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why did you stop
I just came across this story today. And, I am really enjoying it. I love that particular line when Draco tells Ginny he'd drink the poison she gave him.
wow:: amazing story, i only wish that it were finished! its was truly something i enjoyed reading.......
oo, this story is really good so far.....
I love this fic. The last sentence was great with her trying to figure out what's wrong with her. Hope you update soon because this is a great fic that deserves to be continued.
good update soon
fabby, is there more?
i liked how you showed draco starting to like ginny, it didn't seem forced.
Great story. Can't wait to read more. Good Luck with it! :)
I don't think they would have demolished and gotten rid of Slytherin House, but that is my personal opinion as I love the concept of Slytherin. Good fic so far though, and I will carry on with the rest of it!
Author's Response: I love the concept of Slytherin too, trust me! I'm a big D/P fan! So I don't really know why I felt the need to get rid of Slytherin. It just happened as I wrote. I guess I needed a convienient way to get rid of most of the older Slytherins, and an excuse for Draco to get his own room, without having to resort to making him HeadBoy.
Wonderful chapter. I loved the way you portrayed Draco's growing attraction to Ginny and his increasing awareness of what Potter does and does not mean to her. And Ginny's equally powerful thoughts about Draco. Subtle and real. None of this waking up one morning head over heads in love with one another. Nicely done. Looking forward to more. -fallenwitch
Author's Response: I was trying to get Draco and Ginny together quicker, if only for my own personal gratification. *Sigh*, they just refused to be pushed. Lol. I do hate the way in some fics, they are completely in hate, dream about each other, and wake up as soulmates, completely and sappily in love! So maybe I'm grateful they're taking their time about things, even if it's a little more gradual than I had intended.
Write more, that's all I have to say! Just kidding! Well done! I like how you ended this chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! And don't worry. There will be more!
I loved it!!!
I loved it!!!
Really good! I'm off to read more, he he!
Really good! I'm off to read more, he he!
More...more...yay! This is good stuff
Author's Response: Thanks, but I think you flatter me...
I really like this story. Question: wouldn't someone say something about his smoking?
Author's Response: Hey, glad you like the fic so far. Who were you thinking would say something abbout the smoking? I don't imagine any teachers in Hogsmeade. Plus I figured that they're not exactly on school premises at the time, Draco's old enough to smoke legally if he wants, and even if he wasn't allowed, lets face it, he probably still would!
In my honest opinion there have been few stories, recently, that are just starting out that have enough draw to them to compell me to write a review. That is not to say there are not many good or even great stories currently, as there are, but not so many that spark me to comment, yours (obviously)has. Your story has a great deal of carisma, showing Draco in not completely a "poor me" light. There is a tad bit of that but just enough that he seems ready to take control rather than boohoo over everything....I hope that he continues to develop in that way. I was concerned at first with the poor, mousey Ginny but I am enjoying you helping her grow up and be more assertive. One of the asspects I have liked most is your wonderful concept of timing. That is very hard to control when writing, to keep the story flowing at an even pace, not to fast not to slow, I got to the end of this chapter and saw that there was no link to a next one and thought '....darn it, well crap..." I wanted to keep reading...that is when I know that a story is really very well written, that I was pulled into their world and felt sullen when I was ripped out of it...I look forward to reading more...soon I hope....Kristine....P.S. With all that talent and creativity, couldn't you come up with a better name for Draco's owl than Dragonet? ...lol...just wondering... = )
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for your considered review. I'm glad you like it so far. Don't worry, Draco won't be one of these 'Woe is me!' characters- I hate it when he's written like that...and neither will Ginny, she does start to stick up for herself. You'll see what happens, LOL! About Draco's owl, you made me laugh... I know it's not very creative of me, but I loved Ray Stevenson's character in the film King Arthur, and called it after him. It's Dagonet, not Dragonet, but looking at it now I'm laughing because I didn't even realise people would think I named it similar to Draco. (Am feeling stupid!)
this is really good!!!Update asap!! Oh and ONE question. Where do the slytherins sit at meals if the house doesn't exist?
Author's Response: Oh yeah, I had written in the first chapter that there are so few Slytherins left, and no new ones, so they sit at a relatively small table (not a proper one like the rest of the houses have), at the back of the Great Hall. It was written in a paragraph that I didn't really like so I took it out. Forgot to add it elsewhere. Oops! Now you know. Thanx.
“Kitten, if I were your boyfriend, I’d drink it.”!!!! That was my favorite line! Keep going, I love this, absolutely love it!
Author's Response: I forgot to write a note at the end, but I meant to admit to stealing so many famous lines and lines from films. There are so many that I included- I'm a big lazy line stealer! The quote you've commented on is one by Winston Churchill. I liked it too, and thought it was perfect for Draco!
very nice update. ginny's interaction with the trio and draco were great. accolades *salutes*
Author's Response: Thanks again for reviewing!
nice update. looking foward to the next. youve set up dracos character very well. i like the formatting too :D update soon. accolades *salutes*
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you brought my attention to fixing it!
seems to be going good, look forward to reading more and getting into the plot! :)
Author's Response: Thanks.
I like it so far. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks.