Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
A New Pearce on Apr 13, 2006 08:44 am
I liked it... but I'm hopeing a blond British boy will happen upon her in the States and they will start having some D/G moments! ;) Really good though. I'm glad you're over your bout of writers block! ;)
Author's Response: thank you! d/g moments should start coming in a chapter or two-ish sortof. gees that vague. thank you for the review :D
Name: Experience My Dreams reviewed
A New Pearce on Apr 13, 2006 07:48 am
Great so far!!! I like it!! Keep going!!
Author's Response: thanks! :D
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
A New Pearce on Apr 13, 2006 07:43 am
Great update! When you first said that recognition flitted across Alex's face I thought for sure that it was Draco or someone from Ginny's past, but I didn't even think about the guy from the airplane!
Nice twist!
Update soon!
Author's Response: thankyou! i was scared that it was going to be obvious! im glad it wasnt and that you enjoyed the update. :D
Name: someoneyoudon'tknow reviewed
A New Pearce on Apr 13, 2006 06:31 am
It's really good. but some of the charries are talking like english people.
o_o.
just thought i might tell you.=)
Author's Response: too english? thanks for telling me i didnt realise. i'll try to improve on that next chapter :D
Name: espressivo reviewed
Rude Awakening on Apr 04, 2006 06:46 pm
Again, Love your stories!!! Oh god, Harry is terrible! Can't believe that he would be so conceited to think that she wouldn't leave him. Love Draco!! bad boy, playboy = me love. Hopefully he comes chasing after her, and harry stays far far away. Love your writing, hope you update! UPDATE PLEASE!!!!! I BEG YOU!!
Author's Response: Thank you! harry, like many hero characters (in my opinion) is very selfish while being completly selfish when it comes to non hero-y things and everybody loves draco!! :)the next chapter is off at my beta so hopefully it will be up soon and im halfway through the one after that so fingers crossed! :D
Author's Response: i made a small mistake *blushes* harry is selfLESS while being selfish about non hero-y things *grins sheepishly* all better! :D
Name: Ms.Malfoy reviewed
Rude Awakening on Mar 22, 2006 05:53 pm
Wanted to tell you I enjoy your writing. If you're still looking for a beta, I'd love to help you out. I don't have any work of my own up, but I'm actually a bit of a grammar freak and I've read just about everything out there. favoringcynocracy@gmail.com
Author's Response: thank you! :D
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Rude Awakening on Mar 15, 2006 06:20 pm
Hey! I know that I've already reviewed this chapter, but if you still need a beta reader I would be more than willing to help.
I'm in college and so I might not be able to return your stories as fast as a checkmated beta might, but I would try my best if you still need one.
my e-mail is kaitlynsanzo@yahoo.com .
Update this story soon!
Author's Response: thanks! :D
Name: Cathryn Aeiran reviewed
Rude Awakening on Mar 07, 2006 07:00 pm
Hmmm...I wonder where this will end up at.
Author's Response: hopefully in the realm of good with many, many, many reviews. thank you fo ryour review :D
Name: dawn03 reviewed
Rude Awakening on Feb 28, 2006 07:50 pm
I really like the way this story is going. It is different then a lot of the Draco/Ginny stories I have read. I can't wait to see how Ginny handels America and when Harry gets his due. And if she wasn't kidnapped, what really did happen to her?
Name: dawn03 reviewed
Rude Awakening on Feb 28, 2006 07:50 pm
I really like the way this story is going. It is different then a lot of the Draco/Ginny stories I have read. I can't wait to see how Ginny handels America and when Harry gets his due. And if she wasn't kidnapped, what really did happen to her?
Author's Response: Thank you! and in answer to the what really happened...she just left. she got sick of everything and left.
Name: ElvenPrincess reviewed
Rude Awakening on Feb 28, 2006 10:23 am
omgody!! this is sooo cool!! DIE HARRY!! yeah so well done and good luck with your next chappie!
Author's Response: thankyou :D
Name: Biteys reviewed
Rude Awakening on Feb 28, 2006 05:38 am
I love it. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: thankyou! :D
Name: razzle_be_dazzled reviewed
Rude Awakening on Feb 27, 2006 10:59 am
Keep it up, keep it up. *Does a little dance to go with chant* Keep it up...
Author's Response: thank you:D
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Rude Awakening on Feb 26, 2006 04:41 pm
Heavens, this story is great! Of course, Harry would jump to conclusions... because he couldn't possibly be what she was leaving.... she 'had' to be kidnapped... What a git! ;) Can't wait for more! ;)
Author's Response: lol! im glad your enjoying it!!! :D
Name: Meg reviewed
Rude Awakening on Feb 26, 2006 04:32 pm
1) No wonder she left Harry. He's an arsehole. 2) Her whole family is nutters except Bill. 3) It must be bad if she's rather be an Muggle in LA (of all godforsaken places - no offense to anyone from LA!) Do you think she has enough Muggle money for all the plastic surgery and gym fees she's going to need to fit in? (just joking - sort of) 4) Please tell me that wasn't Draco in her flashback. Please... 5) Am awaiting your next update!
Author's Response: re 3) money is actually expanded on in either chapter 3 or 4 (i hvnt decided yet) and ive neva even been to LA so my LA is just that, my little rose coloured glasses, only seen it in movies and entertainment tonight LA... re 4) sorry. re-read the flashbacks in both trapped and rude awakening it becomes very clear who it is. I tried very hard to make them very similar... re 5) im halfway throu so (hopefully) it wont be too long before I update! Thank you for your review! :D
Name: Akire3 reviewed
Rude Awakening on Feb 26, 2006 07:58 am
AYAYYAAI! ohh, i so need to read the next chapter, great job, Harry seems like a jerk, and poor Bill no one believes him, oh i wonder how Ginny is going to like Los Angeles. wweeee! :) :) :) :)
Author's Response: im glad you need! im monumentally flattered. thanks for the review:D
Name: flame_kitty reviewed
Rude Awakening on Feb 26, 2006 07:21 am
I wish I could help you, but I'm having beta troubles of my own at the moment!
If you want you can try www.checkmated.com
They have certified betas just waiting to fix your stories for free!
Author's Response: Thankyou :D
Name: zenophile reviewed
Rude Awakening on Feb 26, 2006 06:23 am
hey! this is great stuff- i hope you keep writing more to this- post soon!!
Author's Response: Thankyou! im about half way throu the chapter so hopefully it will be up soon :D
Name: Kisou reviewed
Rude Awakening on Feb 25, 2006 08:06 pm
I'd be willing to beta for you, but I'm really busy, so I'm not always quick at getting things done. If you don't mind that, email me at priorincantatem@gmail.com. Oh, and if you want to check if I know what I'm doing, I suggest you talk to Airmid. I'm currently betaing for her fic "Why Me?".
Author's Response: thankyou :D
Name: Kisou reviewed
Rude Awakening on Feb 25, 2006 08:04 pm
I'd be willing to beta for you, but I'm really busy, so I'm not allways quick at getting things done. If you don't mind that, email me at priorincantatem@gmail.com. Oh, and if you want to check if I know what I'm doing, I suggest you talk to Armid. I'm currently betaing for her fic "Why Me?".
Name: ElvenPrincess reviewed
Trapped on Feb 21, 2006 10:19 am
omg! that was awesome...really good. i cant wait for another chapter, well done and good luck. i would apply for the beta thing but may grammer can do with a lot of technical adjustments.....just ignore those long words please lol...but cant wait again!! good luck
Author's Response: thank you im glad you like. i found betas so that ok. hope you keep reading and reviewing! :D
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
Trapped on Feb 20, 2006 02:48 am
I'll tell you what I've told everyone else I've reviewed today...I'm not sure if I reveiwed the last time I read this as I've been having computer problems. So, if this is the second review I've left for this chapter, I hope you enjoy them both!
I love how you've made Harry so imperfect and Ginny so passive. I think it's very believable to have them this way because this is what war and hard times commonly do to people. Good job!
Off to the next chapter!
Author's Response: thank you very much! i do appreciate both reviews muchly and encourage you to keep reviewing coz of the tingling feeling i get from reviews. im glad you like my characterization! i hope you keep liking it as they (hopefully) evolve. :D
Name: Reader reviewed
Trapped on Feb 19, 2006 04:59 am
Great story, can't wait till you update!
Author's Response: Thanx!! :D
Name: suzymaholic reviewed
Trapped on Feb 17, 2006 08:53 pm
This is really intriguing. Nice job at that. I like your diction, it's not boring. Your depiction of Malfoy is very well done...the thing that he regrets doing is plausible to me. Nice
Author's Response: Thank you! im immensely glad that i dont bore you! im glad you like it!! thank you for your review :D
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Trapped on Feb 17, 2006 04:02 pm
It was really good. I am eagerly awaiting the update.
Author's Response: Thankyou! :D