Name: steppin_razur reviewed A Shot at Happiness on May 11, 2010 01:55 pm
It was a good story. I think you should use "trouble with happiness" not Happiness Overshadowed" it goes better with the first title but that is me. Thanks for the story it entertained when I was in a rough patch.
Name: My Anything reviewed A Shot at Happiness on Apr 09, 2009 04:56 am
This was wonderful, I can't tell you how much I enjoyed it, it was really good. Thank you for cheering me up. :)
Name: Soccergirl0388 reviewed A Shot at Happiness on Apr 06, 2008 02:14 pm
please write the sequel!!! i love this story!
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed A Shot at Happiness on Aug 04, 2006 08:57 am
~I like the way it ended. Wonderful story.~
Name: harrypotterchick reviewed A Shot at Happiness on Jun 18, 2006 05:51 pm
awesome story
it's great
I LOVED IT
Name: Chelsea reviewed A Shot at Happiness on Jan 22, 2006 06:09 pm
I thought it was a lovely story and thoroughly enjoyed it. I did get a little confused during the parts in The Three Broomsticks as it skipped back and forth and I wasn't sure when what had been said. Although, other than that I loved it. :)
Name: Chelsea reviewed A Shot at Happiness on Jan 22, 2006 06:08 pm
I thought it was a lovely story and thorougly enjoyed it. I did get a little confused during the parts in The Three Broomsticks as it skipped back and forth and I wasn't sure when what had been said. Although, other than that I loved it. :)
Name: natalie reviewed A Shot at Happiness on Dec 16, 2005 09:31 am
You put heaps of effort into the begining of the fanfic and I really enjoyed it, but then you seemed to get bored with writing it and the end was just really lame and so now I kinda feel like I wasted my time reading it although I cant tell you can write. The end of a story is supposed to give the reader closure, and all I got from that was a feeling like you just wanted to stop writing it. 2/10
Name: Elizabeth reviewed A Shot at Happiness on Oct 04, 2005 12:50 pm
ohmygod i loved it! im REALLY picky, and hardly ever read a longer story the whole way through, but you hooked me! Keep up everything you're doing, its excellent. i cant wait for the sequel!
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