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Name: Stella reviewed Home Away From Home on May 30, 2006 12:39 pm
I love your story! Keep writing.
Name: Funnykido reviewed Home Away From Home on May 29, 2006 07:05 am
I think this is the first time I've reviewed . . . . Although I've reread this story at least three times . . . . Lol, I'm a very bad person.

My favorite part of the whole story is when Draco accuses Ginny of seduction, but then later when he tells her to perform legilimancy (Probably butchered that spelling) and then Ginny goes, 'Oh! Who's seducing who now?'

And I love all this interaction - I think somebody pointed it out before - that they act a bit like a married couple. Not a bickering old married couple like Ron and Hermione, but it's very, very cute. I love how Draco's always trying to protect her or boss her around, but then she can just so easily completely just take his control away and make him putty in her hands. Ginny putting the balm on Draco's sexy injuries being a good example of this.

I especially loved how he's all putty and everything and just so effected by her, and then later he just acts like nothing happened.

And then every time Ginny tries to coerce him into doing something, he just seems so vulnerable. Almost like a Puppy!Draco. Lol.

And dude, how cool would it be to have a chapter from Draco's POV?

But, you're the writer, lol, and as I am utterly in love with your story, I find myself under your command, lol.

But . . anyways . . . if you don't have a beta, and you want one of course, I'm offering my services! Out of a completely . . . selfless . . . motive, of course, heh. But anyways, if you need one, my emails yellowpages20@yahoo.com and I would love to do it. Like, begging-you-on-my-kness-I'll-pay-you-to-let-me love it.
Name: Funnykido reviewed Home Away From Home on May 29, 2006 07:04 am
I think this is the first time I've reviewed . . . . Although I've reread this story at least three times . . . . Lol, I'm a very bad person.

My favorite part of the whole story is when Draco accuses Ginny of seduction, but then later when he tells her to perform legilimancy (Probably butchered that spelling) and then Ginny goes, 'Oh! Who's seducing who now?'

And I love all this interaction - I think somebody pointed it out before - that they act a bit like a married couple. Not a bickering old married couple like Ron and Hermione, but it's very, very cute. I love how Draco's always trying to protect her or boss her around, but then she can just so easily completely just take his control away and make him putty in her hands. Ginny putting the balm on Draco's sexy injuries being a good example of this.

I especially loved how he's all putty and everything and just so effected by her, and then later he just acts like nothing happened.

And then every time Ginny tries to coerce him into doing something, he just seems so vulnerable. Almost like a Puppy!Draco. Lol.

And dude, how cool would it be to have a chapter from Draco's POV?

But, you're the writer, lol, and as I am utterly in love with your story, I find myself under your command, lol.

But . . anyways . . . if you don't have a beta, and you want one of course, I'm offering my services! Out of a completely . . . selfless . . . motive, of course, heh. But anyways, if you need one, my emails yellowpages20@yahoo.com and I would love to do it. Like, begging-you-on-my-kness-I'll-pay-you-to-let-me love it.
Name: Katrina_M reviewed Home Away From Home on May 26, 2006 04:26 pm
oh, I do hope that you update soon! I have really started to love this story! I have waited a very long time, I think that it would be VERY AWESOME of you to update quickly! this is by far my favorite fanfiction to date! I cant wait until it is finished! I really really enjoying the part wear Draco does a little playful teasing! that was classic. I really do hope you update soon, i'm excited for this long awaited kiss! keep up the good work!
Name: Saaraneth reviewed Home Away From Home on May 25, 2006 03:31 pm
*anticipation* XD Favorite part? I'll get back to you on that one~
Name: Katrina_M reviewed Home Away From Home on May 23, 2006 01:54 pm
PLEASE PLEASE update! lol im going crazy not knowing what happens next!
Name: Gabby reviewed Home Away From Home on May 07, 2006 02:22 am
Hey i realy like your story! i know you asked for us to comment on our favourite part, but i really love all of it. please please update soon!
-gabz
Name: xXDreamerXx reviewed Home Away From Home on May 01, 2006 10:12 am
I love this story, it's amazing. Update soon, I can't wait!
Name: xXDreamerXx reviewed Home Away From Home on May 01, 2006 10:12 am
I love this story, it's amazing. Update soon, I can't wait!
Name: Claire reviewed Home Away From Home on Apr 30, 2006 02:23 pm
omg it's sooo good! please keep going! please please please please
Name: catapults reviewed Home Away From Home on Apr 29, 2006 07:36 pm
I really wish you would update! I understand that you have a real life and all, but I seriously love this characterization. Draco hasn't completly changed, and Ginny is still hard-headed. Please continue soon.
Name: xXdg0xzXx reviewed Home Away From Home on Apr 27, 2006 05:23 am
OMG I luurrrrve this story!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Name: xXdg0xzXx reviewed Home Away From Home on Apr 27, 2006 05:22 am
OMG I luurrrrve this story!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Name: WG reviewed Home Away From Home on Apr 19, 2006 12:29 pm
Poor Ginny... will she turn into a klutz every time she likes a chap?!!

Fab writing though... can't wait for more!
Name: torndeception reviewed Home Away From Home on Apr 15, 2006 10:43 am
I'm glad that they haven't kissed yet... UST is my favorite part about Draco/Ginny- the slow build up, the denial... *sigh* it's great.

Goodness, I don't know where to begin on favorite lines... most of them have already been mentioned in the reviews before me. Oh well.

Draco laughed at this. "You're underage. Therefore you still answer to your parents."

I rolled my eyes at that- he's only a year older... the snob. ; )

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"I was..." Her voice dropped to a whisper and she looked down at her fidgeting fingers. "Just smelling your cologne."

"Weasley!" He looked scandalized.

Hehehehe... it reminds me of my friend and her boyfriend. She's constantly borrowing his sweatshirt so she can smell it during class, and whenever she's around him she makes it a point to sniff him at least once. (After rereading that, I realized it sounds rather weird).

Anyway, I just thought it was funny that Draco was so scandalized about her *smelling* him when she just *licked* him.
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I basically loved the whole Florence Nightingale moment, twas teh sexiness... I bet Draco won't protest to her healing him anymore ; )... I also thought it was really cute that they sort of look after each other, kind of like a married couple. (examples- her buttoning his shirt for him, him stepping in front of her to protect her when they heard someone enter the house... little things like that).
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The butterdish incident was classic. Now, if only Harry had been there to see it. T'would have been total jealousy.

Speaking of which, I can't wait until Harry's next visit. Ginny needs to shut him down. Draco should overhear it. Oh it would be wonderful.
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I think that this is the first time I've reviewed this fic. Wow, that makes me feel really guilty. Just to let you know- I've been reading it from chapter one... and eagerly read the chapters to follow as soon as you updated. Wow, if this is my first time reviewing- I'm sorry, I'm a jerk. Forgive me? :-/
Name: Cap reviewed Home Away From Home on Apr 07, 2006 06:17 pm
I am checking the site 3 times a day for your next update. I am hooked. This is a great story and ....I cannot wait until their feelings for each other start to sizzle a little hotter.
Name: claire reviewed Home Away From Home on Apr 07, 2006 05:39 pm
ooo steamy! love it can't wait for the next chapter. hopefully this review will inspire you to hurry it up. just kidding, take your time! keep up the good work.
Name: Vicki reviewed Home Away From Home on Apr 07, 2006 03:48 am
Oooh, I just read the whole story so far and loved it! I love all the anticipation you're building up with the readers waiting for the kiss. I think with two many stories like this the authors establish a romantic relationship too quickly so I doesn't seem realistic. But the way you're writing this so far works really well, and feels as if it could happen to me. Keep going with it!
Name: sunflower reviewed Home Away From Home on Mar 31, 2006 10:48 am
NICE WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!=D

Author's Response: OMG thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;-)
Name: Pajama Pants reviewed Home Away From Home on Mar 30, 2006 03:52 pm
I can't believe I just read 15 excellent chapters... and there hasn't been a single kiss. Great work though... I'll wait patiently.

Author's Response: Thanks for waiting! And for the review!
Name: corvidae reviewed Home Away From Home on Mar 29, 2006 10:15 pm
yay! this is getting better actually, i love the way you tease! and i have to say that everytime draco accuses ginny of seduction it is hilarious. they are both in so much denial and he reveals himself to have a delicate constitution! ooooh, but the butter dish scene made me clap my hands and say "clever girl" to the screen. that was a NICE touch. keep up the good work. *-*

Author's Response: Ah, the butter dish. Yeah, Draco's not only in denial, but he's a bit more attuned to reality at this point than Ginny, who's had boyfriends and makeouts and stuff like that. Let's see how it plays out and if Ginny can convince Draco that they have something indeed very special.
Name: spider reviewed Home Away From Home on Mar 29, 2006 06:42 pm
Hermione's: "Tonks? Is that you?" and Draco's: "Seducing me, or whatever it is you're doing." were definitely the funniest lines this chapter.

Both times he's said it have cracked me up because it seems as though he's dead set on thinking that Ginny is after him - which now, of course, she is, but only because he refused her efforts.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Stay tuned! More to come... thanks for the review
Name: luvreluv reviewed Home Away From Home on Mar 29, 2006 11:20 am
Nice addition. Do you have a beta? I don't know if someone's already pointed it out, but the parts at the end where you mention Ginny blowing on Draco's burn with a "cool breath" are slightly confusing. Especially the part about her mother's burn. so, there you are. A review. Loving your story, by the way. Seeya!

Author's Response: I'm contemplating a beta. I realize some bits can be confusing. I write on WordPad, which doesn't have a spell check or anything! I'm surprised I don't have more spelling or grammar mistakes! I try to correct them, when I spot them. Anyway, thanks for the review!
Name: dooki reviewed Home Away From Home on Mar 29, 2006 09:59 am
I really liked when Draco walked in on Ginny smelling his pillow! So cute! As for this chapter I'm kinda glad they didn't kiss, makes it more believable.
Name: dooki reviewed Home Away From Home on Mar 29, 2006 09:26 am
I really liked when Draco walked in on Ginny smelling his pillow! So cute! As for this chapter I'm kinda glad they didn't kiss, makes it more believable.

Author's Response: Hehe, yeah. I think she really likes his smell. It's something very different from her brothers and Harry, who stick with regular old soap. Draco's got something different, a little exotic to him, with this cologne. I imagine it spells like Ralph Lauren Polo Black. Which is the scent that makes me all mushy-kneed.
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