:D at Draco checking out Ginny's panties! Love it! Poor Ginny, but love it! Also Draco leaving the tingling sensation!
Great job! I am mad at Claire. Why didn't she try to help Ginny! *growls* Spectacular finish! I love Draco's las line!
Hey, I just reviewed over at FA, but I thought your story was so good that I decided to check a couple other sites, to see if you'd uploaded more chapters. You can imagine how happy I was when I found it here!
I love this chapter, despite how pained I feel for Ginny. The end is absolutely chilling and very Malfoy-esque: "She could feel him behind her, could feel the warmth of his breath against her neck as he leaned down closer, practically whispering in her ear. “You have my respect. And my promise that we’re just going to try even harder tomorrow.”"
I LOVE IT! I can't wait to read the rest =)
- Simone
Oh my gosh. Poor Ginny! Well written chapter!
This is really quite fascinating how you've fit this plot into Harry Potter. I don't think I've ever read a fic even close to this before. And that is amazing considering that I read fics for a couple hours a day when I have the chance.
Keep it up. I'd love to give you a decent suggestion, but the truth is that I was too into the fic to read it like a beta with a small part of the back of my mind as I usually do.
It should be interesting to see her attractions move from Blaise to Draco. I keep trying to decide whether I want Ginny and Blaise to kiss before it happens. Ah, well, obviously my mind is running away with itself. Still, it will be much better if you write it, so you really should get on it before I end up putting Luna and Snape together or the like. *_*
I like how draco told her that she's earned his respect. Definitely adds a different touch from HYD.
update soon!
This is probably one of the most amazing fics I have read in a long time. It is engrossing, descriptive, and absolutely wonderful. Your character's and plot are so layered, and entirely believable. You have me dying to find out what happens next!
I have to admit... I keep waiting for Ginny to haul off and punch someone. As much as she's just trying to keep a low profile, I still have a feeling that Weasley temper will errupt at some point. I'm loving this and I can't wait for the next chapter.
This is definitely entertaining! I can't wait for more!
I think you should know that because of you, I have a new obsession. I watched the whole HYD in 2 days! XD Thanks!
Haha, the "CRACK AU" is being enjoyed very well. Poor Ginny; torture at the hands of other students has never looked so bad...
It's interesting that Draco has interest in Ginny, and it makes me think that maybe he noticed her before. It'll also be interesting to see how Draco reacts if he ever finds out that Blaise isn't being as malicious to Ginny as Slytherins would prefer.
Hmm, this AU actually comes pretty close to what I always thought the canon version of Hogwarts during Umbridge's era would've been like, ie., quite infuriating! Another thing that struck me is how similar your character of Ginny is to JKR's Luna---not for her dreamy preoccupation with magical, perhaps imaginary beasts or her odd mannerisms, but because they are both persecuted. And if Luna's tormenters seemed sneakier and more underhanded, it is only because your AU openly supports the persecution of Ginny.
I've never read/watched this other book/program that you've incorporated, so I don't know how much the two stories overlap but the power of these bullies, the way the other students and professors cooperate with her torment, and even Claire's betrayal all chime with RL experiences of school children in many settings, so your story has a lot of emotional impact. The magic just adds the extra element of power to be abused. Congratulations on combining all these elements to make a powerful story. I look forward to the moment when Ginny comes into her own!
The AU is quite odd, but I am enjoying the story. Poor Ginny. And I suspect things will get worse before they get better. I'm looking forward to seeing how.
Very nice, interesting concept, I really enjoyed reading this and hope you can update soon.
I really liked it, and I hope you're not going to adhere TOO faithfully to the series because although it's good, I really dislike the Draco-character in that one... but it seems like you're adding your own stuff, I'm looking forward to the next one!