Beautiful. That last line is just utterly breathtaking.
Oooh I really liked that. Excellent job, I hope you write more like this. Short, sweet, and amazingly powerful.
::sniff sniff::
That was cool ... perfect love ...
awwwwwwwww...that was absolutely wonderful..so beautiful..it just makes you melt..*sigh*..i loved it...great job!!it was sweet and lovely..
That's sweet. It's not very substancial or realistic, but it's sweet anyway.
Oh, wow. That was so beautiful. I've been looking for a nice calm, beautifully written, heartening story and I found it in your work. You've made my day with this. I will definitely be looking forward to reading anything else you write.
Not sure if I've reviewed this yet, but... it's SO romantic, so tenderly sweet. I cried.
very craftly written...good job. you took my breath with the words...especially Draco's last words. makes me want to find peace myself.
wow. this story was a real tear jerker. :'(
BUT I LOVED IT
See!!! Hot chocolate works wonders!!!
Aw! This was a really sweet fic, and after the dark fic I just wrote this was a really good contrast.
That was lovely. Absolutely lovely.
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Beautiful and sweet. Wow.
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I could cry. It's crisp and icy, like winter air.
Author's Response: Oh, what an excellent description. Thank you!
This story was so beautiful. I have no other words to describe it.
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Beautiful. Thank you.
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Wow, that was wonderful. A brilliant piece full of atmosphere and so evocatively written that I was sucked right in. Fabulous.
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that was incredibly beautiful! Wonderful Job!!!
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Oh my. That was just lovely Adelagia, just lovely. I'm not sure if this is enough feedback for you but it felt so very real. The emotions were real, the characters felt real, the situation felt real, their love felt real and it fit into canon. It was so descriptive and lovely and the flow of the story was great. That was just amazing - thank you!
Author's Response: Hey, any feedback is good feedback. And yours particularly so. :) Thanks for the review! *feels good about self*
oh my goodness! This is the best story I have ever read... and I have read a lot. Great writing style, great plot, great characterization... oh, I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you! While I'm sure there are better fics out there, I am particularly proud of this one, if only because it's the first D/G I've ever finished!
This was so beautiful. It's perfect, not corny or annoying like some short stories written in this fashion can get. This is a story I will be re reading again. It's hopeful and brings light to things that seem so dark. Incredible job.
Author's Response: Thanks, I really appreciate your review. I'm glad the tone of the story came across well.
beautiful
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Yeah, I noticed my little comment in your story, too. I'm glad that you caught it in time. hehe. xoxox
Author's Response: I am such an idiot. :)
This is really lovely. The imagery is especially evocative. Thank you very much!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
This is one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read. It brought tears to my eyes, truly beautiful. Thank You
Author's Response: Thanks very much, I really appreciate your comments!