P I figured it would be something like that, though, that they lost a child (my first thought was miscarriage, but the length of the depression wasn't quite appropriate)
anyways, another one i loved =)
Author's Response: Thanks, Bela. Always happy to entertain you. And I'm glad you enjoyed the Psych 101 class! - fallenwitch
Name: flavoroflove reviewed
Lost In Her on Nov 13, 2006 03:03 am
cool i like it!
Name: RainStormRaider reviewed
Lost In Her on Sep 26, 2006 08:28 am
Wow!
I just lost my kid brother and I know how it feels. Though I guess, I'm adjusting, its a slow process and just when you think you can move on, the memories sneak up on you without warning...
The depiction was highly detailed and breath-taking, thank you for giving words to emotions that are speechless.
Author's Response: When someone speaks from the depths of such an experience and finds resonance and meaning in my words, it cuts to the heart of what writing is all about for me. Thank you for sharing your recent loss with me. My heart goes out to you and your family. It is truly a life (and heart) changing experience. -fallenwitch
Name: dieLoreley reviewed
Lost In Her on Aug 20, 2006 12:00 am
I thought of a quote from Jane Austen's Persuasion that kind of applied to Ginny and Draco's different ways of grieving for Serpens --
"We (females) live at home, quiet, confined, and our feelings prey upon us. You are forced on exertion. You have always a profession, pursuits, business of some sort or other, to take you back into the world immediately, and continual occupation and change soon weaken impressions."
Well in the very least, your analysing of them reminded me of that passage (or a similar one that I can't find). I liked it :) It was confusing for the most part of it -- I couldn't figure out what had happened, but it all makes sense now.
Name: Moonyk reviewed
Lost In Her on Apr 20, 2006 09:26 am
Oh no no no....I loved the clinical terms! You get to read a great fic AND learn at the same time! Im nodding along and going aaahhhh I see....Quite the surprise at the end, I stared at "Serpens William Malfoy" for quite a while. Great great job.
cheers.
Name: Slytherin Wolf reviewed
Lost In Her on Apr 13, 2006 06:54 pm
How exactly did Draco & Ginny's son die?
Author's Response: I am leaving that one up to each reader's dark imagination.
Name: Kisou reviewed
Lost In Her on Dec 19, 2005 09:48 am
Even if nobody else did, I enjoyed your analysis at the end. It's interesting to see how you constructed your characters.
I also understood the fic a lot better after reading it. I was confused, but that explanation helped with a lot of it.
Name: listentodraco reviewed
Lost In Her on Aug 19, 2005 06:32 pm
Aw. I liked how harry came at the end. For a few moments i was speculating if james could have been ginny's. Obviously not tho. Silly me. in one word: beautiful
Name: Aurinko reviewed
Lost In Her on Aug 09, 2005 07:40 am
Really, really liked this one. Maybe my favorite, though I liked "The Letter" too. Yes, it all makes sense now. (Reading the headstone did it, and your rather clinical dissection just added to the "Hey, I actually GOT it feeling.") I liked how it all tied up so very neatly. "Serpens William" is an interesting name. Did you pick a wife for Harry, out of curiosity?
Name: Monica_ISA reviewed
Lost In Her on Jun 14, 2005 12:42 am
Beautiful! Well written and edgy! Thank you!
Name: ellimac134 reviewed
Lost In Her on Jun 13, 2005 03:50 pm
absolutely BRILLIANT...the last part was soooooo sad...aww...i get it now! haha...wonderful job
Name: mary reviewed
Lost In Her on Jun 13, 2005 12:20 pm
excellent, and i like the addition of the psycological info after it really helps understand the fic better and learn a little bit about life. at first i though she was anorexic, because of the loss of weight.
Author's Response: Wow, anorexia. I never thought about that one. Interesting. Thanks for the feedback about the psych notes. I never know what their impact is going to be.
Name: caps reviewed
Lost In Her on Jun 13, 2005 11:36 am
this is a lovely story. Chapter two certainly explained chapter 1- but i thought chapter 1 could stand on its own as well.
well written
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review, esp. your words about my beleaguered chpt. 1.
Name: ronlover reviewed
Lost In Her on Jun 13, 2005 10:52 am
Hi,
I loved it! I figured it out after you told me that hint in the last chapter. But I also sort of figured it out on my own. Anyways that was great. It was well written. I cried during the last part. It was so sad, yet happy. Keep up the great work. I loved the review. I'm going to put it on my review list, hope you don't mind. My cat says hi, shes pawing and licking the screen. lol.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the story. Feel free to post my review of your story.
Name: JuliusCaesar reviewed
Lost In Her on Jun 13, 2005 09:15 am
that was just lovely Fallenwitch. it really was. Your description of loss and grief was spot on, very realistic and understandable. Well done on a lovely piece of angst. loved your AN's especially.
Author's Response: JuliusCaesar - thanks again for your wonderful and lovely review. I appreciate it.
Name: mereschino reviewed
Lost In Her on Jun 13, 2005 08:56 am
what a good story. and that epitaph at the end was such a good ending. I was wracking my brain as to what happened, why Ginny was so displaced, but then everything made sense. So good job, congrats.
Author's Response: Glad to hear it came together for you at the end! Thanks for the review.
Name: Embellished reviewed
Lost In Her on Jun 13, 2005 04:00 am
I relly like this story. For the record, I wasn't too confused by the first chapter. You definitely left some things out, but you gave enough hints that I could piece things together (I was fairly sure that Ginny's depression was because of the death of a child). You do a very good job of making the psychological issues come alive. Thanks for the story!
Author's Response: Thanks, Embellished. It's gratifying to know that you picked up the hints I left in the first chapter!