Name: slymom reviewed Prologue: Can't Hide from Yourself on Aug 16, 2005 03:42 am

This is a great story. The prologue instantly caught my attention and now I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Name: IndyCICURN reviewed Prologue: Can't Hide from Yourself on Aug 13, 2005 11:35 pm

It has been awhile since I took the time to read a story. Real life has gotten in the way. I really enjoyed this prologue. Some stories use very few words to describe the seen and leave you thinking "what were they really feeling or what were they really thinking?" And sometimes it is almost like they give you to much informaiton and you thing " Get to the point alread". This chpater found just the right balance. It is well written and quite enjoyable. I look forward to reading more! Kristine

Author's Response: thanks for the review. im flatterd :-) and more will be up whenever it gets approved, its been on its way for a couple days now

Name: charlotte reviewed Prologue: Can't Hide from Yourself on Jun 16, 2005 03:44 pm

looks really good so far. can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: i hope you can forgive my lateness. i hope its worth the wait. thanks for the review!