Name: chenjinyan11 reviewed Chapter 1 on Jul 03, 2018 06:33 pm

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Name: iinfinityplus1 reviewed Chapter 1 on Mar 16, 2007 12:25 am

I hate to say it, since it seems I'm going to be the only one, but this was my favorite story... until the last chapter. I would LOVE to see an alternate ending! Your writing style is spectacular. :)

Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 14, 2006 07:28 am

~I happen to like the cliche, but this one is done diffrently and maybe even better. It is very well written cliche or not.~

Name: EJAUS reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 13, 2006 06:31 am

"Then, he would suddenly remember how miserably he’d treated her and her friends at school all those years ago, and he’d experience a sudden hitch in his confidence…."...Hints of a regretful Malfoy perhaps?  Marriage ceremonies are notoriously hard to write.  How do yo keep them fresh?  How do you meet expectations"when shippers have been playing out the moment in their heads?  Intresting take on the elements.  What does wind do to fire? Wind causes it to grow larger, hotter, and more dangerous. 

Name: jennygirl reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 10, 2006 10:54 am

i love this story. some people were saying they were happy its posted on this site too. what other site is it posted on??

Author's Response: Oh no!  If I tell you, you'll go over and read it all there and never review here again!  But...if you're really interested I suppose I can be forthcoming.  It's finished at  Checkmated (www.checkmated.com).  If you read it all, let me know how you like it! 

Name: eli reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 06, 2006 03:59 pm

Please update! I loved it! Only one thing that was confusing...in the beginning, you spelled Weasley "Wheezly". Was that to show that the spelling had changed over a period of time, or did you just make a mistake?
But I still loved it!

Author's Response: No, it was to show that the spelling had changed over time:  lots of names have done that--evolved from their early spellings.  Thanks for reviewing!

Name: ChocolateFrogPrincess reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 06, 2006 01:39 pm

I saw this story on another site and never read it because ... well, the name was lame, or so it seemed.  Something nudged me to read the first chapter here and being an impatient person, I went back and read the whole thing, and I'm just floored.  I won't state any particulars because I don't want to ruin it for anyone else, so I'll just say:  BRAVO!  Thanks.

Author's Response: "The name was lame."  OK, I'm laughing!  Thanks for giving it a chance.  I'm glad you're floored, and I'm glad you let me know! :D

Name: Cissa reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 06, 2006 09:49 am

Ooh finally you decided to update this story here !!! Good because it definetely deserved to be here, temple of D/G stories :-) Well, just a piece of advice to everybody : you really really really (that's three times) should read this !! Keep up writing D/G you're good at it !

Author's Response: Thank you for that accolade!

Name: EJAUS reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 05, 2006 07:24 pm

I can't say much either except this story does belong here.  People are going to like it.  Heck, I even wrote a little fanfic of your fanfic.  I sent it to you Did you get it? I am also known as EJAU on another site.

 

 

Author's Response: Wow, you wrote a fanfic of this?  I am totally floored.  What a huge honor!  No, I didn't get it.  Did you Owl it?  I haven't signed into the forums in 2 days:  maybe it's there.  I'll go check and see.

Name: Allie reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 05, 2006 05:24 pm

I love the idea of the story. Very nice and sneeky...can't wait till you post again. Hopefully soon!