Hahaha! I love manipulative!Hermione! It's fabulous!
The only thing I would mention is that you've obviously paid a bit of attention to English vernacular, so instead of saying "fine" in regards to Draco, Ginny would say "fit" (or something of the like) instead.
Off to the next installment!
Author's Response: I have to say that I appreciate your help. I know some English slang, but clearly not enough. *g* And personally manipulative Hermione was my favorite piece. I like taking her out of the normal role for her and giving her something unusual to do. Thanks for reading and reviewing it all. ^^ Rhina
Aw! They really have a bunch to work out if she fainted at the sight of him!
Author's Response: Maybe not so much to work through as her being thoroughly unprepared to see him. *g* No one expects Hermione to be the sneaky one. Glad you enjoyed the fic enough to read it all! Hope you enjoy the end. ^^ Rhina
I love it! I think my favourite line was, "I think its against the law somewhere for Malfoys not to be sarcastic" TOO TRUE! ;) Can't wait for more! ;)
waaaaaaaaah. that last one is pure evil. Evil. i want moreeeee!!! :D
Author's Response:*evil cackles* Not too often I get to be evil as a writer - it's such fun! I'm working on the next part right now. Thanks for reading!
^^ Rhina
Well that's always a good reaction! I'm sure Draco's thrilled with that! :P
Author's Response:Considering his ego has now been fed, I should say so, but you will have to wait and see his reaction. Thanks for reading.
^^ Rhina
It was so much fun to read Ginny's disbelief in this chapter, knowing what we already knew! I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next.
Author's Response:The faint is the part that surprised me when I started to write where she saw him. It wasn't what I intended but suddenly it just turned out that way!
Thanks for the compliment! I'll write as fast as I can.
Darn! Ok, youve got to update really soon, i hate cliff hangers. and youve got me!
Author's Response:I hate them too and consider them the evilest of evil but ... but... BLAME GINNY! *g* She made me do it!
I'll keep writing! ^^ Rhina
Ahhh!!!! They meet at last...at an evil but oddly satisfying cliffhanger! "The world as I knew it tilted right off its axis" is my favorite line. This chapter was well worth my burnt dinner last night, and I will await your final chapter...the desert in this fic...with anticipation. -fallenwitch
Author's Response:It is satisfying but at the same time, it leaves even me wanting more. So sorry about the burnt dinner though. I'm writing as we speak!
^^ Rhina
Ahhh!!!! They meet at last...at an evil but oddly satisfying cliffhanger! "The world as I knew it tilted right off its axis" is my favorite line. This chapter was well worth my burnt dinner last night, and I will await your final chapter...the desert in this fic...with anticipation. -fallenwitch