Reviews For My Bane
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed Christmas: Part 2 on Oct 18, 2006 12:11 pm
ach
no evil-turned-good draco??
no?

Author's Response: No.
Name: Kisou reviewed Christmas: Part 2 on Oct 17, 2006 09:27 pm
That was a little too sudden for my liking. What happened to Ginny's backbone? She wouldn't give in that easily, and I don't think she would admit to Draco she was in love with him at this point, if she's even admit it to herself. I would have played her unsure what to say. This scene may need to happen, in a way, but this is not the right way. It happened too soon. I shouldn't have to say that this far into a story, but the way this has been playing, that's the truth.

Sorry if I'm ruining your birthday. I've really liked the rest of this story, and I think you deserve to know what I think of this. That's why I review. So, despite this scene, I'm going to keep up faith that there may still be something good to come. Please pull Ginny back together - if she's not there, this isn't D/G and shouldn't be posted here, right?

Author's Response: Meh, I've told you before: I like your reviews because they're blunt. And no, I don't think there's any chance you could've ruined my birthday ;)
Name: Rashonda reviewed Christmas: Part 2 on Oct 17, 2006 04:38 pm
Happy Early Birthday!

As always, I enjoy this story and it's pace. Though his declaration seemed a bit rushed but that's just me and this is your story. So, I gather that Bella/Cissa was in on Draco stupefying Isendre/Ginny? They were acting way to sneaky. I am beginning to miss my Sirius though :( I hope he had a nice Christmas break. Great as usual, looking forward as always.

And again. Happy. Happy. Happy. Birthday!

Author's Response: Ha ha, alright, I'll bring Sirius back in soon. Thanks for the birthday wishes! I'm glad SOMEONE reads the Author's Notes ;)
Name: dgloves70 reviewed Christmas: Part 2 on Oct 17, 2006 04:18 pm
Squish squish and more squishes! I am so glad that they realized that they needed one another FINALLY! What is going to happen and what about them returning to the present? Oh the horror waiting to see what will come in the next chapter! Three stars!

Author's Response: Ha ha, thank you! I can honestly say that I've never gotten 'squish' written in a review for me before ;)
Name: dgloves70 reviewed Christmas: Part 1 on Oct 04, 2006 05:04 am
I knew it was a matter of time before we met the Prewitt's! I cannot wait to see what is going to happen at the Christmas party and also what is going to happen with Ginny and Sirius. Is there going to be a fight between Sirius and Draco aka Erik? I can't wait!

Author's Response: Well, I can't just TELL you, can I? Actually, I have no idea myself at this point. I'm rewriting parts of the fic as I go; Sirius never originally had anything more than a minor part.
Name: Kisou reviewed Christmas: Part 1 on Oct 03, 2006 09:39 pm
Okay, so is this a fantasy!Draco, or do we have a good explanation for that amazingly romantic letter. Because we had better, don't you think. I mean, I know Draco likes her, but that doesn't quite seem like his style. I dunno.

Good work anyway. This is really fun.

Author's Response: . . . did you not get that Narcissa and Bellatrix are coaxing him along and telling him what to say? Because otherwise, yeah, that would be TOTALLY un-Draco. Thanks for reviewing :D
Name: Rashonda reviewed Christmas: Part 1 on Oct 03, 2006 08:55 am
I liked the description of the dress, it was very visual. So, Sirius's brother has a thing for Ginny/Isendre how cute. So, I assume that he's closer to Cissa/Bella than Sirius is? And, what was up with that exchange between Isendre/Xavier was he just being a polite host, or was he making a overture at her? Anyway, great update. Take as long as you need, school is hectic I know. :)

Author's Response: Oh, Xavier was just being a polite host. And yeah, Regulus is the 'good son.' ;)
Name: imelda reviewed Plans on Sep 16, 2006 08:52 pm
This is really intriguing! I feel sorry for Ginny, surrounded by all these nasty Slytherins. I find myself wanting her to spend all her time with Sirius!

I hope you update soon, as soon as the site comes back online!

Author's Response: Yeah, I know it's a far shot from 'soon,' but I might be able to squeeze in an update today.
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed Plans on Sep 12, 2006 08:32 pm
Ha Ha Ha! I giggled out loud at:

“Since Dumbledore thought we weren’t doing our job well enough.”
“Were you?”
“No.”

OF course not! She was too busy snogging Lucius... (And who WOULDN'T want to snog a young Jason Issacs?) ;)

And darn it, I though I was the queen of ‘get away from me you plebian scum'.

The Chapter was great! Short, but great!

Can't wait for Christmas! ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! I loved writing that line :D Exactly! I mean, it's Jason Freakin' Issacs!
Name: shelly reviewed Plans on Sep 11, 2006 02:38 pm
write more

Author's Response: ok
Name: Lottie reviewed Plans on Sep 08, 2006 07:07 pm
Yay! I love reading your updates! They're so entertaining! I wonder what he's going to buy her?

Author's Response: Thanks! Ha ha, I know what it is. . .
Name: Rashonda reviewed Plans on Sep 06, 2006 04:54 am
Sirius is just a bit forward isn't he? Spend, Christmas with me, when then they become 'friends'? I hope we get a chance to read about Cissa and Bella's parents, I wonder what they were like, Christmas should be interesting since everyone is paired up.

Author's Response: Well, see, it was originally Lily, and she figured it out, or something like that, and I was too tired to do a total rewrite, so I just edited it.
Name: shelly reviewed Nighttime Confessions on Sep 04, 2006 05:52 am
keep writing pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Author's Response: Ha ha, I will. Thanks for reviewing! :D
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed Nighttime Confessions on Aug 21, 2006 10:58 am
Really good. How much did Sirius hear? Ginny's lash out at Sirius was VERY convincing as a Slytherin. Anyway, great work... can't wait for more! ;)

Author's Response: Thank you! You'll find out within the next couple days :D
Name: fallenwitch reviewed Nighttime Confessions on Aug 16, 2006 05:15 pm
"Ginny glanced at Sirius's serious gray eyes." "Sirius's serious"! I had to read that one twice - v. subtle and v. funny!

Sirius and Ginny/Isendre are fabulous. Sirius adds just the right mix of gentle testosterone to the fic.

The problem I have with this chapter, and you may have stated it before, but I was too dim to notice it, is your self-characterization of the Slytherins as "evil". I don't see them as seeing themselves in this light. I think they conceptualize the world differently from Gryffindors - that's all. A bit more cunning and not afraid to use darker means to get to the end they want, but evil? For me, that didn't work, but I enjoyed this chapter anyway. They can keep calling themselves evil for the rest of the fic, and I suspect I'll just keep reading along, enjoying myself.

Draco's turn at the end was interesting. I was wondering if he wasn't projecting his own feelings onto Ginny rather than giving an accurate portrayl of her feelings for him. I think he's more in love with her than she's in love with him. We'll see. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :D
Name: leelee reviewed Nighttime Confessions on Aug 16, 2006 02:42 pm
like it so far i hope you consider my idea but i still love your story

Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Nighttime Confessions on Aug 16, 2006 11:48 am
What?! This chapter ended so suddenly! What's going on?
Update soon please!

Author's Response: Well, I can't just TELL you, can I? That'd ruin all the fun for me :D
Name: Rashonda reviewed Nighttime Confessions on Aug 16, 2006 07:25 am
Oh. So, I get it. Draco is going about getting her the 'honest' route by confessing his past misdeeds interesting. It's understandle that Ginny is pissed off, I would be if I'd learned of a plan trying to woo me over to the darkside. I know they'll work it out. But onto Isendre/Sirius he's such a compassionate guy, if time was on their side she'd surely end up with him. GJ as usual. :)

Author's Response: Ha ha, thanks. I love your reviews; they're so funny :D
Name: laina reviewed Pureblood Knowledge on Aug 16, 2006 04:43 am
i have a good idea for you, when ginny finds out about draco's trying to marry her she comes up with an idea that since he doesnt want to marry her and she can't marry him he should marry isendra and they marry that way but she's still inlove with him maybe you can use that

Author's Response: The story's already all written, though I'm changing a lot as I go. I don't know, I might end up using it. If I do, I'll give you credit. Thanks for the idea!
Name: leelee reviewed Pureblood Knowledge on Aug 15, 2006 08:53 am
write quick this story rocks and i want to hear more

Author's Response: Thanks! There's a new chapter up now.
Name: fallenwitch reviewed Pureblood Knowledge on Aug 08, 2006 09:53 pm
Pureblooded hormones made this a most interesting chapter. Loved the bit with Sirius and Isendre. As well as the last bit where Draco get a bit of a conscience. Draco with a conscience is always a favorite of mine. Adds a nice dimension to his character and, in this case, show the development of his feeling, other than sexual, for GInny/Isendre.

Author's Response: Exactly! I really liked writing this chapter; it was LOADS of fun.
Name: Persephone33 reviewed Pureblood Knowledge on Aug 08, 2006 04:34 am
I love this story! Very creative, interweaving time and different eras into Draco and Ginny's romance.
Can't wait for more!


Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: PenelopeWeasley reviewed Pureblood Knowledge on Aug 07, 2006 09:25 pm
Can't wait to read the rest of the story! I'm loving the storyline, it's different.

Author's Response: Thanks! I like to hear that :D
Name: ronlover reviewed Pureblood Knowledge on Aug 07, 2006 05:06 pm
Great. Update soon. =D

Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Pureblood Knowledge on Aug 07, 2006 04:49 pm
Ooh! Where are they going?! More kisses?!
And it's sad that they don't believe she's a good Slytherin, but maybe that will be a stronger case for her getting dis-owned?
Update soon!

Author's Response: Ha ha, I love your reviews; they're so funny. :D
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